for Thoughts of a Destiny6/2/2012 c2 darkespeon11
rouk - the muse in abduction :D yeah, i'm reading the recoded version 'cause i stumbled upon it, and found out you're a real good writer!
rouk - the muse in abduction :D yeah, i'm reading the recoded version 'cause i stumbled upon it, and found out you're a real good writer!
4/2/2006 c8 Becky
Good story who the hell is mary sue?
Good story who the hell is mary sue?
4/2/2006 c10 Becky
You must finish this story
You must finish this story
4/2/2006 c11 Becky
No more chapters i've read to many with on endings great story
No more chapters i've read to many with on endings great story
4/2/2006 c5 Becky
Wow interesting hmgood story more chapters I think zim knows ravrin
Wow interesting hmgood story more chapters I think zim knows ravrin
4/2/2006 c1 Becky
Oh I bet Ravrin stops him great poem great story!
Oh I bet Ravrin stops him great poem great story!
3/9/2006 c11 TL
Mary Sue, try to make her less perfect.
I would love to see this turn into something other the Mary Sue fic one thousand on this site.
Yours,
TL.
Mary Sue, try to make her less perfect.
I would love to see this turn into something other the Mary Sue fic one thousand on this site.
Yours,
TL.
9/28/2004 c11 
4Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, I can certainly understand the bout of writer’s block you are suffering from, but fully believe you can work something out. (in other words, I don’t really have any good suggestions for you. sorry!) What you have written so far is wonderful. It is certainly an interesting story. I hope you are able to find your muse soon and continue it. Don’t give up, inspiration will come, eventually. - Ashsema
4AshsemaGreetings Ravwrin, I can certainly understand the bout of writer’s block you are suffering from, but fully believe you can work something out. (in other words, I don’t really have any good suggestions for you. sorry!) What you have written so far is wonderful. It is certainly an interesting story. I hope you are able to find your muse soon and continue it. Don’t give up, inspiration will come, eventually. - Ashsema
1/12/2004 c10 Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Oddly, I reviewed for chapter 9, though I don’t recall doing so. Well, it wasn’t a very in-depth review so I must have been in a hurry. To be honest, I don’t remember reading that chapter. (I must have brainworms! Gotta get that checked out!) Sorry this review is so late in coming. Time has never especially been my friend. Well, on with the reviews: I like how you have Ravwrin stick up for Dib. He could use it. And as for Zim, he doesn’t know how lucky he is. Concidering its Zim, that’s probably a good thing, his ego would undoubtedly get him in even greater trouble. – Yes, I like it. Interesting history on Ravwrin and Rouk. Poor Ravwrin, thought, ignorance is bliss and hers just left. Better to prepare her for the up and coming doom. Can’t help but wonder how Dib will fit into all of this. -Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Oddly, I reviewed for chapter 9, though I don’t recall doing so. Well, it wasn’t a very in-depth review so I must have been in a hurry. To be honest, I don’t remember reading that chapter. (I must have brainworms! Gotta get that checked out!) Sorry this review is so late in coming. Time has never especially been my friend. Well, on with the reviews: I like how you have Ravwrin stick up for Dib. He could use it. And as for Zim, he doesn’t know how lucky he is. Concidering its Zim, that’s probably a good thing, his ego would undoubtedly get him in even greater trouble. – Yes, I like it. Interesting history on Ravwrin and Rouk. Poor Ravwrin, thought, ignorance is bliss and hers just left. Better to prepare her for the up and coming doom. Can’t help but wonder how Dib will fit into all of this. -Ashsema
12/23/2003 c10 Ridge86
one word... nice...two words... write more...three words...good bye, Ridge86
one word... nice...two words... write more...three words...good bye, Ridge86
8/24/2003 c9 4Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, thanks for the update. Undoubtedly, chapter 9 will be worth the wait. Thanks again! - Ashsema
4AshsemaGreetings Ravwrin, thanks for the update. Undoubtedly, chapter 9 will be worth the wait. Thanks again! - Ashsema
7/24/2003 c8 The Author aka Ravwrin
*giggles happily* thank you all for your reviews! i love to hear from you all. i have a surprise in store for everyone too! but that has to wait till the next chap unfortunatly. i have to go to my grandmother's for the weekend and will not be back till monday i think so it is put on hold. and i hope you like the next chap too. i have wracked my little romance deprived mind (aka i don't read romances) to come up with a small likkle bitty peice of mush. not much but eh... thanks for reading!
~~Ravwrin
*giggles happily* thank you all for your reviews! i love to hear from you all. i have a surprise in store for everyone too! but that has to wait till the next chap unfortunatly. i have to go to my grandmother's for the weekend and will not be back till monday i think so it is put on hold. and i hope you like the next chap too. i have wracked my little romance deprived mind (aka i don't read romances) to come up with a small likkle bitty peice of mush. not much but eh... thanks for reading!
~~Ravwrin
7/24/2003 c8 Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Again destiny twines Ravwrin and Dib together, though I wonder how much of it is Rouk’s doing. It will be interesting to see how Zim captures Ravwrin. The assassin Gizil sure is a curious addition to the mix. Zim is in for a tough time. Rouk is indeed an intriguing character. It will be interesting to see how this story flows. Thanks for such an interesting story. – Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Again destiny twines Ravwrin and Dib together, though I wonder how much of it is Rouk’s doing. It will be interesting to see how Zim captures Ravwrin. The assassin Gizil sure is a curious addition to the mix. Zim is in for a tough time. Rouk is indeed an intriguing character. It will be interesting to see how this story flows. Thanks for such an interesting story. – Ashsema
7/24/2003 c7 Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Sorry for the delay in reviews, summer head causes lethargic tendencies. (Phht! yeah!, like I’m always on time anyway!) Roak seems to have a pretty level grasp on Ravwrin and Dib’s relationship, even if Ravwrin doesn’t. Her attraction towards Dib, and vise-versa seems almost soulmate-ish. Their destinies seemed tied together. You did a great job with Zim’s egotistical megalomaniac behaviors. Although he has feelings for her, he is willing to sacrifice her for his benefit, though it seems Zim is playing with fire. Lets hope he doesn’t get to badly burned. Thanks! – Ashsema
Greetings Ravwrin, Sorry for the delay in reviews, summer head causes lethargic tendencies. (Phht! yeah!, like I’m always on time anyway!) Roak seems to have a pretty level grasp on Ravwrin and Dib’s relationship, even if Ravwrin doesn’t. Her attraction towards Dib, and vise-versa seems almost soulmate-ish. Their destinies seemed tied together. You did a great job with Zim’s egotistical megalomaniac behaviors. Although he has feelings for her, he is willing to sacrifice her for his benefit, though it seems Zim is playing with fire. Lets hope he doesn’t get to badly burned. Thanks! – Ashsema