for Fate of an Empire2/23/2012 c4 
11Happygirl122
Not exatcly historically accurate, but that's what AUs are for! :P A really intriguing and well written story. I hope you could update soon!
11Happygirl122Not exatcly historically accurate, but that's what AUs are for! :P A really intriguing and well written story. I hope you could update soon!
1/30/2004 c4 3Yatenmiokami
I Love Your Story! Hmm... Yep I think that is the first chappy that some-one doesn't die. Aww... you haven't updated in like 5-6 months.
Please, Please, PLEASE update soon!
(i'll know as soon as you do!)
3YatenmiokamiI Love Your Story! Hmm... Yep I think that is the first chappy that some-one doesn't die. Aww... you haven't updated in like 5-6 months.
Please, Please, PLEASE update soon!
(i'll know as soon as you do!)
12/19/2003 c4 3Faction Fighter
This story is excellent! Get the next chapter up asap cos its brilliant!
Ricki
3Faction FighterThis story is excellent! Get the next chapter up asap cos its brilliant!
Ricki
7/24/2003 c1 1Wu Ji Hong
Heh, yeah, I forgot to mention in my author's notes, the pork buns thing was a nod to Ramza Lionheart's epics. Thanks for the reviews guys!
1Wu Ji HongHeh, yeah, I forgot to mention in my author's notes, the pork buns thing was a nod to Ramza Lionheart's epics. Thanks for the reviews guys!
7/24/2003 c4 UniversalParadox
Another great chapter, Sun Jian raving about pork buns in his senility, has someone been reading ramza lionheart's fics?
Another great chapter, Sun Jian raving about pork buns in his senility, has someone been reading ramza lionheart's fics?
7/17/2003 c3 4aquafina rain
OOh, the appearance of Fu Xi! Good, cause he's one of my favorite characters. ^_^ I have to say, the plot is quite original then what I've seen before, and twists tie up here and there. It just keeps on getting better and better. ^_^
4aquafina rainOOh, the appearance of Fu Xi! Good, cause he's one of my favorite characters. ^_^ I have to say, the plot is quite original then what I've seen before, and twists tie up here and there. It just keeps on getting better and better. ^_^
7/13/2003 c2 WindsofChaos
This is an awesome fanfic! You better continue! Whatever you do don't turn this into a romantic story. The Dynasty Warrios section needs something besides romance and humor. I will be sure to keep reading.
This is an awesome fanfic! You better continue! Whatever you do don't turn this into a romantic story. The Dynasty Warrios section needs something besides romance and humor. I will be sure to keep reading.
6/27/2003 c2 aquafina rain
Sun Ce: “No way! I’m gonna sterilize your wound with alcohol!”
^_^ Classic. I've never seen Berserk, but I've heard bits and pieces about it. Anyway: w00t, Zhou Yu! *pumps fist into air* And a little bit of Xiahou Dun too! Heh, Xu Zhu's just a big ol' dummie, isn't he? ^^; But I suppose we all get hungry.. *cough* Anywhats, another great job done in this chapter. I already know I'm adding this to my favorites. *clicky the lil box* ^_^;
Sun Ce: “No way! I’m gonna sterilize your wound with alcohol!”
^_^ Classic. I've never seen Berserk, but I've heard bits and pieces about it. Anyway: w00t, Zhou Yu! *pumps fist into air* And a little bit of Xiahou Dun too! Heh, Xu Zhu's just a big ol' dummie, isn't he? ^^; But I suppose we all get hungry.. *cough* Anywhats, another great job done in this chapter. I already know I'm adding this to my favorites. *clicky the lil box* ^_^;
6/27/2003 c2 UniversalParadox
this is easily the best(in terms of storyline, and literary skill alike) DW fic i've read yet. Even if i did have qualms about it deviating from the book/games/history, it would be far overshadowed by how well written the fic is. Keep up the good work, i'm sure we'll all be waiting.
this is easily the best(in terms of storyline, and literary skill alike) DW fic i've read yet. Even if i did have qualms about it deviating from the book/games/history, it would be far overshadowed by how well written the fic is. Keep up the good work, i'm sure we'll all be waiting.
6/22/2003 c1 aquafina rain
*sweatdrop* I'm not sure why you gave Sun Quan the spotlight either. o.o; But I love it tons! It's great to see something that doesn't involve a Mary-Sue or OC that falls in love. *sweatdrops again* Anywho, I enjoyed reading this bit! Write some more! o.o;; Zhou Tai better not die!
*sweatdrop* I'm not sure why you gave Sun Quan the spotlight either. o.o; But I love it tons! It's great to see something that doesn't involve a Mary-Sue or OC that falls in love. *sweatdrops again* Anywho, I enjoyed reading this bit! Write some more! o.o;; Zhou Tai better not die!
6/20/2003 c1 7me you and kaoru
Ahh, a newbie!
So far, by reading the first chapter, I can tell your fanfiction will turn out pretty good later on. Can't really say anything bad, though.
Update soon.
7me you and kaoruAhh, a newbie!
So far, by reading the first chapter, I can tell your fanfiction will turn out pretty good later on. Can't really say anything bad, though.
Update soon.
6/20/2003 c1 16SheisNoLongerHere
Oh, tis a very, very nice start you got going there. And Sun Quan taking the leading role? Sweet. I hardly see that, and it just makes me feel jittery that there's other people who take a liking for the guy. Though I like the fact that you actually name their tenth level weapons, I was a bit confused with what 'Dusk' was, then again, that's my fault for not getting around to leveling Zhou Tai up yet, so, yeah, silly me. Though for a second there that he grabbed some random chick named Dusk and used her as a shield (has me in stitches until I realized what it really was). Nice start, and I hope to see it continued. And don't worry... a lot of DW fanfiction go against the book (is guilty of such things).
16SheisNoLongerHereOh, tis a very, very nice start you got going there. And Sun Quan taking the leading role? Sweet. I hardly see that, and it just makes me feel jittery that there's other people who take a liking for the guy. Though I like the fact that you actually name their tenth level weapons, I was a bit confused with what 'Dusk' was, then again, that's my fault for not getting around to leveling Zhou Tai up yet, so, yeah, silly me. Though for a second there that he grabbed some random chick named Dusk and used her as a shield (has me in stitches until I realized what it really was). Nice start, and I hope to see it continued. And don't worry... a lot of DW fanfiction go against the book (is guilty of such things).