for DOOMSDAY........11/24/2012 c1 Guest
all the reviewers can suck it if they don't like it. I am the author and I just wrote this for fun. I know the true origin story and there is nothing wrong with writing sumething different...
all the reviewers can suck it if they don't like it. I am the author and I just wrote this for fun. I know the true origin story and there is nothing wrong with writing sumething different...
7/20/2005 c1 
3TNV-Superman
Hey man, the Story was decent even with your on take on Superman. I would love to see how you take the story from here with some new chapters!
Elias Tackabery's little note to ya was wrong by the way. Superman and Doomsday was equal in power during that time, or else he wouldn't of been able to kill Superman. Another Review said he can't, but Doomsday can die only to later come back alive. Its one of those imortal flaws.
3TNV-SupermanHey man, the Story was decent even with your on take on Superman. I would love to see how you take the story from here with some new chapters!
Elias Tackabery's little note to ya was wrong by the way. Superman and Doomsday was equal in power during that time, or else he wouldn't of been able to kill Superman. Another Review said he can't, but Doomsday can die only to later come back alive. Its one of those imortal flaws.
2/2/2003 c1 1piercedpunk13
Great story. I loved it. I'm a Superman lover/fan. That was great... it kept me reading it! Good job! *claps*
~~Ashley~~
1piercedpunk13Great story. I loved it. I'm a Superman lover/fan. That was great... it kept me reading it! Good job! *claps*
~~Ashley~~
10/22/2002 c1 Phatty
Hey, man I'm a freaking Superman geek and i loved this fic. don't listen to those jive talkin' playa haters. my favorite fics is when people shake up origins and stuff like that. IT's imagination,BABY!
Hey, man I'm a freaking Superman geek and i loved this fic. don't listen to those jive talkin' playa haters. my favorite fics is when people shake up origins and stuff like that. IT's imagination,BABY!
12/15/2001 c1 Thomasina G-Stars
Don't you just hate it when people say your writing sucks?... I know I do... I wish we could just go kill all those people... Personally, I liked the story...:-)
Don't you just hate it when people say your writing sucks?... I know I do... I wish we could just go kill all those people... Personally, I liked the story...:-)
12/4/2001 c1 Seth
Great Very interresting Im thinking of writing a story myself All the rest of the reviews said you suck, They were dead wrong
Great Very interresting Im thinking of writing a story myself All the rest of the reviews said you suck, They were dead wrong
9/16/2001 c1 James Birdsong
Yes very good *smile*
Yes very good *smile*
7/19/2001 c1 supermanfan
good story fits in perfectly w\ the real comic!
good story fits in perfectly w\ the real comic!
6/30/2001 c1 Jeffery
hey man, I just read your story, and then the reviews, and I gotta say, ignore what most of them said. Just because you had a different (and may I say, better) take on Doomsday's origing does not make you derivitave. Good work.
hey man, I just read your story, and then the reviews, and I gotta say, ignore what most of them said. Just because you had a different (and may I say, better) take on Doomsday's origing does not make you derivitave. Good work.
5/28/2001 c1 Bob the Devil and God
Doomsday was created on Krypton by a scientist who sped up the process of evolution in order to create a perfect being. He can't die; he just goes to sleep a while and wakes up massively stronger. Doomsday was an ok gimmick, but they over-used him. Even Wonder Girl's fought a Doomsday clone. What's that tell you?
Doomsday was created on Krypton by a scientist who sped up the process of evolution in order to create a perfect being. He can't die; he just goes to sleep a while and wakes up massively stronger. Doomsday was an ok gimmick, but they over-used him. Even Wonder Girl's fought a Doomsday clone. What's that tell you?
4/12/2001 c1 135Charles Xavier
I strongly suggest you read 'Superman/Doomsday: Prey/Hunter'. Doomsday's origin is revealed in it. You have it all wrong in your fic.
135Charles XavierI strongly suggest you read 'Superman/Doomsday: Prey/Hunter'. Doomsday's origin is revealed in it. You have it all wrong in your fic.
2/22/2001 c1 mike hutchinson
not bad, not bad at all
not bad, not bad at all
2/8/2001 c1 bob
god that sucked sooooo bad! you suck as a writer...go to hell
god that sucked sooooo bad! you suck as a writer...go to hell
1/28/2001 c1 Gman
I gotta say, I liked the original Doomsday character better. But the whole "premonition" thing really brought it down because in the comics, no one but the readers saw Doomsday coming.
I gotta say, I liked the original Doomsday character better. But the whole "premonition" thing really brought it down because in the comics, no one but the readers saw Doomsday coming.
1/25/2001 c1 BiGuy261
Oo0o0o My god, that sucked really bad. Um, can you say "rip off"?
Oo0o0o My god, that sucked really bad. Um, can you say "rip off"?