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8/25/2003 c3 4Ink2
Relena finaly underatands. How sweet. Loved this. I never truely read this till now so sorry for this very late review. Sorry.
5/28/2003 c3 5Saotoshi
Sao: Lanston Hughes is a good poet. And see, I caught that!

HOS: Now, as for the chapter...

Both: Beautiful way to end it!

Sao: I thought it was all so endearing! *sigh* And, I have to admit, that I'm glad Relena got over Heero, not for his sake. But for hers. She found peace. Even better, she no longer hates Duo!

HOS: Now, you have no excuse to go back to the other story. Now go! Shoo!

Sao: If not, I will send the worst thing I could possibly send after you! *sees HOS opening her mouth and adds* Not counting me, of course. I'll send my half demon, half angel guardian who can be psychotically violent at times after you! Yep, but I won't if you promise to work as fast as you can manage. Bye!

~Sao & HOS

^-^
5/28/2003 c2 Saotoshi
Sao: Heh heh, she is suffering. I am pleased.

HOS: Ditto! Very happy, indeed! And there's still one more chapter!

Sao: *smiles* I couldn't be happier...well, I could. Relena could die, but since I'm trying to be less violent, I can deal with her staying alive. But...

HOS: If she does *anything* to hurt Duo and Heero's relationship-

Sao: Or Duo and/or Heero, I will make sure she dies a slower and more painful death than I wanted Hoshi to have! *smiles* We're going now!

~Sao & HOS
5/28/2003 c1 Saotoshi
Sao: *is a complete nervous, fidgety wreck* I'm trying really hard to calm down enough not to beat my computer into a pulp!

HOS: You see, for some reason, we couldn't review chapters 5 & 6 of your other story, but it was good. Although we can't believe you had Heero nearly kiss Hoshi! It's an outrage! .

Sao: *calmer* Anyway, as for this story, Yay! Relena is in anguish! *And* Dorothy smacked her across the face as she has been asking for for the longest time!

HOS: And how dare she speak about our wonderful Duo in that way? Someone should run her dumb blodne @$$ over!

Sao: *wide eyed* OOh, HOS never curses! Yay! You did two good things then! And hope your laptop comes back soon so you don't completely loose it. (And I'm not just saying that for the story, if that's what you're thinking).

HOS: Going on now!

~Sao & HOS
3/31/2003 c3 6YamaS
omg...that wasn't rushed at all...i'm practically in tears right now. that is such a beautiful story. you ahve so much talent. omg, i don't know what else to say but it was just perfect.
3/21/2003 c3 moondancer
oh very cute.. even a dense Relena can figure things out.. very good portrale of the characters.. (it's too late to do more then just gush.. well sort of gush).. i'll try and be more cohearant later.. back to gushing.. love it.. very cute.. and fun.. now off to more..hehe
3/21/2003 c3 6FightingMyFate
Oh now that was hot.

Eiji: Your a doosh.

Stop calling me that! *clears throat* anyway, LOVED the fic. It's so hard to find good stories like this anymore, yah know? I kinda pictured Relena going out, buying the ring, then giving it to Heero to give to Duo as like an apology for her manners or some stuff. Loved it anyway!

Eiji: Your still a doosh.

-.-...
3/16/2003 c3 45LBx
that was beautiful. reading this chapter made me so exhausted because of all relena's emotions. i know that may sound weird, but it's true. a really great fic, you're an amazing author. ja ne ~waves~
3/14/2003 c3 Connor Wolf
Aww...very good! i really, really like it! I really hate relena, but even with her in it, the story was awsome.

~C.W
3/10/2003 c3 3Aurenne
*grins* I truly LOVED this story, even if it is a Relena POV, and she can be so misguided it hurts !
3/10/2003 c3 Dyna
I needed a little romance to begin this week. Nice read, thanks.
3/10/2003 c3 Hell's Bitch
That was beautiful and touching. And interesting coming from Relena's POV. Good fic.
3/4/2003 c2 45LBx
hey, read this a few days ago but was kicked off line before i could review, lol. i really like how this is going, and i can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work. ja ne ~waves~
2/26/2003 c2 14Eradicated Illness
This is really good.

I hope to see more soon!
2/25/2003 c2 littletsuki
Wow, great story! It's been a while since I've read Gundam Wing fanfics, but this is one to remember. I've never read one in Relena's POV that was this good. I mean, it didn't make me feel like I wanted to kill the poor bitch. I actually kinda felt sorry for her, but I'm really happy for Heero and Duo! Great character development.
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