for Sudden Burst of Speed5/6/2010 c1 heh
wish I could write a fic that has ranma joining the teen titans from the very beginning.
wish I could write a fic that has ranma joining the teen titans from the very beginning.
11/10/2009 c1 Charles L Flowers
I found the story very intresting and would like to see more.
I found the story very intresting and would like to see more.
3/9/2009 c2 Already written
Well the chapter has excelled in grammar in grammar with a few minor spelling mistakes. This chapter clearly displays you have a good sense of humor and I like that in a chapter. I didn't expect the scene between Charlie and Remna to take place and in that sort of way. I was surprised that Remna was able to speak english. Well anywasys this chapter served okay as a training session for Remna but I believe more could be done. My overall rating is 8/10.
P.S My sign in name is Vidmaster2k8. I'm just didn't have the chance to log in when I read this. The second Okame was random as hell!
Well the chapter has excelled in grammar in grammar with a few minor spelling mistakes. This chapter clearly displays you have a good sense of humor and I like that in a chapter. I didn't expect the scene between Charlie and Remna to take place and in that sort of way. I was surprised that Remna was able to speak english. Well anywasys this chapter served okay as a training session for Remna but I believe more could be done. My overall rating is 8/10.
P.S My sign in name is Vidmaster2k8. I'm just didn't have the chance to log in when I read this. The second Okame was random as hell!
12/3/2008 c5 Blackdex
Hm, well, that was nice. not a favorite, but definitly worth reading. please continue. ciao
Hm, well, that was nice. not a favorite, but definitly worth reading. please continue. ciao
8/14/2008 c1 
20Olaf74
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
20Olaf74I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
8/7/2007 c5 2Zarz
Honestly, I wasn't sure what to make of a Ranma/Flash crossover, but it turned out wonderfully! I love what Ranma's learned and found out, and a lot of the information about the Flashes was new to me too, as I haven't been that interested in them before; I think that's going to change. Really great story, and I love your portrayal of Ranma's abilities. I'd love to see a sequel with Batman, just please don't make him too much of an stubborn idiot - I think he's a good person at heart, he's just had one too many traumatic experiences. Perhaps the Robins would be enough to knock some sense into him. I also can't wait to find out what else Ranma learned when he was in the Speed Force. A scene with him spending the quarter of a second to run to Japan to tell his pop exactly what he thinks about his childhood was also be really great to see. Keep up the wonderful work!
2ZarzHonestly, I wasn't sure what to make of a Ranma/Flash crossover, but it turned out wonderfully! I love what Ranma's learned and found out, and a lot of the information about the Flashes was new to me too, as I haven't been that interested in them before; I think that's going to change. Really great story, and I love your portrayal of Ranma's abilities. I'd love to see a sequel with Batman, just please don't make him too much of an stubborn idiot - I think he's a good person at heart, he's just had one too many traumatic experiences. Perhaps the Robins would be enough to knock some sense into him. I also can't wait to find out what else Ranma learned when he was in the Speed Force. A scene with him spending the quarter of a second to run to Japan to tell his pop exactly what he thinks about his childhood was also be really great to see. Keep up the wonderful work!
12/20/2006 c1 TegwenielWestwind
Oh, you wrote more to speed force! Yaay. *cough* Okay, so I forgot to check recently. Anyway, thanks for writing this cool crossover.
Oh, you wrote more to speed force! Yaay. *cough* Okay, so I forgot to check recently. Anyway, thanks for writing this cool crossover.
9/14/2006 c5 cyran
Just finished reading this story...I realize that its kind of obvious considering I'm making the comment at the last chapter.
But I degress, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it and would be intrested in reading a continuation - if you ever get the desire or need to write another story arc that is. Although if you don't have the drive to make more stories based off of it that's completely understandable.
As a side note, I've read through what you've done with Prime Attitude...and I think some of Golden Opportunity although that was probably two or three years ago. I'll have to read through it again later as well as some of your other works.
I also would like to commend your writing skills; it gets irritating hunting for fanfiction, finding interesting ideas that some authors come up with only to be unable to read it due to the writing/grammar level being rudimentary.
Thanks for writing, I know that I'll keep reading.
Just finished reading this story...I realize that its kind of obvious considering I'm making the comment at the last chapter.
But I degress, just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it and would be intrested in reading a continuation - if you ever get the desire or need to write another story arc that is. Although if you don't have the drive to make more stories based off of it that's completely understandable.
As a side note, I've read through what you've done with Prime Attitude...and I think some of Golden Opportunity although that was probably two or three years ago. I'll have to read through it again later as well as some of your other works.
I also would like to commend your writing skills; it gets irritating hunting for fanfiction, finding interesting ideas that some authors come up with only to be unable to read it due to the writing/grammar level being rudimentary.
Thanks for writing, I know that I'll keep reading.
5/15/2006 c5 Peter Kim
This is a great fic,will some of the events of DC will happen here like the Batman forced to leave the Justice League temporay,the alternate version of Lex will merge the universes together,the disbanding of the Young Justice and the Justice League,destruction of the speed force,Lex Luthor losing Lex Corps, superman losing his powers and attacking Lex in the newspaper as Clark and more?
This is a great fic,will some of the events of DC will happen here like the Batman forced to leave the Justice League temporay,the alternate version of Lex will merge the universes together,the disbanding of the Young Justice and the Justice League,destruction of the speed force,Lex Luthor losing Lex Corps, superman losing his powers and attacking Lex in the newspaper as Clark and more?
5/8/2006 c5 Jamez
Great story, it took me a while to come back to it and finish this last chapter, but now I'm glad I waited. It was worthwhile, and though there are a few loose-ends, it doesn't matter. This was a great fic, and I hope some day the muse returns to you in order to continue this. For the meanwhile, take your time and enjoy working on other things, be it more stories or just living your life. Just keep up the great work later and take your time doing it.
Great story, it took me a while to come back to it and finish this last chapter, but now I'm glad I waited. It was worthwhile, and though there are a few loose-ends, it doesn't matter. This was a great fic, and I hope some day the muse returns to you in order to continue this. For the meanwhile, take your time and enjoy working on other things, be it more stories or just living your life. Just keep up the great work later and take your time doing it.
1/17/2006 c5 d
Akalon's idea of Ranma working with the titans in a possible sequel or even brand new story sounds interesting.
Especially since they showed the series final episode friday.
Akalon's idea of Ranma working with the titans in a possible sequel or even brand new story sounds interesting.
Especially since they showed the series final episode friday.