for Beautiful Broken Silence5/17/2004 c7 
3ShamefulDesire
Like I said it is still very depressing, but it is improving a little. Even though it is sad it is a very good fanficn. Hurry and update!
3ShamefulDesireLike I said it is still very depressing, but it is improving a little. Even though it is sad it is a very good fanficn. Hurry and update!
5/17/2004 c6 ShamefulDesire
It is pretty good so far. Just a little depressing though. Write something very happy soon!
It is pretty good so far. Just a little depressing though. Write something very happy soon!
5/17/2004 c6 Vic
keep going! I really wanna know what happens
keep going! I really wanna know what happens
5/16/2004 c6 spunky slytherin
dude, i love the plot of your story...this is awesome. i also really like that you tossed some veela stuff in there, that always spices a story up. i can't wait until you update!
~SS~
dude, i love the plot of your story...this is awesome. i also really like that you tossed some veela stuff in there, that always spices a story up. i can't wait until you update!
~SS~
5/16/2004 c1 4Swiftrunner
I Like. Keep writing. Oh, and I read your profile. The Giver should be a Movie! I love that book.
4SwiftrunnerI Like. Keep writing. Oh, and I read your profile. The Giver should be a Movie! I love that book.
5/16/2004 c6 7The Stunning Lies of Lullabies
Ohh! Good ending to the chapter,I am VERY impressed! Just one thing is that he grew a 'conscience' not a 'conscious' sorry,but I'm a nitpick freak. God, I love this story like aeting apples and bananas. You have GOT to update soon, this story captivates me in a way that I find myself wishing it never ends, yet when it does, it has the most marvellous endings. Update soon! I love you for writing so well! **, I love you!
-Pirate-
7The Stunning Lies of LullabiesOhh! Good ending to the chapter,I am VERY impressed! Just one thing is that he grew a 'conscience' not a 'conscious' sorry,but I'm a nitpick freak. God, I love this story like aeting apples and bananas. You have GOT to update soon, this story captivates me in a way that I find myself wishing it never ends, yet when it does, it has the most marvellous endings. Update soon! I love you for writing so well! **, I love you!
-Pirate-
5/16/2004 c5 The Stunning Lies of Lullabies
*sigh* I love you. On to the next chapter! THIS IS THE BEST **ING STORY EVER! XO
*sigh* I love you. On to the next chapter! THIS IS THE BEST **ING STORY EVER! XO
5/16/2004 c6 Guest
love of god write more
love of god write more
5/16/2004 c4 The Stunning Lies of Lullabies
Bravo. Ok, there were quite a few mistakes in spelling, but the quiditch scene was great. I liked how you didn't go on and on about it, it was good. All around this was up to your standards (excluding the mistakes) Maybe sometime in the future you should make a scene were Draco and Harry struggle because Harry's trying to cut himself and Draco is trying to stop him and...SMOOCH! *sigh* oh, ignore my ramblings, and I'm on to the next chapter. (And a bit of advice, why not try to make Harry not so sudden and impulsive about cutting? Like, slowly inching towards the object before plunging it into his arm instead of making a beeline because the beeline is more obvious. Also, if and when Harry starts to heal, make it subtle and slow, not all of a sudden mushy gushy) Love ya!
Bravo. Ok, there were quite a few mistakes in spelling, but the quiditch scene was great. I liked how you didn't go on and on about it, it was good. All around this was up to your standards (excluding the mistakes) Maybe sometime in the future you should make a scene were Draco and Harry struggle because Harry's trying to cut himself and Draco is trying to stop him and...SMOOCH! *sigh* oh, ignore my ramblings, and I'm on to the next chapter. (And a bit of advice, why not try to make Harry not so sudden and impulsive about cutting? Like, slowly inching towards the object before plunging it into his arm instead of making a beeline because the beeline is more obvious. Also, if and when Harry starts to heal, make it subtle and slow, not all of a sudden mushy gushy) Love ya!
5/16/2004 c6 Dracomine
WOW! Awesome! Wonderful! Oh so many words to compliment your story. Keep Updately! I shall support your story the whole way.
WOW! Awesome! Wonderful! Oh so many words to compliment your story. Keep Updately! I shall support your story the whole way.
5/9/2004 c3 tina
THIS IS GOOD! update soon
THIS IS GOOD! update soon
5/9/2004 c3 Dracomine
I love it! It's so sad. How could Harry cut himself? Wa! Please continue.
I love it! It's so sad. How could Harry cut himself? Wa! Please continue.
5/8/2004 c3 The Stunning Lies of Lullabies
Er...
I dunno, it wasn't one of your best chapters, and I hate to sound like a **, but you usually write better. Anyway, do update soon. *Authoress gives reviewer weird look as she notices complete change in emotions* @_@
-Pirate-
Er...
I dunno, it wasn't one of your best chapters, and I hate to sound like a **, but you usually write better. Anyway, do update soon. *Authoress gives reviewer weird look as she notices complete change in emotions* @_@
-Pirate-