for Beautiful Broken Silence1/14/2012 c18 
2MoonStar100
I really really loved this story and I hate that it's coming to an end. Cant wait to read more from you!
2MoonStar100I really really loved this story and I hate that it's coming to an end. Cant wait to read more from you!
11/1/2011 c2 Belle A Lestrange
Although I am loving permission there are a few spelling errors.
Instead of, for example, "coming over hear" it should be "coming over here"
and "which lied on his bed" should have been either "that lied on his bed", or "which lay on his bed"
~ Belle x
Although I am loving permission there are a few spelling errors.
Instead of, for example, "coming over hear" it should be "coming over here"
and "which lied on his bed" should have been either "that lied on his bed", or "which lay on his bed"
~ Belle x
11/29/2010 c18 Debbie37
Even though I read the whole thing, it was all too much for me. It was too emo- with the cutting, even if there was a reason for it later. The characters were too out of character, especially Pansy. I didn't like where the story ended, but at least it was after the battle. It was written well though, there were hardly any errors.
Even though I read the whole thing, it was all too much for me. It was too emo- with the cutting, even if there was a reason for it later. The characters were too out of character, especially Pansy. I didn't like where the story ended, but at least it was after the battle. It was written well though, there were hardly any errors.
8/18/2010 c18 6Dax-TheBurningDancerOfFlames
awwwww... happy ending, I just gotta know something though, does Pansy end up with Blaise? And, BTW, that was the BEST drarry fic I've ever read! and I've read a lot:)
6Dax-TheBurningDancerOfFlamesawwwww... happy ending, I just gotta know something though, does Pansy end up with Blaise? And, BTW, that was the BEST drarry fic I've ever read! and I've read a lot:)
8/11/2010 c4 40TalaDentro
Okay Hermione being on the Quidditch team is totally unrealistic. I don't see why you didn't just use the team from canon. It would've taken two seconds to google it.
I think you've done a good job with your portrayal of a suicidal Harry. However some of you character interactions are weird, esp with Draco.
40TalaDentroOkay Hermione being on the Quidditch team is totally unrealistic. I don't see why you didn't just use the team from canon. It would've taken two seconds to google it.
I think you've done a good job with your portrayal of a suicidal Harry. However some of you character interactions are weird, esp with Draco.
6/13/2010 c18 Imalena
I'm glad it was Voldemort who made Harry act that way, it explain his behavior.
Thanks for the story, it was interesting reading it
I'm glad it was Voldemort who made Harry act that way, it explain his behavior.
Thanks for the story, it was interesting reading it
10/27/2009 c17 grimmich
dude, **ING AWESOME! I loved the battle scene, what Harry did to Voldimort, and especially the eyes part!
dude, **ING AWESOME! I loved the battle scene, what Harry did to Voldimort, and especially the eyes part!
10/27/2009 c16 grimmich
oops! Well that teaches you, if you know someone is dead of tells you to touch a nasty glowing scraped knee DON'T LISTEN!
oops! Well that teaches you, if you know someone is dead of tells you to touch a nasty glowing scraped knee DON'T LISTEN!
10/27/2009 c15 grimmich
I understand that it is hard to write smut scenes which is why i leave it to those who are more capable than me... But I loved it, I think you did very good! /)^.^(\
I understand that it is hard to write smut scenes which is why i leave it to those who are more capable than me... But I loved it, I think you did very good! /)^.^(\
10/27/2009 c14 grimmich
you've just got to love Ron, Blaze, and Hermione's reactions! But poor Draco, that had to hurt!
you've just got to love Ron, Blaze, and Hermione's reactions! But poor Draco, that had to hurt!