for Digimon the Ultimate battle12/21/2011 c1 blakopslover
holy **ing crap you suck as much as a horny girl sucking a ** for the first time.you need more of these ″ around what people say and you need periods after people do or say something and you need to spell correctly like guard not guord
holy **ing crap you suck as much as a horny girl sucking a ** for the first time.you need more of these ″ around what people say and you need periods after people do or say something and you need to spell correctly like guard not guord
2/13/2005 c1 rfsdkuevmjadus
learn to spell
learn some grammer
learn to spell
learn some grammer
4/26/2004 c1 Chaosmon
Dude, the story is good. Yeah? But the punctuation and spelling is tough i couldn't complete the First Chapter. And btw who the hell is eggmon there is no such digimon. If u need help email me i am a digimon guy, and a buffy guy too
Dude, the story is good. Yeah? But the punctuation and spelling is tough i couldn't complete the First Chapter. And btw who the hell is eggmon there is no such digimon. If u need help email me i am a digimon guy, and a buffy guy too
3/3/2004 c1 
1eechan
Oh my god... I gave up after the first sentence. Please, for the love of God learn how to use COMAS, QUOTATION MARKS, PERIODS! This is nothing but one MASSIVE runon sentence broken into 8 parts! I understand that first time fics can be rough, but it's absolutely ridiculous that you managed not to include one single comma. You should get someone to pre-read this sort of thing before you upload it, beta-readers (pre-readers) are a way of ensuring that your story makes sense- is easy to follow- and english competent. I'd take this down and correct it right away. *sighs*
1eechanOh my god... I gave up after the first sentence. Please, for the love of God learn how to use COMAS, QUOTATION MARKS, PERIODS! This is nothing but one MASSIVE runon sentence broken into 8 parts! I understand that first time fics can be rough, but it's absolutely ridiculous that you managed not to include one single comma. You should get someone to pre-read this sort of thing before you upload it, beta-readers (pre-readers) are a way of ensuring that your story makes sense- is easy to follow- and english competent. I'd take this down and correct it right away. *sighs*
12/26/2003 c1 Matsuki-sensei
Don't continue! Please! *curls into a ball and cries* The horrible grammar and spelling! What did I do to deserve this?
Don't continue! Please! *curls into a ball and cries* The horrible grammar and spelling! What did I do to deserve this?
7/24/2003 c1 Matsuda-chan
What in the name of all things Davis? I mean, this was so desperatly hard to follow. The grammar... the horrible, horrible grammar...
Takuya: *just slowly blinks his eyes*
What in the name of all things Davis? I mean, this was so desperatly hard to follow. The grammar... the horrible, horrible grammar...
Takuya: *just slowly blinks his eyes*
7/23/2002 c1 20Celestra
Whoa there, I couldn't even the first paragraph your grammar and spelling is so bad! Believe, I couldn't read this. I did'nt make it through the first paragraph, let alone this whole fic. Learn so grammar, some punctuation and some spelling before you write another one pleae. I'm sure it's a wonderful plot but that won't mean anything if people can't read it. I don't mean to mean, really.
20CelestraWhoa there, I couldn't even the first paragraph your grammar and spelling is so bad! Believe, I couldn't read this. I did'nt make it through the first paragraph, let alone this whole fic. Learn so grammar, some punctuation and some spelling before you write another one pleae. I'm sure it's a wonderful plot but that won't mean anything if people can't read it. I don't mean to mean, really.
5/19/2001 c1 Arabella Skydancer
i like the story and would u PLEASE use PUNTUATIONS! and please take grammer class over.
i like the story and would u PLEASE use PUNTUATIONS! and please take grammer class over.
11/3/2000 c1 cat
ok I would LOVE
ok I would LOVE
8/8/2000 c1 maiserw
i's gonna be better if there was some commas or peroids and other signs.
i's gonna be better if there was some commas or peroids and other signs.
6/3/2000 c1 Alley Cat
Ummmmmmm...just wonderin', have you ever heard of quotation marks? It makes a story a lot easier to understand when you use them.
Ummmmmmm...just wonderin', have you ever heard of quotation marks? It makes a story a lot easier to understand when you use them.
5/29/2000 c1 Nobody
It's called Mega. Repeat after me. Mega. Also I think you failed Grammer and Spelling because I could hardly understand it. Also the digidesined don't curse
It's called Mega. Repeat after me. Mega. Also I think you failed Grammer and Spelling because I could hardly understand it. Also the digidesined don't curse