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Great job :) The only small mistake I see is that (to my knowledge) Kira's eyes are purple, not dark blue. Good Work!
5372259Great job :) The only small mistake I see is that (to my knowledge) Kira's eyes are purple, not dark blue. Good Work!
10/9/2006 c1 Lily
-sigh-
some people can be so rude. Kagari is another way to spell Cagalli, little ones. But anyway, I love Kira/Cagalli :D So Thank you for writing this. If you do update, I'm sure you'll make k.c. fans happy. But that's up to you.
Good luck!
-sigh-
some people can be so rude. Kagari is another way to spell Cagalli, little ones. But anyway, I love Kira/Cagalli :D So Thank you for writing this. If you do update, I'm sure you'll make k.c. fans happy. But that's up to you.
Good luck!
1/19/2006 c1 5Dark-Syaoran
This was a great start. It's too bad that you've given up on it. I would have liked to see how it went.
Ah well.
5Dark-SyaoranThis was a great start. It's too bad that you've given up on it. I would have liked to see how it went.
Ah well.
11/11/2005 c1 Javier
Idiot is Cagali not Kagari
Idiot is Cagali not Kagari
8/13/2005 c1 4Skywalker6119
For a first chapter,it's really good.Not as good as "Ashes to Ashes",but it's not complete yet,so I look forward to another great story.
4Skywalker6119For a first chapter,it's really good.Not as good as "Ashes to Ashes",but it's not complete yet,so I look forward to another great story.
7/26/2005 c1 Raven2547
hurry up ive been waiting forever
hurry up ive been waiting forever
6/24/2005 c1 Muyasuki Takao
Great Chapter! I really hope that there will be another one soon cause there are too few K/C fanfics.
Great Chapter! I really hope that there will be another one soon cause there are too few K/C fanfics.
6/7/2005 c1 Sankontessou
Yay! I absolutely love and support the Kira/Cagalli pairing (I refuse to accept them as siblings). I really do hope you continue it and update soon! Please? Don't leave me hanging! ;_;
Yay! I absolutely love and support the Kira/Cagalli pairing (I refuse to accept them as siblings). I really do hope you continue it and update soon! Please? Don't leave me hanging! ;_;
5/26/2005 c1 Alex Ikari
It's been a while...no update so what's up? Have you discontinued this story? If so, it'd be a real shame since I really enjoy your writing style and of course, the pairing of the story. ...None of the other authors are updating their KiraCagalli stories as well...
It's been a while...no update so what's up? Have you discontinued this story? If so, it'd be a real shame since I really enjoy your writing style and of course, the pairing of the story. ...None of the other authors are updating their KiraCagalli stories as well...
1/20/2005 c1 Alex Ikari
I really enjoyed this story. I myself am a Kira/Cagalli and Kira/Lacus fan, though more of the first. It's really a shame that there are so few Kira/Cagalli fics but they are unfortuately related. Nevertheless, good luck on the next chapter.
I really enjoyed this story. I myself am a Kira/Cagalli and Kira/Lacus fan, though more of the first. It's really a shame that there are so few Kira/Cagalli fics but they are unfortuately related. Nevertheless, good luck on the next chapter.
1/1/2005 c1 Leshyaedawnfire
Cool i like update soon please
Cool i like update soon please