for The Long Winding Road12/9/2009 c1
1GRandElusYon
is there any possibility of you doing a prequal of sorts for this story? telling about how they got together and leading up to them having ryan? absolutely adore this story.
1GRandElusYonis there any possibility of you doing a prequal of sorts for this story? telling about how they got together and leading up to them having ryan? absolutely adore this story.
12/19/2006 c16
87untapdtreasure
aw how unbeliebably sappy! i'm about to cry here...*sniff* totally beautiful and i loved it and why did it have to end? LOL! i was still holding out hope that ryan was somehow...alive *sigh*
Sassy
87untapdtreasureaw how unbeliebably sappy! i'm about to cry here...*sniff* totally beautiful and i loved it and why did it have to end? LOL! i was still holding out hope that ryan was somehow...alive *sigh*
Sassy
12/19/2006 c15 untapdtreasure
Bobby smiled. They hadn’t had anyone over to eat but Alex’s family. It would be a nice change. He agreed, “It’ll be nice. I’ll cook. She can’t cook.”
Alex slapped at his arm. She argued, “Excuse me? I can cook. I just might not be some master chef like you.”
LOL that is why I always say alex can't cook! lol i think she can...but not good :)
Sassy
Bobby smiled. They hadn’t had anyone over to eat but Alex’s family. It would be a nice change. He agreed, “It’ll be nice. I’ll cook. She can’t cook.”
Alex slapped at his arm. She argued, “Excuse me? I can cook. I just might not be some master chef like you.”
LOL that is why I always say alex can't cook! lol i think she can...but not good :)
Sassy
12/19/2006 c13 untapdtreasure
Alex smiled again. Finding what she was looking for, she replied, “No. You missed the Goren show, but you might get to see it soon. He usually plays psychiatrist. I enjoy it in there. I hate it when he does it at home.”
Walking away from behind her, Bobby grabbed the piece of paper that was printed. Reading it over, he defended himself, “I don’t do it on purpose.”
Alex smiled. She followed Bobby towards the elevator. Nikolas followed her. Alex snatched the paper and announced, “That’s what makes it worse.”
THAT is the BEST set of lines in this chapter! that was so funny and so cute :) and for some odd reason I can so hear them talking to each other this way :)
Sassy
Alex smiled again. Finding what she was looking for, she replied, “No. You missed the Goren show, but you might get to see it soon. He usually plays psychiatrist. I enjoy it in there. I hate it when he does it at home.”
Walking away from behind her, Bobby grabbed the piece of paper that was printed. Reading it over, he defended himself, “I don’t do it on purpose.”
Alex smiled. She followed Bobby towards the elevator. Nikolas followed her. Alex snatched the paper and announced, “That’s what makes it worse.”
THAT is the BEST set of lines in this chapter! that was so funny and so cute :) and for some odd reason I can so hear them talking to each other this way :)
Sassy
12/19/2006 c12 untapdtreasure
and alex has become the cold bitch i always knew she was capable of being :) lol i love it when authors bring in NW she always makes the great angst for these two...lovable detectives :)
good job
Sassy
and alex has become the cold bitch i always knew she was capable of being :) lol i love it when authors bring in NW she always makes the great angst for these two...lovable detectives :)
good job
Sassy
12/19/2006 c9 untapdtreasure
Clinching her jaw and fist, Alex pivoted and punched Bobby right in the jaw. Turning again, Alex stormed off, leaving Deakins and Carver in shock. Bobby just stared off after her.
OMG I love this part! this is so...GO ALEX!
i am really enjoying this story :)
Sassy
Clinching her jaw and fist, Alex pivoted and punched Bobby right in the jaw. Turning again, Alex stormed off, leaving Deakins and Carver in shock. Bobby just stared off after her.
OMG I love this part! this is so...GO ALEX!
i am really enjoying this story :)
Sassy
12/19/2006 c8 untapdtreasure
LOL! oh my! that jamie...she reminds me a tiny bit of her aunt :D i like it :)
Sassy
LOL! oh my! that jamie...she reminds me a tiny bit of her aunt :D i like it :)
Sassy
9/16/2006 c16 amsley
aw that was a cute ending! i liked the idea of the stroy a lot...the only thing that kind of threw me off was the fact that supposedly ryan had been killed a few weeks before but i feel like there just wasnt enough emotion from alex and bobby. they just kind of talked about it...i dunno. good job!
aw that was a cute ending! i liked the idea of the stroy a lot...the only thing that kind of threw me off was the fact that supposedly ryan had been killed a few weeks before but i feel like there just wasnt enough emotion from alex and bobby. they just kind of talked about it...i dunno. good job!
7/7/2006 c2 untapdtreasure
i just wanted to mention that i don't like your very much right this minute...:( pouts and cries...where is my bobby?
Sassy
i just wanted to mention that i don't like your very much right this minute...:( pouts and cries...where is my bobby?
Sassy
4/24/2006 c16 sky m
favourite line:
".Bobby caressed her cheek. He got serious again, “I’m sorry about that. It should have been years ago.”
Alex sighed softly. She tried to assure him, “It’s OK. We made that decision together. We both knew why. We did it now, in our own time, and I’m happy.”
I'm glad it's finished, now I can go and read it in one piece! I'm amazed at how you juggle all these stories at the same time. Thanks, keep going!
favourite line:
".Bobby caressed her cheek. He got serious again, “I’m sorry about that. It should have been years ago.”
Alex sighed softly. She tried to assure him, “It’s OK. We made that decision together. We both knew why. We did it now, in our own time, and I’m happy.”
I'm glad it's finished, now I can go and read it in one piece! I'm amazed at how you juggle all these stories at the same time. Thanks, keep going!
