for Scars5/6/2004 c1
11Alliance Webb
*claps hands wildly*
Bravo, bravo!
LOL, it's so refreshing to see someone who knows how to write slash out here in fanfiction land. Someone who doesn't focus on the sex part of the story but rather on the love part of the story. It's beautiful and actually made me smile - that's the kind of slash that's good. I say bravo! Keep up the writing, I have a feeling you're making your way onto the favorite author's list...
11Alliance Webb*claps hands wildly*
Bravo, bravo!
LOL, it's so refreshing to see someone who knows how to write slash out here in fanfiction land. Someone who doesn't focus on the sex part of the story but rather on the love part of the story. It's beautiful and actually made me smile - that's the kind of slash that's good. I say bravo! Keep up the writing, I have a feeling you're making your way onto the favorite author's list...
11/22/2003 c1
7quadi9
very interesting, and different. i liked it mucho. teehehe, yep indeedy. Peace Love n Sodomy
7quadi9very interesting, and different. i liked it mucho. teehehe, yep indeedy. Peace Love n Sodomy
11/21/2003 c1
21Polkat
lovely.
[note: am really running out of inspiration for reviews, don't take it personally... i'm just not very good at them in the first place and its 10 o clock ish now][that's late... no, really]
There was no point, they had no sense of differentiating between pride and cowardice. Only degrees of pain
great line: total despair, wonderful... and love the way he focuses on little things and the way you said soemthing along the lines of "one more night and he'd go mad" and then lo, remus appears...
oh the irony.
[told you it was late]
21Polkatlovely.
[note: am really running out of inspiration for reviews, don't take it personally... i'm just not very good at them in the first place and its 10 o clock ish now][that's late... no, really]
There was no point, they had no sense of differentiating between pride and cowardice. Only degrees of pain
great line: total despair, wonderful... and love the way he focuses on little things and the way you said soemthing along the lines of "one more night and he'd go mad" and then lo, remus appears...
oh the irony.
[told you it was late]
11/18/2003 c1
8Bobolac
I'm not always a big S/R fan, but this was v. well written and thoughtful. Great Job and keep up the good work!
8BobolacI'm not always a big S/R fan, but this was v. well written and thoughtful. Great Job and keep up the good work!
11/17/2003 c1
2Kookie Dough
that was actually quite weel writen, although im not much of a fan for Sirius/Remus.
Good work!
2Kookie Doughthat was actually quite weel writen, although im not much of a fan for Sirius/Remus.
Good work!
