for One Small Step6/3/2011 c1 sunnysunshineRM
I really enjoyed this story. Especially when you expounded on that episode.
I really enjoyed this story. Especially when you expounded on that episode.
8/15/2006 c1 Ayjah
:) I have not seen the episode this is based after but love the j/c dynamic and was able to follow along :) well done
:) I have not seen the episode this is based after but love the j/c dynamic and was able to follow along :) well done
3/13/2004 c1 Laura
Very nice, very nice. Beautifully written and good portration of the characters. Please continue...
Very nice, very nice. Beautifully written and good portration of the characters. Please continue...
11/17/2003 c1 
84Lattelady
Wonderful insight into that episode. You did a great job. I can see the characaters acting just as you've written them.
84LatteladyWonderful insight into that episode. You did a great job. I can see the characaters acting just as you've written them.
11/15/2003 c1 97JadziaKathryn
I really like how you pointed out that Janeway almost always agrees with Seven on matters of scientific interest. I hadn't really thought of that before, but it's true. Now you've gone and made me think! ;)
97JadziaKathrynI really like how you pointed out that Janeway almost always agrees with Seven on matters of scientific interest. I hadn't really thought of that before, but it's true. Now you've gone and made me think! ;)
11/14/2003 c1 12Raven Sage
Tuvok as first officer so would not fly...
(I'd shove him out, say the nameless ensign did it)
I love this story. I honestly have to agree with you and say that after awhile he felt neglected. They both share the blame, but there was a time that she drew away from him probably more so because she felt he wanted her to then any other reason.
What I'm trying to say is (lol) Good story, I like your portryal of Chakotay and your resolution.
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
12Raven SageTuvok as first officer so would not fly...
(I'd shove him out, say the nameless ensign did it)
I love this story. I honestly have to agree with you and say that after awhile he felt neglected. They both share the blame, but there was a time that she drew away from him probably more so because she felt he wanted her to then any other reason.
What I'm trying to say is (lol) Good story, I like your portryal of Chakotay and your resolution.
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)