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1CertainEnd
I am sorry if leaving this review on all of your stories is a bit much, but personally I want you to know this. JenesisX, you are a person I have heard much about from others. A person who has wrote a remarkable series of stories. I had to see that for myself, and I have sampled some of your stories. Irony of Fate is your current masterpiece. You are one of the most renown authors I have ever come across, and the writer of perhaps the greatest final fantasy story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The entire 'series' is a literary work of art. If you are capable of creating such a masterpiece based off the work of another, then one can only imagine what you might unleash with an original creation. Everything about your efforts to unleash your imagination over the years is nothing short of incredible. I just want to thank you for taking the time to share it with us all.
1CertainEndI am sorry if leaving this review on all of your stories is a bit much, but personally I want you to know this. JenesisX, you are a person I have heard much about from others. A person who has wrote a remarkable series of stories. I had to see that for myself, and I have sampled some of your stories. Irony of Fate is your current masterpiece. You are one of the most renown authors I have ever come across, and the writer of perhaps the greatest final fantasy story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The entire 'series' is a literary work of art. If you are capable of creating such a masterpiece based off the work of another, then one can only imagine what you might unleash with an original creation. Everything about your efforts to unleash your imagination over the years is nothing short of incredible. I just want to thank you for taking the time to share it with us all.
4/25/2012 c1 37Whiitewolf
I loved how you did this. I felt a connection with the character, despite not knowing who he is.
You write with a nice flow, and use excellent imagery. Well done!
37WhiitewolfI loved how you did this. I felt a connection with the character, despite not knowing who he is.
You write with a nice flow, and use excellent imagery. Well done!
4/20/2012 c1 14ChibiSoulReader
Such a touching piece it gives insight of sephiroth being more than a cold fighter, it shows he truly has emotions and such. I liked this alot and as usual it is another great writing by you~
14ChibiSoulReaderSuch a touching piece it gives insight of sephiroth being more than a cold fighter, it shows he truly has emotions and such. I liked this alot and as usual it is another great writing by you~
4/18/2012 c1 11Sinnii
Poor Seph. It always gets me seeing him deal with loneliness... especially when he deals with the absence of his mother, and not knowing what it's like to have a lover...
11SinniiPoor Seph. It always gets me seeing him deal with loneliness... especially when he deals with the absence of his mother, and not knowing what it's like to have a lover...
4/18/2012 c1 9Dzuljeta
It's strange to read about snow when it finally left us less than two weeks ago...
Still, it was great how well you described Sepiroth's thoughts and feelings. And with so much detail! Absolutely wonderful.
9DzuljetaIt's strange to read about snow when it finally left us less than two weeks ago...
Still, it was great how well you described Sepiroth's thoughts and feelings. And with so much detail! Absolutely wonderful.
4/17/2012 c1 17Nispedana
Oh wow. I'm not familiar with the characters, but you definitely allowed me to empathize with them anyway. Good job!
17NispedanaOh wow. I'm not familiar with the characters, but you definitely allowed me to empathize with them anyway. Good job!
4/17/2012 c1 5Bexteron
Aww! I really felt for Seph in this fic. I never knew I could feel for him, what with his tendancy to murder and be insane, but you really open up a new side to him that I enjoy reading. I like this Seph. You remind the reader that underneath it all, he is still human. He has thoughts, doubts, wishes...
When you described how he was feeling as he watched everyone having fun in the snow I felt my heart breaking for him. I mean I liked the whole "Snow is just cold, frozen rain", and I like how you rationalize it to make them look idiotic with his line of reasoning, but its fun Seph! Go out and make a snowman! XD
At the end, you had me on the edge of my seat. I was all "Don't do it, Seph! It's not worth it!" lol
Poor Seph. i couldn't imagine being without my mother,and this chapter just made me realize how lucky I am to have her. I wish Seph could have known her :(
Loved the chapter. Brilliant work, as always ;) Keep it up!
5BexteronAww! I really felt for Seph in this fic. I never knew I could feel for him, what with his tendancy to murder and be insane, but you really open up a new side to him that I enjoy reading. I like this Seph. You remind the reader that underneath it all, he is still human. He has thoughts, doubts, wishes...
When you described how he was feeling as he watched everyone having fun in the snow I felt my heart breaking for him. I mean I liked the whole "Snow is just cold, frozen rain", and I like how you rationalize it to make them look idiotic with his line of reasoning, but its fun Seph! Go out and make a snowman! XD
At the end, you had me on the edge of my seat. I was all "Don't do it, Seph! It's not worth it!" lol
Poor Seph. i couldn't imagine being without my mother,and this chapter just made me realize how lucky I am to have her. I wish Seph could have known her :(
Loved the chapter. Brilliant work, as always ;) Keep it up!
2/22/2012 c1 2Seproth
Well this was certinally a sad chapter. This time we get one from Sephiroth's persepctive. The great general who could fell his foes with ease a peerless warrior who was considered all but unstopable on the battlefield.
Faces off with the one enemy he himself cannot beat crushing loneliness. Poor guy looks out the window and sees everyone having wintery fun times (though personally it might come from having grown up in miami I'm not a fan of the snow but thats neitehr here nor there)
So Sephiroth contemplates many things the snow people fun times. Finds them all boring on the surface but deep down longs for it.
I think its an interesting look into his mind. This one in particular feels completly plausible within the proper canon of the series (minus the suicide attempt I believe Sephiroth had to high an opinion of himself to consider suicide but thats a discussion for another day). Sephiroth was definatly a contemplative sort of individual (his upbringing kinda leads to that) and I think he definatly would have at times questioned why it is that he had no family. We definatly no from Crisis core that he thought heavily on the subject of his past and desperatly wanted answers. When he finally found them... well we know how that went.
You always do have a remarkble ability to capture his thought process. This feels natural for him this doesn't feel ooc this feels totally like the way he would analyize something. Initially very very coldly calculating like a machine... yet deep down beneath it all he stirs... he feels. He doesn't understand his feelings which makes it more depressing.
Another nice little short story.
2SeprothWell this was certinally a sad chapter. This time we get one from Sephiroth's persepctive. The great general who could fell his foes with ease a peerless warrior who was considered all but unstopable on the battlefield.
Faces off with the one enemy he himself cannot beat crushing loneliness. Poor guy looks out the window and sees everyone having wintery fun times (though personally it might come from having grown up in miami I'm not a fan of the snow but thats neitehr here nor there)
So Sephiroth contemplates many things the snow people fun times. Finds them all boring on the surface but deep down longs for it.
I think its an interesting look into his mind. This one in particular feels completly plausible within the proper canon of the series (minus the suicide attempt I believe Sephiroth had to high an opinion of himself to consider suicide but thats a discussion for another day). Sephiroth was definatly a contemplative sort of individual (his upbringing kinda leads to that) and I think he definatly would have at times questioned why it is that he had no family. We definatly no from Crisis core that he thought heavily on the subject of his past and desperatly wanted answers. When he finally found them... well we know how that went.
You always do have a remarkble ability to capture his thought process. This feels natural for him this doesn't feel ooc this feels totally like the way he would analyize something. Initially very very coldly calculating like a machine... yet deep down beneath it all he stirs... he feels. He doesn't understand his feelings which makes it more depressing.
Another nice little short story.
12/10/2006 c1 29Silvara
Yes! Another Seph fic ! Dealing especially with the period I love most! I can't wait to read it! Sorry, btw, I still have the bad habit of reviewing before reading. Anyways, by what I have seemn thank to your others fics, be sure I already love this one! Thank so very much for writting! ^_^
29SilvaraYes! Another Seph fic ! Dealing especially with the period I love most! I can't wait to read it! Sorry, btw, I still have the bad habit of reviewing before reading. Anyways, by what I have seemn thank to your others fics, be sure I already love this one! Thank so very much for writting! ^_^
2/17/2005 c1 2ruderevived
great i would like you to join my C2 staff i have sent you an activation E-mail
2ruderevivedgreat i would like you to join my C2 staff i have sent you an activation E-mail
4/20/2003 c1 40Yami-chan and Unrealistic
Oh, man. I love it. Seph's in perfect character and the fic's points were clear and explained very well. *hits printer button* In fact, me gonna print it out to carry around all the time! ^_^
40Yami-chan and UnrealisticOh, man. I love it. Seph's in perfect character and the fic's points were clear and explained very well. *hits printer button* In fact, me gonna print it out to carry around all the time! ^_^
4/13/2003 c1 18Kimmie3
well, i had read this a long time ago, and i reread it yesterday on ur site! it amazes me how u can get into sumone's head so perfectly. its like u know exactally how sephiroth feels. his whole story is tragic.. i am glad i get to see it turned around in Iof! thanks for giving me that oppurtunity! btw, i read about ur feelings on writing.. i just want you to know that theres lots of ppl out there that understand you. write at your own pace. enjoy writing it, and remember that everyone enjoys reading it! good luck!
Kimmie
18Kimmie3well, i had read this a long time ago, and i reread it yesterday on ur site! it amazes me how u can get into sumone's head so perfectly. its like u know exactally how sephiroth feels. his whole story is tragic.. i am glad i get to see it turned around in Iof! thanks for giving me that oppurtunity! btw, i read about ur feelings on writing.. i just want you to know that theres lots of ppl out there that understand you. write at your own pace. enjoy writing it, and remember that everyone enjoys reading it! good luck!
Kimmie
4/13/2003 c1 17aer-seph4eva
Another one of your great fics!
Nowadays, it is rather hard to find good Aer/Seph fics on ff.net due to how this site has now become, what with all the unallowance of NC-17, MSTs and that of other things. Anywho, just to say that I really enjoy reading all your works!
Keep up the great work!
(I'm looking forward to your next chapter in battlegrounds *wink* ^_^)
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva
17aer-seph4evaAnother one of your great fics!
Nowadays, it is rather hard to find good Aer/Seph fics on ff.net due to how this site has now become, what with all the unallowance of NC-17, MSTs and that of other things. Anywho, just to say that I really enjoy reading all your works!
Keep up the great work!
(I'm looking forward to your next chapter in battlegrounds *wink* ^_^)
Ja ne
Aer_seph4eva
4/11/2003 c1 unokitsune
I love all of your final fantasy 7 fics you wrote, and I love the gallery in your website, all three of them, though some of the pictures are not working, could you check on that please? I think you are a very talented writer, hey, can you update after fate, you still have chapter two and didn't put chapter three in yet, really wish you would. I read your profile on your webpage and you have very long hair and remind me of my friend, in fact, if your hair was black instead of blonde, i'de swear you were her twin. Well, gotta go, and I know soon you will have alot of reviews. I am probably going to do a ff7 fanfic soon, because your fics have inspired me. Geesh, you even hit their personality correctly. I visit your webpage like everyday, and I have read all of your ff7 fanfics in 5 days flat, b/c I just found about your site 5 days ago when I was looking for aeris/sesshomaru together pictures. You have some really nice fanart. Well, gotta go.
P.S., you have a very strong voice when writing, perhaps you can edit my fanfic? It's an Inuyasha fanfic, but my first none the less. I also noticed that you are a pg or a pg13 person. Well, gotta fly.
much appreciated to yah, Jen.
sincerly,
unokitsune.
I love all of your final fantasy 7 fics you wrote, and I love the gallery in your website, all three of them, though some of the pictures are not working, could you check on that please? I think you are a very talented writer, hey, can you update after fate, you still have chapter two and didn't put chapter three in yet, really wish you would. I read your profile on your webpage and you have very long hair and remind me of my friend, in fact, if your hair was black instead of blonde, i'de swear you were her twin. Well, gotta go, and I know soon you will have alot of reviews. I am probably going to do a ff7 fanfic soon, because your fics have inspired me. Geesh, you even hit their personality correctly. I visit your webpage like everyday, and I have read all of your ff7 fanfics in 5 days flat, b/c I just found about your site 5 days ago when I was looking for aeris/sesshomaru together pictures. You have some really nice fanart. Well, gotta go.
P.S., you have a very strong voice when writing, perhaps you can edit my fanfic? It's an Inuyasha fanfic, but my first none the less. I also noticed that you are a pg or a pg13 person. Well, gotta fly.
much appreciated to yah, Jen.
sincerly,
unokitsune.