for Don't Wake the Muggles4/13/2011 c3
11Star the Foxhound
This is an interesting AU story. I like the idea and wouldn't mind seeing more.
11Star the FoxhoundThis is an interesting AU story. I like the idea and wouldn't mind seeing more.
4/29/2004 c3 kitz
I like it very much. I often wonder if it would've been better if Harry's relatives had had a bit of a better explanation than having a note and their nephew dumped on their doorstep, without anyone to explain things. I also tend to think Petunia (while bitter and jealous and just a bit spiteful at times) sorta goes along with what Vernon wants. Yes she spoils Dudley rotten and ignores Harry, but I bet the cupboard under the stairs was Vernon's idea. And he's the one that gets all purple in the face and practically throttles the boy all the time. Anyhow. nice fic. I look forward to seeing more
I like it very much. I often wonder if it would've been better if Harry's relatives had had a bit of a better explanation than having a note and their nephew dumped on their doorstep, without anyone to explain things. I also tend to think Petunia (while bitter and jealous and just a bit spiteful at times) sorta goes along with what Vernon wants. Yes she spoils Dudley rotten and ignores Harry, but I bet the cupboard under the stairs was Vernon's idea. And he's the one that gets all purple in the face and practically throttles the boy all the time. Anyhow. nice fic. I look forward to seeing more
11/19/2003 c3
61Trinity Day
I want to make you feel warm and fuzzy inside! (But am not sure that came out like it was supposed to.) Anyway, as I believe I said before, this is a great AU. I love the exploration of Petunia as she might have been. I know it's an AU, but I have a few nitpicks. Of course, being an AU, you can easily ignore them. One, Dudley and Harry are the same age, only months apart. They were in the same grade in PS/SS, remember? Two, Percy's full name is Percy, not Percival. It was in the hearing scene in OOtP. Other than that? I liked it. I also really liked the glimpse at Crouch, and the reasonings behind him sending Sirius to Azkaban without a trial.
61Trinity DayI want to make you feel warm and fuzzy inside! (But am not sure that came out like it was supposed to.) Anyway, as I believe I said before, this is a great AU. I love the exploration of Petunia as she might have been. I know it's an AU, but I have a few nitpicks. Of course, being an AU, you can easily ignore them. One, Dudley and Harry are the same age, only months apart. They were in the same grade in PS/SS, remember? Two, Percy's full name is Percy, not Percival. It was in the hearing scene in OOtP. Other than that? I liked it. I also really liked the glimpse at Crouch, and the reasonings behind him sending Sirius to Azkaban without a trial.
11/1/2003 c2
61Trinity Day
Wow. This is certainly a new twist for an AU. And a really interesting one, too. I love the way you fit in Petunia and her relation with magic. I'm really looking forward to seeing what else you do with this story.
61Trinity DayWow. This is certainly a new twist for an AU. And a really interesting one, too. I love the way you fit in Petunia and her relation with magic. I'm really looking forward to seeing what else you do with this story.
10/29/2003 c2
4Mystical Witch
I do hope that the Dursleys will be sweeter towards Harry and that Dudley won't grow into a small whale.
Please post soon.
4Mystical WitchI do hope that the Dursleys will be sweeter towards Harry and that Dudley won't grow into a small whale.
Please post soon.
10/16/2003 c1 Mini Minerva
ooh, I like this! It shows a totally different side to Petunia that I never thought she had! It explains it verywell and is well written. There area few grammer and punctuation mistakes, but other than that it was terriffic! Great use of the Englsh Language Very good! Please update soon!
ooh, I like this! It shows a totally different side to Petunia that I never thought she had! It explains it verywell and is well written. There area few grammer and punctuation mistakes, but other than that it was terriffic! Great use of the Englsh Language Very good! Please update soon!
