for Digimon the Ultimate battle5/2/2000 c1 The Dark Master
your story was good except it was hard to folow you need periods and these thing " around spech email me when you put those in so i can understand your story better well by
your story was good except it was hard to folow you need periods and these thing " around spech email me when you put those in so i can understand your story better well by
4/17/2000 c1 digiman
GREAT STORY!1I LOVED IT! HURRY UP WITH THE SEQUEL!DONT E-MAIL ME BACK PLEASE !
GREAT STORY!1I LOVED IT! HURRY UP WITH THE SEQUEL!DONT E-MAIL ME BACK PLEASE !
4/11/2000 c1 Brandy
spell and make no sense
spell and make no sense
4/11/2000 c1 Kyra
Kind of...um, confusing. The spacing. That was it. It seemed to be a pretty good fic, from the vague view that I got, but the spacing and the editing need work. Really. Other than that, I thought that the idea was pretty kewl
Kind of...um, confusing. The spacing. That was it. It seemed to be a pretty good fic, from the vague view that I got, but the spacing and the editing need work. Really. Other than that, I thought that the idea was pretty kewl
4/11/2000 c1 it2
I'm sorry, but I gave up after the second paragraph. My eyes hurt...and I made no sense of the story. You need to revise this...spelling and grammer mistakes are your main problem. Once again, I'm sorry, but I refuse to read the entire thing... ::shudders::
I'm sorry, but I gave up after the second paragraph. My eyes hurt...and I made no sense of the story. You need to revise this...spelling and grammer mistakes are your main problem. Once again, I'm sorry, but I refuse to read the entire thing... ::shudders::
4/11/2000 c1 Kira yalnami
ummm...What happened to the punctuation?
ummm...What happened to the punctuation?
4/11/2000 c1 StarDragon
I'm sorry, but this is awful! Grammar, spelling, dialog- it's all terribly done! Listen, if you need a beta-reader, I'm always available.
I'm sorry, but this is awful! Grammar, spelling, dialog- it's all terribly done! Listen, if you need a beta-reader, I'm always available.
4/11/2000 c1 Teknoman
What the hell was that? I couldn't tell who was talking when they stopped talking or when they started talking. Try including punctuation.
What the hell was that? I couldn't tell who was talking when they stopped talking or when they started talking. Try including punctuation.
4/11/2000 c1 Ultimate Anime Fan
It was really interesting...after I took three hours figuring out what it said. I mean, come on! The storyline's not bad, but the spelling and grammer...my language arts teacher would just die (I almost did). Anyway, nice story once it's translate into something readable!
It was really interesting...after I took three hours figuring out what it said. I mean, come on! The storyline's not bad, but the spelling and grammer...my language arts teacher would just die (I almost did). Anyway, nice story once it's translate into something readable!
4/11/2000 c1 Exavier
Sorry about the spelling problems and other stuff like that I guess I forgot to check the story next time ill try to be more carfull.
Sorry about the spelling problems and other stuff like that I guess I forgot to check the story next time ill try to be more carfull.
4/11/2000 c1 Matt I
what?-(0)
what?-(0)
4/11/2000 c1 digifan
very good but use exlamation marks and it's spelled Izzy
very good but use exlamation marks and it's spelled Izzy
4/11/2000 c1 tuffles
It was okay but a LOT of spelling mistakes, some words I couldn't recognize! I don't mind mind spelling that's readable but your spelling... Overall, it was anokay story, 3/5
It was okay but a LOT of spelling mistakes, some words I couldn't recognize! I don't mind mind spelling that's readable but your spelling... Overall, it was anokay story, 3/5