for In The Twilight4/14/2008 c1 
8Midnight's Queen
Does this mean that M&C died? or was it pre-Naming? Other than those two Q's, I liked it, and I don't like very many poems, and I hate writing Poetry.(Maybe because I'm not creative)
8Midnight's QueenDoes this mean that M&C died? or was it pre-Naming? Other than those two Q's, I liked it, and I don't like very many poems, and I hate writing Poetry.(Maybe because I'm not creative)
12/7/2007 c1 3padfootROX
wow wow wow wow wow
thats cool i love the beginning expecially it really seems to flow:):D:)
3padfootROXwow wow wow wow wow
thats cool i love the beginning expecially it really seems to flow:):D:)
12/4/2007 c1 35burninganchors
Very, very good. It makes me think of the battle that will probably happen in The Singing.
It needs more rhythm, but other than that it was fantastic!
35burninganchorsVery, very good. It makes me think of the battle that will probably happen in The Singing.
It needs more rhythm, but other than that it was fantastic!
12/4/2007 c1 26xLaramiex
omg this poem is amazing! I absolutely love it!
You seem to confuse the old words in one or two places, though. Or it could be me being wrong.
keep writing xx
26xLaramiexomg this poem is amazing! I absolutely love it!
You seem to confuse the old words in one or two places, though. Or it could be me being wrong.
keep writing xx
12/3/2007 c1 Icelands
Very elegant style. I like it, and it does put me in mind of the Pellinor books.
Thanks for sharing! (And I'm going to add this to the Pellinor C2!)
-Icelands
Very elegant style. I like it, and it does put me in mind of the Pellinor books.
Thanks for sharing! (And I'm going to add this to the Pellinor C2!)
-Icelands
2/28/2004 c1 Guest
Beautiful work, but original work is now at 'w.fictionpress.net'
You'll probably get more responses for your work there too.
Keep writing!
Beautiful work, but original work is now at 'w.fictionpress.net'
You'll probably get more responses for your work there too.
Keep writing!