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5Socially Awkward Bunny
First off, to the user freaking out about Blaise's gender is: Honestly. Your words may stop the cyropi from writing again if she saw that, and that thought annoys me. SO. MUCH. Plus, Blaise's gender wasn't known until later in the series, like when HP and the Half-Blood Prince was out (2005). And since this fic was started in early 2004... *pointed look* She is not twisted, sick, or stupid. Don't say stuff like that, please.
Okay, and to the dear author: This is really, really good. Please update? It's been YEARS. This was such a sparkly story, you know? Still is. I keep hoping you're writing a chapter right now. I read this, and feel really sad because there's a huuuge chance of it never being finished and that's depressing. ;_; This is one of the only Dramione fics I've ever read and actually LIKED. Draco was adorable in the Library, Hermione isn't one-dimensional, and you actually focus on some points other than DM/HG like Harry's angsting and Ron and etc.
5Socially Awkward BunnyFirst off, to the user freaking out about Blaise's gender is: Honestly. Your words may stop the cyropi from writing again if she saw that, and that thought annoys me. SO. MUCH. Plus, Blaise's gender wasn't known until later in the series, like when HP and the Half-Blood Prince was out (2005). And since this fic was started in early 2004... *pointed look* She is not twisted, sick, or stupid. Don't say stuff like that, please.
Okay, and to the dear author: This is really, really good. Please update? It's been YEARS. This was such a sparkly story, you know? Still is. I keep hoping you're writing a chapter right now. I read this, and feel really sad because there's a huuuge chance of it never being finished and that's depressing. ;_; This is one of the only Dramione fics I've ever read and actually LIKED. Draco was adorable in the Library, Hermione isn't one-dimensional, and you actually focus on some points other than DM/HG like Harry's angsting and Ron and etc.
3/29 c31 JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight
WHY THE ** IS BLAISE A GIRL IN THIS DAMN STORY. In your other story, Broken, he is a guy like he should be. It's seriously annoying to see you constantly making Blaise out to be a girl. I understand that this is your story and you can do whatever you please with it, but changing the characters genders is just sick and twisted and stupid.
WHY THE ** IS BLAISE A GIRL IN THIS DAMN STORY. In your other story, Broken, he is a guy like he should be. It's seriously annoying to see you constantly making Blaise out to be a girl. I understand that this is your story and you can do whatever you please with it, but changing the characters genders is just sick and twisted and stupid.
3/17 c46
10InspiringLight
I'm not going to go through the process of saying how wonderful this fic is and just how much I look forward to the next chapter.
Three words: Please. Update. Soon.
I don't know if that will happen, considering the complete lack of activity in regards to this fic for years, but do know that there are those who wait for another chapter. I really like how you portray Draco, and how for once Ron and Harry didn't go on a mad rage when they found out Draco & Hermione's friendship, and how you built each character to be their own, to grow.
If you're still out there, those three words. You're a wonderful at writing.
10InspiringLightI'm not going to go through the process of saying how wonderful this fic is and just how much I look forward to the next chapter.
Three words: Please. Update. Soon.
I don't know if that will happen, considering the complete lack of activity in regards to this fic for years, but do know that there are those who wait for another chapter. I really like how you portray Draco, and how for once Ron and Harry didn't go on a mad rage when they found out Draco & Hermione's friendship, and how you built each character to be their own, to grow.
If you're still out there, those three words. You're a wonderful at writing.
2/17 c46 centaur525
I cannot say how disappointed I am at the fact that this story has been discontinued. . .it's one of those rare finds on fanfiction that makes you remember that there are some great writers out there, which is why it sucks when those great writers drop a story! This one's up there with Gravidy's, God of the Lost, another great discontinued fic, and I just hate that I'll never know how these story end!
I cannot say how disappointed I am at the fact that this story has been discontinued. . .it's one of those rare finds on fanfiction that makes you remember that there are some great writers out there, which is why it sucks when those great writers drop a story! This one's up there with Gravidy's, God of the Lost, another great discontinued fic, and I just hate that I'll never know how these story end!
2/14 c46 Sarsha
i hope you get the next chapter out soon :)
i hope you get the next chapter out soon :)
2/13 c24 Sarsha
sometime during the future of this story you should have a chapter where Draco and Hermonie go flying! I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DID!
sometime during the future of this story you should have a chapter where Draco and Hermonie go flying! I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER IF YOU DID!
2/13 c8 Sarsha
i normally wait until im done reading before i review but, well you were begging and i felt really mean... I love it! I would have never ever ever thought of Draco as a half fallen angel and it fits it really really fits! Thank you for writing this it rocks!
i normally wait until im done reading before i review but, well you were begging and i felt really mean... I love it! I would have never ever ever thought of Draco as a half fallen angel and it fits it really really fits! Thank you for writing this it rocks!
1/20 c46 Eva
I absolutely hate the fact that this story seems abandoned because it has so much potential. It was lovely up to the point where it went no more.
I absolutely hate the fact that this story seems abandoned because it has so much potential. It was lovely up to the point where it went no more.
1/12 c36 Socially Awkward Bunny
Awww. I can just imagine Draco, looking up to Hermione with eyes wide in guilt and innocence and horror and such..
Awww. I can just imagine Draco, looking up to Hermione with eyes wide in guilt and innocence and horror and such..
1/12 c16 Socially Awkward Bunny
I like this chapter! :) Don't know why it's particularly caught my interest, but it has.
I like this chapter! :) Don't know why it's particularly caught my interest, but it has.
1/12 c3 Socially Awkward Bunny
Wow, this is unexpected. So, you're saying Draco never really felt pride or anger or anything of the sort, even when taunting the trio? This is interesting. :D
Wow, this is unexpected. So, you're saying Draco never really felt pride or anger or anything of the sort, even when taunting the trio? This is interesting. :D
12/28/2012 c46 Epi Lepi
It's such a shame this fic was never finished. When I had just started high school and this fic was still being updated you were my favorite Dramione author. Over the past month I've been rereading a lot of your stories and I'm really glad that I still love them. I almost skipped reading this again since I new it was unfinished but I'm glad I didn't. I seriously could not stop reading. If you still read these Cyropi and life has quieted down for you I hope you consider coming back to us.
It's such a shame this fic was never finished. When I had just started high school and this fic was still being updated you were my favorite Dramione author. Over the past month I've been rereading a lot of your stories and I'm really glad that I still love them. I almost skipped reading this again since I new it was unfinished but I'm glad I didn't. I seriously could not stop reading. If you still read these Cyropi and life has quieted down for you I hope you consider coming back to us.
