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4/3/2006 c1 2FireMimi
Yeah funny maybe (it's true though)=3
12/17/2005 c1 6Whale Shark 7
Interesting. I always liked Pohatu. I liked the line about Kopaka being the angsty one. That was funny.
7/22/2005 c1 Kim Kinne
Um, actually they DID go by Le-Koro

NOT Po-Koro!
6/14/2005 c1 Kim Kinne
Where had all those angry thoughts come from? Pohatu was the jovial one, not the angsty one. Angst was more along Kopaka’s lines.

my favorite part
5/11/2005 c1 Alpha Prime
This is really good, except one thing, the combination of Takanuva and Makuta is called Takutanuva. has literally everything on BIONICLE.
4/12/2005 c1 57CodeLyoko
lol! That had me cracking up! Good story!
9/17/2004 c1 Useless Insane Writer
Col! I've tried to do this for years (Oops, doesn't work with Bionicle, they've been around only since 2001). All right, so only since 2003. After I saw the movie. I-evol-elcinioB! But I always get the personalitys wrong! Write one about Lewa! (And Onua and Tahu and Takanuva and Hahli and Jaller and Vakama and...)
9/11/2004 c1 30DiabloCat
Hey, that was really good! You captured his thoughts nicely! Good style and wording too. Good job!
8/11/2004 c1 Terena
O.o The kid and the girl? Since when did Pohatu think like that? And I want to see Lewa!
5/16/2004 c1 Anime Girl 666 feeling lazy
Naughty as in something bad, not naughty as in something.. "naughty" *winkwink*
5/15/2004 c1 DarkXeno
What did he mean by "naughty"?

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