for Derek's Saga: Chapter 11/31/2003 c1 
17Ironi Numair
Wow, look at the date on this thing! Old fic! Anyway, the description was good. Intense, interesting...but how can this be chapter one? Where does it go?
17Ironi NumairWow, look at the date on this thing! Old fic! Anyway, the description was good. Intense, interesting...but how can this be chapter one? Where does it go?
11/9/2001 c1 Lily Goldleaf
Hmmm.. ok, lets start down the list shall we? I read your story, but just looking at the characters in this story made me frown in disgust for a few moments. When one thinks of Dragonlance, they think of Raistlin, Caramon, Tanis, Lauranalanthalasa, Tasselhoff, Flint, Goldmoon, Riverwind, Sturm, Kitara... The list goes on and on about the Heros of the Lance, so on and so forth. Now, In YOUR fanfic, I did not see any of those names. Unless your writing it from the Legand of Huma time or something before the Heros of the Lance were born. OR, after, which I highly doubt heh! Um, anyway. Fanfiction.net is, in my opinion to post things that relate to something or other. Not YOUR made up fantasies or midnight passions. So, in essense, terrible NO NO SHAME ON YOU type things. People click on Dragonlance from the book section to read about DRAGONLANCE, not junk. I suggest you pack your bags and move over to Elfwood.com they have a section where people like you can post their stories. Have a nice day :)
Hmmm.. ok, lets start down the list shall we? I read your story, but just looking at the characters in this story made me frown in disgust for a few moments. When one thinks of Dragonlance, they think of Raistlin, Caramon, Tanis, Lauranalanthalasa, Tasselhoff, Flint, Goldmoon, Riverwind, Sturm, Kitara... The list goes on and on about the Heros of the Lance, so on and so forth. Now, In YOUR fanfic, I did not see any of those names. Unless your writing it from the Legand of Huma time or something before the Heros of the Lance were born. OR, after, which I highly doubt heh! Um, anyway. Fanfiction.net is, in my opinion to post things that relate to something or other. Not YOUR made up fantasies or midnight passions. So, in essense, terrible NO NO SHAME ON YOU type things. People click on Dragonlance from the book section to read about DRAGONLANCE, not junk. I suggest you pack your bags and move over to Elfwood.com they have a section where people like you can post their stories. Have a nice day :)
1/16/2001 c1 jesse
how's it gonna end up a saga?
oh well. it says solamnic knights, but you said he was a dark knight. which is he?
how's it gonna end up a saga?
oh well. it says solamnic knights, but you said he was a dark knight. which is he?
12/9/2000 c1 Rob Kunzig
Yeah, that was, how do you say in English...Gay?
Yeah, that was, how do you say in English...Gay?