for Operation BOMBS1/10/2007 c9 
15Cyrix
Whoa, action pack plus suspense! Very surprising that it was actually all plan to trick Father. Wow wally and nigel have cousins? lol hologram rainbow monkey nice. overall, Nice story!
15CyrixWhoa, action pack plus suspense! Very surprising that it was actually all plan to trick Father. Wow wally and nigel have cousins? lol hologram rainbow monkey nice. overall, Nice story!
9/29/2004 c9 548Ghostwriter
Well, I've never watched Kids: Codename Eternity, but this was a great story. You definitely have talent, and as soon as I can get over my temporary writer's block, I'll put up the next chapter. I kind of have an idea on what I want to do, I just don't know how to put it down.
548GhostwriterWell, I've never watched Kids: Codename Eternity, but this was a great story. You definitely have talent, and as soon as I can get over my temporary writer's block, I'll put up the next chapter. I kind of have an idea on what I want to do, I just don't know how to put it down.
9/13/2004 c8 2Dragon Rider22
yey yey, you finished, and a very good ending to an epic battle, good vs. evil for family, that has got to be the strongest bond oyu cna find, family, even if you don't like them, you are obligated to love them, and save them if you can.
2Dragon Rider22yey yey, you finished, and a very good ending to an epic battle, good vs. evil for family, that has got to be the strongest bond oyu cna find, family, even if you don't like them, you are obligated to love them, and save them if you can.
9/13/2004 c7 Dragon Rider22
oh no oh no, what is going to happen, you are so evil if you let the DCFDTL win, you would be so evil.
oh no oh no, what is going to happen, you are so evil if you let the DCFDTL win, you would be so evil.
8/28/2004 c6 Dragon Rider22
Hmm, you should update more. you like Harry potter, right? im sure you do, read my story, i need more reviews.
Hmm, you should update more. you like Harry potter, right? im sure you do, read my story, i need more reviews.
8/28/2004 c5 Dragon Rider22
S.T.A.N.K. cool, is Bradly that girl who's not numbah 5's brother? good chapter.
S.T.A.N.K. cool, is Bradly that girl who's not numbah 5's brother? good chapter.
6/16/2004 c4 Lamierina Blu
It had it's parts but it was really confussing at times. I think you need to slow down and watch what you type but other then all that it was good but why did they need Bradly? That's what i couldn't figure out
It had it's parts but it was really confussing at times. I think you need to slow down and watch what you type but other then all that it was good but why did they need Bradly? That's what i couldn't figure out
6/2/2004 c4 MVT
Very good story, but I thought that there would be more about Bradley in it. Oh well, please continue to update.
Very good story, but I thought that there would be more about Bradley in it. Oh well, please continue to update.
5/29/2004 c3 Dragon Rider22
short chapter. you promised butkikking and so-far iv'e only seen the bad guy winning, and what was it with the bracelet?
short chapter. you promised butkikking and so-far iv'e only seen the bad guy winning, and what was it with the bracelet?
5/29/2004 c2 18Cyber Commander
Man, Tigress is SADIDISTIC!
I like that in a villain. But just what is she capable of? Does she have magical powers or something?
You might want to expand these chapters a little longer. We're only getting about page-length stuff here.
- Cyber Commander
18Cyber CommanderMan, Tigress is SADIDISTIC!
I like that in a villain. But just what is she capable of? Does she have magical powers or something?
You might want to expand these chapters a little longer. We're only getting about page-length stuff here.
- Cyber Commander
5/28/2004 c2 Max K
Only a few minor flaws. Just put things in a bet better detail. But overall, this is prety good.
Only a few minor flaws. Just put things in a bet better detail. But overall, this is prety good.
5/28/2004 c2 2Dragon Rider22
oh no what is she gonna do to numbuh 3? what did she do to numbuh 4? and what in the world does P.I.P.E.R. mean?
2Dragon Rider22oh no what is she gonna do to numbuh 3? what did she do to numbuh 4? and what in the world does P.I.P.E.R. mean?
5/28/2004 c1 18Cyber Commander
This was a little too - short, but I like the idea. Try to expand a little in the future.
I'd like to use this opportunity to make a little shameless plug - I just posted my own KND fanfic, "Operation P.O.W.E.R.P.U.F.F.", and as you can probably tell, it is a crossover between the Kids Next Door and the Powerpuff Girls! (and wait until you see who my co-host is!) Any support will be appreciated.
- Cyber Commander
18Cyber CommanderThis was a little too - short, but I like the idea. Try to expand a little in the future.
I'd like to use this opportunity to make a little shameless plug - I just posted my own KND fanfic, "Operation P.O.W.E.R.P.U.F.F.", and as you can probably tell, it is a crossover between the Kids Next Door and the Powerpuff Girls! (and wait until you see who my co-host is!) Any support will be appreciated.
- Cyber Commander