for Winter Flowers11/13/2008 c1 
6Invisible.Words
Honestly I have never read a story like yours. It was amazing in some parts and okay in others. It is an wonderful work though. I enjoyed it thoroughly. In some parts it seemed rushed though. Like the plan to kill mathias...in others it mad me angry cause she was so oblivious. It was awesome. For it to capture me and other readers like that must take some work. I am very impressed. Not that I am much help to you since I am not nearly as good as you are. But I have read many and yours is by far the my most favorite in this category. Thank you for writing and please continue!
6Invisible.WordsHonestly I have never read a story like yours. It was amazing in some parts and okay in others. It is an wonderful work though. I enjoyed it thoroughly. In some parts it seemed rushed though. Like the plan to kill mathias...in others it mad me angry cause she was so oblivious. It was awesome. For it to capture me and other readers like that must take some work. I am very impressed. Not that I am much help to you since I am not nearly as good as you are. But I have read many and yours is by far the my most favorite in this category. Thank you for writing and please continue!
5/20/2008 c1 6GreaterBeastXellas
I remember reading this in 1998 when it was up on some clopin website. I loved this so much I am glad I found it again.
6GreaterBeastXellasI remember reading this in 1998 when it was up on some clopin website. I loved this so much I am glad I found it again.
9/25/2006 c1 6NaomiJameston
*Sobs* That was so beautiful! More please? And where is the sequel you mentioned at the end? I'd love to read it!
~~Naomi
6NaomiJameston*Sobs* That was so beautiful! More please? And where is the sequel you mentioned at the end? I'd love to read it!
~~Naomi
5/14/2006 c1 vikki
oh my god oh my god oh my god! this is fan-tast-ic! i was actually kicked off the computer half way through reading it and i went into with drawel syptoms until i could read the end! really, its very very good and i thought lily was a really good character... it's nice to know that people do make mistakes sometimes so she makes a really good flawed heroine. yep i'm deff of to read the sequel! keep writing!
oh my god oh my god oh my god! this is fan-tast-ic! i was actually kicked off the computer half way through reading it and i went into with drawel syptoms until i could read the end! really, its very very good and i thought lily was a really good character... it's nice to know that people do make mistakes sometimes so she makes a really good flawed heroine. yep i'm deff of to read the sequel! keep writing!
3/8/2006 c1 Id Pendemus
Oh my goodness, this was very, very good. You write very well and the whole time I was angry at Lily for being so stupid. :-p Very well done. :-)
Oh my goodness, this was very, very good. You write very well and the whole time I was angry at Lily for being so stupid. :-p Very well done. :-)
1/31/2006 c1 HeylinWarrior666
Hmm, interesting. You write very well, but I felt as though the dialogue was a little "out of place" and a tad juvenile. Also, Lilith was an idiot, but that can be viewed as a good and bad attribute. Although the character lacked a decent sense of reasoning, you created a character who is flawed and also very human. Good work!
Hmm, interesting. You write very well, but I felt as though the dialogue was a little "out of place" and a tad juvenile. Also, Lilith was an idiot, but that can be viewed as a good and bad attribute. Although the character lacked a decent sense of reasoning, you created a character who is flawed and also very human. Good work!
12/10/2005 c1 22EclipseKlutz
O_O
Damnit... now I hafta read the sequel...
This was very, very good - not a single character was OOC - and I liked Lily, always good to like an OC, ne? Very well writeen, btw... now I hafta go read the sequel like I said I would... oh - and I'm more then a little depressed by the way... *mumbles, pouts, and slouches away*
22EclipseKlutzO_O
Damnit... now I hafta read the sequel...
This was very, very good - not a single character was OOC - and I liked Lily, always good to like an OC, ne? Very well writeen, btw... now I hafta go read the sequel like I said I would... oh - and I'm more then a little depressed by the way... *mumbles, pouts, and slouches away*
9/15/2005 c1 4silk345
I haven't read a story like yours in a long time. It very good. How can your make drama work so well? Somethimes, I felt like I was going to cry. It was beautiful. I think it's a masterpiece of the Disney fanfiction!
4silk345I haven't read a story like yours in a long time. It very good. How can your make drama work so well? Somethimes, I felt like I was going to cry. It was beautiful. I think it's a masterpiece of the Disney fanfiction!
9/8/2005 c1 hulahula
way too fast was the ending..i still kinda liked it tho =]
way too fast was the ending..i still kinda liked it tho =]
4/30/2005 c1 SoulPoet
My God. LILY IS A FREAKIN IDIOT! I'M AT LEAST 5 YEARS YOUNGER THAN HER AND EVEN I HAVE ENOUGH COMMON SENSE NOT TO DO EVERYTHING SHE DID! SHE'S RETARDED! GAH! *sighs*
Sorry. I just INFURIATES me when girls act so naive and stupid. *smacks Lily* You had it good, SO WHY DID YOU SCREW IT UP SO BADLY? *Shakes her* WHY?
My God. LILY IS A FREAKIN IDIOT! I'M AT LEAST 5 YEARS YOUNGER THAN HER AND EVEN I HAVE ENOUGH COMMON SENSE NOT TO DO EVERYTHING SHE DID! SHE'S RETARDED! GAH! *sighs*
Sorry. I just INFURIATES me when girls act so naive and stupid. *smacks Lily* You had it good, SO WHY DID YOU SCREW IT UP SO BADLY? *Shakes her* WHY?
4/25/2005 c1 4YoukoElfMaiden
WOW. You are so good! I enjoyed this story so much, I was looking forward to finishing it all day at school! You have added to my inspiration to write my own Clopin-fic, so thanks for that. I'm off to look for the sequel!
4YoukoElfMaidenWOW. You are so good! I enjoyed this story so much, I was looking forward to finishing it all day at school! You have added to my inspiration to write my own Clopin-fic, so thanks for that. I'm off to look for the sequel!
1/15/2005 c1 11Ermine aka Tree
Wow! It was really good! You did a great job! Any fic that makes me so worked up that I want to stab my computer and kill a character (in this case, Mathias) is definitely good in my opinion. And Clopin was so sweet to Lily! *looks forward to reading the sequel*
Just a note to the other reviewers who said Lily was stupid, closed-minded, etc.: There ARE some people in the world like that... plus women in those days didn't have too much power, so it seems fit that she would be scared sometimes.
11Ermine aka TreeWow! It was really good! You did a great job! Any fic that makes me so worked up that I want to stab my computer and kill a character (in this case, Mathias) is definitely good in my opinion. And Clopin was so sweet to Lily! *looks forward to reading the sequel*
Just a note to the other reviewers who said Lily was stupid, closed-minded, etc.: There ARE some people in the world like that... plus women in those days didn't have too much power, so it seems fit that she would be scared sometimes.
10/21/2004 c1 Karen Y
I simply adored the story.Never ever thought of a plot anywhere near this.Needs some more description,though.And the ending should have more impact and suspense.
I simply adored the story.Never ever thought of a plot anywhere near this.Needs some more description,though.And the ending should have more impact and suspense.