for Gossip9/15/2007 c2 
5Arraya
wow, that got hot at the end...maybe this story shouldn't have ended where it did. Seems Will and Lizzie both have a little crush on Jack...Maybe...you should add a chappie...maybe Will and Lizzie should kidnap Jack and have their way with him...
anyways this is really a great fic.
5Arrayawow, that got hot at the end...maybe this story shouldn't have ended where it did. Seems Will and Lizzie both have a little crush on Jack...Maybe...you should add a chappie...maybe Will and Lizzie should kidnap Jack and have their way with him...
anyways this is really a great fic.
3/6/2007 c2 55Mother Nature's Daughter
"Only...not with *him.*"
I LOVE THAT LINE!
Anyway...I didn't quite understand the first one; kinda creepy. But this one...was great! Keep it up!
55Mother Nature's Daughter"Only...not with *him.*"
I LOVE THAT LINE!
Anyway...I didn't quite understand the first one; kinda creepy. But this one...was great! Keep it up!
12/8/2003 c2 NicoSeeko
Great story, really funny please tell me when u put up the next chapter!
Great story, really funny please tell me when u put up the next chapter!
8/26/2003 c2 1liquidiamond
That is great. "Jack is sexuality..."
YEAH! Thank you for putting it so bluntly! lol It's true though...I like the idea of what people say about him behind his back, cool!
1liquidiamondThat is great. "Jack is sexuality..."
YEAH! Thank you for putting it so bluntly! lol It's true though...I like the idea of what people say about him behind his back, cool!
8/15/2003 c1 crazyDeppfanatic
wow! best fic i've ever read! i LOVE jack...um, i mean, i LOVE how you described jack...o, 2 hell with it! i LOVE jack, and i LOVE how you described him! lol i could see both of these suitations being put into the movie! i hope ur going 2 write more! i'll be waiting! lol
o, and the 'flag' comment, i still laugh when ever i think about it! haha!
wow! best fic i've ever read! i LOVE jack...um, i mean, i LOVE how you described jack...o, 2 hell with it! i LOVE jack, and i LOVE how you described him! lol i could see both of these suitations being put into the movie! i hope ur going 2 write more! i'll be waiting! lol
o, and the 'flag' comment, i still laugh when ever i think about it! haha!
7/26/2003 c2 Gila Draper
I liked that, but I think that Elizabeth should talk to Gibbs or someone and find out about the rumors that go around about Will looking at Jack. And I think that at some point in some future chapter Jack should finally come into the picture and see what people are saying behind his back. :) Good work, I hoep you write more.
I liked that, but I think that Elizabeth should talk to Gibbs or someone and find out about the rumors that go around about Will looking at Jack. And I think that at some point in some future chapter Jack should finally come into the picture and see what people are saying behind his back. :) Good work, I hoep you write more.
7/25/2003 c2 Sage of Hairspray
I usually hate romance with a blazing passion, but that made me go "aw...". It's a good antidote for all the angst I've been reading. I'm very impressed by your writing, especially the dialouge.
I usually hate romance with a blazing passion, but that made me go "aw...". It's a good antidote for all the angst I've been reading. I'm very impressed by your writing, especially the dialouge.
7/25/2003 c2 HealerAriel
Damn, I can SO imagine both of those scenes happening...
Damn, I can SO imagine both of those scenes happening...
7/25/2003 c2 Jules
"Jack is sexuality" SO SO true! Brilliant tory, very funny! Write more if u can!
"Jack is sexuality" SO SO true! Brilliant tory, very funny! Write more if u can!