for Falling From the Pedestal8/31/2003 c6 ally
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8/24/2003 c6 ally
awsome more soon
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awsome more soon
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7/10/2003 c6
2Amberheat
wow! that was great. i hope colin doesn't die for that reason. i think the town would turn on dr. brown. Write more! I cant wait to read the rest!
2Amberheatwow! that was great. i hope colin doesn't die for that reason. i think the town would turn on dr. brown. Write more! I cant wait to read the rest!
7/5/2003 c5 Emma
this is great ! i love that laynie is the only one with a positive attitude about the whole thing. Write more!
this is great ! i love that laynie is the only one with a positive attitude about the whole thing. Write more!
7/4/2003 c5 Coolio02
Really good chapter. Glad Ephram ran into Laynie. She's only a few people in the town who don't blame the Brown's for Colin's death. Hope you write more soon:)
Really good chapter. Glad Ephram ran into Laynie. She's only a few people in the town who don't blame the Brown's for Colin's death. Hope you write more soon:)
7/3/2003 c4
4sixstars
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Wonderful story! I love the Drama!
I love a story with an angsty/drama Ephram.
But, I can't help feeling bad for him (even though it's just a story ^_^)
Well, I'll be looking forward for another chapter! You're a great author!
~B.
4sixstarsO.O!
Wonderful story! I love the Drama!
I love a story with an angsty/drama Ephram.
But, I can't help feeling bad for him (even though it's just a story ^_^)
Well, I'll be looking forward for another chapter! You're a great author!
~B.
7/2/2003 c4 CAMartin
good
good
7/1/2003 c3 Riley
What a powerful chapter. Poor Ephram and Dr. Brown. Write more soon.
What a powerful chapter. Poor Ephram and Dr. Brown. Write more soon.
7/1/2003 c2 CAMartin
good, GOOD. But it could be better. Stay true to the characters.
Good, but not great.
Update soon.
good, GOOD. But it could be better. Stay true to the characters.
Good, but not great.
Update soon.
