for Harry Potter Goes Poetry12/4/2004 c1
4Katina Wellson
Lovely! I really like this. It all flowed wonderfully. You are a great writer! I love your writing style and I plan to read more of your work. Keep writing.
4Katina WellsonLovely! I really like this. It all flowed wonderfully. You are a great writer! I love your writing style and I plan to read more of your work. Keep writing.
4/14/2004 c1
1lama
wowsers, that was bloody brilliant! I especially loved the description of the teachers. You're rhyming is fantastic (*ahem* makes sense, unlike anything i've seen myself or my peers do.)
anyway. i also wanted to say thanks for reviewing my fic :)
~lama
1lamawowsers, that was bloody brilliant! I especially loved the description of the teachers. You're rhyming is fantastic (*ahem* makes sense, unlike anything i've seen myself or my peers do.)
anyway. i also wanted to say thanks for reviewing my fic :)
~lama
4/13/2004 c1
20Amandah Leigh
I fixed the charms thing, (and technically MM is deputy headmistress) but I'm sorry it's so hard to read right now...when I made changes I forgot to put it in poem format, and it ended up like a story instead...so if you try to read it and it's weird, wait like 12-24 hours...
:)
Thanks!
20Amandah LeighI fixed the charms thing, (and technically MM is deputy headmistress) but I'm sorry it's so hard to read right now...when I made changes I forgot to put it in poem format, and it ended up like a story instead...so if you try to read it and it's weird, wait like 12-24 hours...
:)
Thanks!
4/13/2004 c1
27Kerrymdb
Very nice! I have the utmost respect for anyone who can write rhyming poetry. Cause I can't! lol! Only error I see is that Flitwick teaches charms, and technically McGonnagal is assistent headmistress. Other than that, very good job! :)
27KerrymdbVery nice! I have the utmost respect for anyone who can write rhyming poetry. Cause I can't! lol! Only error I see is that Flitwick teaches charms, and technically McGonnagal is assistent headmistress. Other than that, very good job! :)
4/12/2004 c1
13dracolover99
not bad, i liked it. it flowed quite well and was a good summery of the frist book. just one thing, i think you got some of the teachers wrong, i think Sprout teaches herbology...oh well whateva, good job
13dracolover99not bad, i liked it. it flowed quite well and was a good summery of the frist book. just one thing, i think you got some of the teachers wrong, i think Sprout teaches herbology...oh well whateva, good job
