for Wings of White Fire8/21/2010 c1 Helena Alexandra
there is such a thing as a rhyming dictionary (as an actual book). this is also very useful for when you need rhymes. its is kinda hard to use (if you don't already know how) and they seem kinda rare as well (i don't see them in bookstores). in any case, this is just for your edification (and for those how read your reviews). it is in no way a criticism of your poetry.
on with the story!
there is such a thing as a rhyming dictionary (as an actual book). this is also very useful for when you need rhymes. its is kinda hard to use (if you don't already know how) and they seem kinda rare as well (i don't see them in bookstores). in any case, this is just for your edification (and for those how read your reviews). it is in no way a criticism of your poetry.
on with the story!
4/18/2008 c6 
10Seer Vixion
keep your name the same it suits your stories better i think... I hope you update soon
~Vixi
10Seer Vixionkeep your name the same it suits your stories better i think... I hope you update soon
~Vixi
12/9/2007 c6 5Shandril Wielder of Spellfire
Rather good but usually people or Companions don't know their fate. That's all for now. Not going to press you for updates.
5Shandril Wielder of SpellfireRather good but usually people or Companions don't know their fate. That's all for now. Not going to press you for updates.
9/5/2006 c6 2ScottishFaerie
this is cool, UPDATE, or my muse will bite you, he is very angry right now.
2ScottishFaeriethis is cool, UPDATE, or my muse will bite you, he is very angry right now.
7/7/2006 c6 Flower248
what thats not aloud.. only on chapter six.. whats the unchanged version called, ears perks up, wails, want want want
what thats not aloud.. only on chapter six.. whats the unchanged version called, ears perks up, wails, want want want
1/28/2006 c6 braidedsilver
if you think that fyreblade is more authentic... change it but ... u have to choose ur own username the way u would be really named in vale... does the more exotic speeling of "fyre" suit you as being very unique & exciting or "fire" as the all encompassing elementally connected type? thanks for a gr8 chpt! please post soon!
~carica
(caricature of intimacy... see a personal name that i always think of changing to a real Velgarth-orginiated one, but i can't decide on the perfect one yet...!)
if you think that fyreblade is more authentic... change it but ... u have to choose ur own username the way u would be really named in vale... does the more exotic speeling of "fyre" suit you as being very unique & exciting or "fire" as the all encompassing elementally connected type? thanks for a gr8 chpt! please post soon!
~carica
(caricature of intimacy... see a personal name that i always think of changing to a real Velgarth-orginiated one, but i can't decide on the perfect one yet...!)
1/28/2006 c5 braidedsilver
beautiful...!...could you explain what ur muse is exactly b/c @ the top it just says,
"Muse responsible: Chaesa"... thank you!
~carica
beautiful...!...could you explain what ur muse is exactly b/c @ the top it just says,
"Muse responsible: Chaesa"... thank you!
~carica
1/28/2006 c4 braidedsilver
ahh! cliffie... thank you i think ur companion POVs r ansolutely incredible! off to read more...
~carica
ahh! cliffie... thank you i think ur companion POVs r ansolutely incredible! off to read more...
~carica
1/28/2006 c2 braidedsilver
I LOVE THIS STORY! thank you & please tell me of more really good winged companion stories... yea! really good ML fanfics!
~carica
I LOVE THIS STORY! thank you & please tell me of more really good winged companion stories... yea! really good ML fanfics!
~carica
12/19/2005 c6 10Mad-4-Manga
Wow. THIS IS AWESOME! ^_^
I ESPECIALLY loved the note from Van in this chapter: MARVELOUS, HILARIOUS. ^_^
10Mad-4-MangaWow. THIS IS AWESOME! ^_^
I ESPECIALLY loved the note from Van in this chapter: MARVELOUS, HILARIOUS. ^_^
10/3/2004 c1 Kathleen
After reading your stories listed I have one question.Do you ever finish anything?
Someone with your talent shouldn't keep wasting it .You have so many ideas that you've begun and gone no further with.
After reading your stories listed I have one question.Do you ever finish anything?
Someone with your talent shouldn't keep wasting it .You have so many ideas that you've begun and gone no further with.