for Dawnbreakers8/22/2010 c2 
252Inkfire
I LOVED this! I love your writing so much... It is so strong and so poetic and so evocating...
252InkfireI LOVED this! I love your writing so much... It is so strong and so poetic and so evocating...
5/23/2010 c1 22MadameCissy
I sat in the sun whilst at work reading this... and I love it... It is intense and mysterious and I love how you capture the curiousity... the feelings lingering around... Update soon, if there is more!
22MadameCissyI sat in the sun whilst at work reading this... and I love it... It is intense and mysterious and I love how you capture the curiousity... the feelings lingering around... Update soon, if there is more!
12/7/2007 c2 Pyric
This is really, really cool! It's a right shame you left it here, because I really like what you've come up with. Definitely different than anything else that's up here...I like this a lot! The Blacks are such an intensely intriguing family...and I'd LOVE to see where this is (was?) going. I love how it's spoken, but it isn't dialog. It's really amazing, I have to say. Never seen anything like it.
It's clearly been several years since the last update...here's hoping you take it back up again!
This is really, really cool! It's a right shame you left it here, because I really like what you've come up with. Definitely different than anything else that's up here...I like this a lot! The Blacks are such an intensely intriguing family...and I'd LOVE to see where this is (was?) going. I love how it's spoken, but it isn't dialog. It's really amazing, I have to say. Never seen anything like it.
It's clearly been several years since the last update...here's hoping you take it back up again!
8/22/2005 c2 darkness fear
Definitely my favorite story of yours. Near perfection. Absolutely stunning, very captivating. I'm relatively speechless.
I adore the last line,
"Something wicked this day breaks."
LOVELY!
Definitely my favorite story of yours. Near perfection. Absolutely stunning, very captivating. I'm relatively speechless.
I adore the last line,
"Something wicked this day breaks."
LOVELY!
3/23/2004 c2 Thistle
Wow. Awesome awesome story. I can't stop thinking about Lucius's feelings on having to share his bed though. I think that's the thing that catches my attention the most. Anyways, this is very nicely written. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story and are planning on adding more soon.
Wow. Awesome awesome story. I can't stop thinking about Lucius's feelings on having to share his bed though. I think that's the thing that catches my attention the most. Anyways, this is very nicely written. I hope you haven't forgotten about this story and are planning on adding more soon.
1/12/2004 c2 The Lost
You are a truely talented writer, and in the world of fanifction that is somethign of an extreme rarety. I have no idea how you manage to make incest sexy but you do a very good job of it.
This story is very disturbingly erotic considering it is about a little girl and some reletives. You are succeding where Anne Rice fails so dramatically, you are making the sickening a turn on.
You are a truely talented writer, and in the world of fanifction that is somethign of an extreme rarety. I have no idea how you manage to make incest sexy but you do a very good job of it.
This story is very disturbingly erotic considering it is about a little girl and some reletives. You are succeding where Anne Rice fails so dramatically, you are making the sickening a turn on.
12/23/2003 c2 08642
I don't think I've loved a fanfic writer this much since Strega Brava, and I practically worship *her.* Dear gods, this was amazing. WHat in the world are you doing here, writing this fanfiction? Why aren't you out getting filthy rish off novels or something? You're absolutely brilliant...
I can't wait for more!
Bravo!
-Aledia
I don't think I've loved a fanfic writer this much since Strega Brava, and I practically worship *her.* Dear gods, this was amazing. WHat in the world are you doing here, writing this fanfiction? Why aren't you out getting filthy rish off novels or something? You're absolutely brilliant...
I can't wait for more!
Bravo!
-Aledia