for Light And Shadow4/1/2004 c1 Little Leila
That, ...that, ...was absolutely amazing. O.O Kai was totally in character. And I thought that an angry Tson was quite nice for a change. ^^ I love it. ^^
Keep up the style. ^_~
That, ...that, ...was absolutely amazing. O.O Kai was totally in character. And I thought that an angry Tson was quite nice for a change. ^^ I love it. ^^
Keep up the style. ^_~
3/31/2004 c1 
30TechnoRanma
Amazing fic! You do the POV real well, you've always managed to put a deep quality into your fics that I don't think can be duplicated! This story was totally you, and may Tyson and Kai always be together, in the end!
- Ranma
30TechnoRanmaAmazing fic! You do the POV real well, you've always managed to put a deep quality into your fics that I don't think can be duplicated! This story was totally you, and may Tyson and Kai always be together, in the end!
- Ranma
3/31/2004 c1 15Bloody Mary
Not that fluffy fluff. :P You definatelly got Kai's personality well here. ^^
15Bloody MaryNot that fluffy fluff. :P You definatelly got Kai's personality well here. ^^
3/31/2004 c1 279redex
Very well done, for fluff ^^ I like your charectorization, it's rather interesting, but i think you rushed the kai and takao meeting. then again you did say you cut alot out. well, i enjoyed procrastinating by reading it, it's a pretty good peice. ^^
keep it up
Red
279redexVery well done, for fluff ^^ I like your charectorization, it's rather interesting, but i think you rushed the kai and takao meeting. then again you did say you cut alot out. well, i enjoyed procrastinating by reading it, it's a pretty good peice. ^^
keep it up
Red
3/30/2004 c1 moumoukech
hey Lrigelbbub, that fic rocks! keep up the good work and before I go, I wanted to tell you that the fic's idea was well thought of and that it was well written. Sorry for repeating myself but your fic is awesome!
hey Lrigelbbub, that fic rocks! keep up the good work and before I go, I wanted to tell you that the fic's idea was well thought of and that it was well written. Sorry for repeating myself but your fic is awesome!
3/30/2004 c1 17Cj4Dj
Waii! I read this on OTKH i believe arlier today! AW MAN SO CUTE! Really nice written yay! *hugs*
Jen
17Cj4DjWaii! I read this on OTKH i believe arlier today! AW MAN SO CUTE! Really nice written yay! *hugs*
Jen
3/30/2004 c1 Lost Secret
Aww...that was sweet, sad and fluffy all in one. I loved it! ^^
I did catch a few spelling mistakes:
"I felt like I was reading to puke but reminded myself that I was Hiwatari Kai..." = I'm pretty sure you ment ready and not reading.
There were a couple of others too, but I forgot where they were. ^^;
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Hope you write more soon!
Aww...that was sweet, sad and fluffy all in one. I loved it! ^^
I did catch a few spelling mistakes:
"I felt like I was reading to puke but reminded myself that I was Hiwatari Kai..." = I'm pretty sure you ment ready and not reading.
There were a couple of others too, but I forgot where they were. ^^;
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Hope you write more soon!