for TIE Fighter: Prime Wing (Revised Edition)2/17/2009 c1 CmdrMitthrawnuruodo
I had read this a long time ago on your homepage and enjoyed it then and still enjoy it now. I only read it again when a friend, GrandAdmiralJello, reminded me of it and I went searching for it again. Couldn't find it on Google so I thought to check on here and lo and behold here it is!
But wasn't there a third story you were writing and only had a few chapters up but never finished before you vanished on us all over at the JC and TFU?
I had read this a long time ago on your homepage and enjoyed it then and still enjoy it now. I only read it again when a friend, GrandAdmiralJello, reminded me of it and I went searching for it again. Couldn't find it on Google so I thought to check on here and lo and behold here it is!
But wasn't there a third story you were writing and only had a few chapters up but never finished before you vanished on us all over at the JC and TFU?
1/14/2008 c7 
39LadyRavena
Wonderful story! I had saved it to my hard drive a while back, and inhaled the whole thing in 2 sittings. The characters are believable and realistic, and Thrawn was spot on.
I like the conversations the most, and look forward to more of them.
39LadyRavenaWonderful story! I had saved it to my hard drive a while back, and inhaled the whole thing in 2 sittings. The characters are believable and realistic, and Thrawn was spot on.
I like the conversations the most, and look forward to more of them.
1/18/2002 c1 Mach 2 Makoto
Very impressive, i do have to say, you do know what you are doing. It's a clean cut story standing up to somthing following an imperial pilot. The seriousness is very imperial, I like that. Use my Mach2Makoto to find me on AIM, i do wish to talk to you some more about this.
Very impressive, i do have to say, you do know what you are doing. It's a clean cut story standing up to somthing following an imperial pilot. The seriousness is very imperial, I like that. Use my Mach2Makoto to find me on AIM, i do wish to talk to you some more about this.
6/18/2001 c2 Anonymousandnameless
Very good, very well written! The way you describe the battle, it almost felt as though I was playing TIE Fighter! I'm DEFINATELY putting this on my favorites list.
Very good, very well written! The way you describe the battle, it almost felt as though I was playing TIE Fighter! I'm DEFINATELY putting this on my favorites list.
5/4/2001 c7 26Rogue Knight1
What can I say? Much, much, better than Your Highlander fiction, almost on a par with Stackpole, definitely much better than Anderson. MORE!
26Rogue Knight1What can I say? Much, much, better than Your Highlander fiction, almost on a par with Stackpole, definitely much better than Anderson. MORE!
12/7/2000 c1 12Trent Roman
Sorry I didn't review the sixth part, but it was so captivating that I just had to read the ending right away. This series was excellant, though it does leave a good deal of unanswered questions. I can only guess that the next one answeres those questions. I really feel as if we've gotten to know Thelea throughout the course of the series, and look forward to reading more about her.
12Trent RomanSorry I didn't review the sixth part, but it was so captivating that I just had to read the ending right away. This series was excellant, though it does leave a good deal of unanswered questions. I can only guess that the next one answeres those questions. I really feel as if we've gotten to know Thelea throughout the course of the series, and look forward to reading more about her.
11/28/2000 c1 Trent Roman
A mystery even the great Thrawn cannot immediately pierce? Fascinating. I suspect this was the calm before the storm...
A mystery even the great Thrawn cannot immediately pierce? Fascinating. I suspect this was the calm before the storm...
11/22/2000 c1 Trent Roman
Plots, backstabs and intrigues: gotta love em. This is weaving itself into quite the tangled web, with our unfortunate pilots smack in the center. One thing, however: my books seem to use the term "Alderaanian" instead of "Alderaani".
Plots, backstabs and intrigues: gotta love em. This is weaving itself into quite the tangled web, with our unfortunate pilots smack in the center. One thing, however: my books seem to use the term "Alderaanian" instead of "Alderaani".
11/13/2000 c1 Trent Roman
Good, good. I've always found in the past that fanfiction tends to be rushed, but this moves along at a comfortable pace without lagging in action. It reads quite like a novel, actually. And I know somebody who had better beware the Dark Side... Hmm, wait, you're writing from the Imperial pespective, so... Embrace the Dark Side?
Good, good. I've always found in the past that fanfiction tends to be rushed, but this moves along at a comfortable pace without lagging in action. It reads quite like a novel, actually. And I know somebody who had better beware the Dark Side... Hmm, wait, you're writing from the Imperial pespective, so... Embrace the Dark Side?
11/7/2000 c1 Trent Roman
4 Interceptors vs. 12 X-Wings? That doesn't seem fair at all... Prime Wing must really be good sticks. Plus, are those Interceptors modified? I don't remember them having proton torps and ions. There's something about L'Garth story that bothers me... he fled the Death Star explosion, and then what? TIE Fighters don't have hyperspace engines, so he just waited around hoping to get picked up by whomever the Imperial Navy sent out to investigate? Risky. Thelea is getting more dangerous all the time. Having a Chiss opposing you is bad enough, but a Chiss with force ability? *shudder* There's someone you would want to get mad at you. Very fluid battle descriptions, and I like the dynamism between the members of the unit. You make it sound very realistic.
4 Interceptors vs. 12 X-Wings? That doesn't seem fair at all... Prime Wing must really be good sticks. Plus, are those Interceptors modified? I don't remember them having proton torps and ions. There's something about L'Garth story that bothers me... he fled the Death Star explosion, and then what? TIE Fighters don't have hyperspace engines, so he just waited around hoping to get picked up by whomever the Imperial Navy sent out to investigate? Risky. Thelea is getting more dangerous all the time. Having a Chiss opposing you is bad enough, but a Chiss with force ability? *shudder* There's someone you would want to get mad at you. Very fluid battle descriptions, and I like the dynamism between the members of the unit. You make it sound very realistic.
11/1/2000 c1 Trent Roman
Hey, I remember flying that mission in the game! Too bad I don't have it anymore... So Thelea is a Chiss, right? I was kind of surprised to see an alien serving under the Empire, and her motivations seems different than Thrawn's. Either way, she's going to have trouble restraining those two trigger-happy pilots long enough to do a flyby ident of the containers. Good story.
Hey, I remember flying that mission in the game! Too bad I don't have it anymore... So Thelea is a Chiss, right? I was kind of surprised to see an alien serving under the Empire, and her motivations seems different than Thrawn's. Either way, she's going to have trouble restraining those two trigger-happy pilots long enough to do a flyby ident of the containers. Good story.