for Eternal Bonds: The Rewrite7/22/2003 c2 Ballistic
Woah, cool! I just happened to stumble across this fic, and damn, this is pretty good! Update soon!
Woah, cool! I just happened to stumble across this fic, and damn, this is pretty good! Update soon!
7/11/2003 c2 Marcus
So, this is the "Story that I have forsworn to complete by the end of this summer, now please ** off before you give me writers block!"
It's looking good so far, and I even managed to read the original version before you got rid of it. One question with the original though: You started writing Princess like that after camp, where Ryan, ahem, "entertained" us with stories and whipped cream. *shudders at the memory* Well, at least you didn't write in the stuff with that, just think of the emotional scaring you would have given all the normal people! You're such a freak!
So, this is the "Story that I have forsworn to complete by the end of this summer, now please ** off before you give me writers block!"
It's looking good so far, and I even managed to read the original version before you got rid of it. One question with the original though: You started writing Princess like that after camp, where Ryan, ahem, "entertained" us with stories and whipped cream. *shudders at the memory* Well, at least you didn't write in the stuff with that, just think of the emotional scaring you would have given all the normal people! You're such a freak!
7/8/2003 c2 
4Yet-One-More-Idiot
Thank you for the cameo, Anime Girl 6. Much appreciated (it's nice to know my reviews are appreciated so much). :-D And I'm a member of the resistance - cool. :-)
Ha! The other three supervillains are even dumber than I thought if they actually believe that any of them can kill Him (though that won't stop any of them giving it a good shot anyway, I imagine... =: ).
So, where is th Professor and how has he survived for the last 9 years? Perhaps this could be answered in the next chapter, maybe? :-)
4Yet-One-More-IdiotThank you for the cameo, Anime Girl 6. Much appreciated (it's nice to know my reviews are appreciated so much). :-D And I'm a member of the resistance - cool. :-)
Ha! The other three supervillains are even dumber than I thought if they actually believe that any of them can kill Him (though that won't stop any of them giving it a good shot anyway, I imagine... =: ).
So, where is th Professor and how has he survived for the last 9 years? Perhaps this could be answered in the next chapter, maybe? :-)
7/5/2003 c1 Charmed Cutie
OMg i hope you keep writing an UP-DATE soon, cuz im just luvin this fan fic already lol!
OMg i hope you keep writing an UP-DATE soon, cuz im just luvin this fan fic already lol!
7/4/2003 c1 Yet-One-More-Idiot
Congratulations on a much better written prologue, Anime Girl 6. :-D Will the plot be exactly the same as the first time round, or will that be re-written too? :-S
Congratulations on a much better written prologue, Anime Girl 6. :-D Will the plot be exactly the same as the first time round, or will that be re-written too? :-S