for Hi, my name is Craig not really4/24/2012 c15 The Commoner
Awsome, anywho I have an O.C. for ya!
Name: Opal
Apperance: The same as PKMN Manga character Yellow
personality: Funny, sometimes Random, Gracefull, Seren.
PKMN: Leaf (Leafeon) Glace ((Glass-ay))(Glaceon)
P.S. sorry I used Sinnoh PKMN, But Espeon and umbreon were taken and there both Females (Leaf & Glace)
Awsome, anywho I have an O.C. for ya!
Name: Opal
Apperance: The same as PKMN Manga character Yellow
personality: Funny, sometimes Random, Gracefull, Seren.
PKMN: Leaf (Leafeon) Glace ((Glass-ay))(Glaceon)
P.S. sorry I used Sinnoh PKMN, But Espeon and umbreon were taken and there both Females (Leaf & Glace)
5/20/2010 c1 senpai-kun
I didn't read the actual story - just the summary. It brought me great lulz, since that's exactly what I'm...
/sobs
I didn't read the actual story - just the summary. It brought me great lulz, since that's exactly what I'm...
/sobs
10/22/2005 c1 Kuzo
I agree, you're crazy... totally...
The story's good, so good I can't believe this lunatic;s writing it... -_-
I agree, you're crazy... totally...
The story's good, so good I can't believe this lunatic;s writing it... -_-
4/3/2005 c15 xZero84x
hahaha..sorry for not reviewing,i read it but didnt review..^-^'..Yay!Shadow you won with harley!
Shadow:..i wonder who the shadow figures are.
Its obviously Shinji and kenji!
Shadow:Baka!their in the tournament!
;.; why do you always spoil my plans?
Shadow:its what i do,its why im here..^^
Well..-MUK YOU CANT ENTER THE RACE WITHOUT REGISTERING!+^^'
Shadow:..what..a mix combination of emotions.Oh well..PARTY AT THE FORUMS!
Wha-HEY! SHADOW!
Runs after her..
BYE!HOLLY!
hahaha..sorry for not reviewing,i read it but didnt review..^-^'..Yay!Shadow you won with harley!
Shadow:..i wonder who the shadow figures are.
Its obviously Shinji and kenji!
Shadow:Baka!their in the tournament!
;.; why do you always spoil my plans?
Shadow:its what i do,its why im here..^^
Well..-MUK YOU CANT ENTER THE RACE WITHOUT REGISTERING!+^^'
Shadow:..what..a mix combination of emotions.Oh well..PARTY AT THE FORUMS!
Wha-HEY! SHADOW!
Runs after her..
BYE!HOLLY!
2/25/2005 c15 
1Muk master
Muk master: Ah, a new chapter! How we have been waiting for this! It's wonderful too see that Hematite haven't lost her touch!
Harley: Gah! I'm so bushed! X_X
Muk: Muk muk muk!
Muk master: Yeah, quit complaining! You won alongside with Shadow! And it was a wonderful race!
Harley: Your right, still I'm really tired right now! And thirsty! Z!
Muk master:
1Muk masterMuk master: Ah, a new chapter! How we have been waiting for this! It's wonderful too see that Hematite haven't lost her touch!
Harley: Gah! I'm so bushed! X_X
Muk: Muk muk muk!
Muk master: Yeah, quit complaining! You won alongside with Shadow! And it was a wonderful race!
Harley: Your right, still I'm really tired right now! And thirsty! Z!
Muk master:
2/22/2005 c15 10RiotDragon
Another nice chapter! ~claps~ Anyway, I'm glad you used Shang in you story. ^^ You play his part perfectly, especially the non cooking thing. Anyway, I'm glad you made another chapter. And I was wondering when the Mount Battle thing was going to start.
10RiotDragonAnother nice chapter! ~claps~ Anyway, I'm glad you used Shang in you story. ^^ You play his part perfectly, especially the non cooking thing. Anyway, I'm glad you made another chapter. And I was wondering when the Mount Battle thing was going to start.
2/15/2005 c12 RiotDragon
What happened to you? I really liked this story. x.x Hope to see more chapters.
What happened to you? I really liked this story. x.x Hope to see more chapters.
12/13/2004 c9 BlackNinjaJin
Shinji:...i dont think i really care bout winning the tournament...i WONT give it my all...
Kenji:why?
Shinji: (shrugs)no point too...ill just forfeit thats all i guess...shang can have my place if he wants to win badly...(evil smile)no point to fight someone who wants to win so much like that...if they lose there spirit will get crushed but...ill fight him if he's determined to win...
Kenji:whats the difference?
Shinji:if you want to win badly you become blinded by your thoughts and your sights are clouded,but if you are determined it shows sports manship to give it your all and make it a great battle...
Kenji:i see...OO!ON PAIRINGS!CAN I BE PAIRED WITH JASMINE THE GYM LEADER FROM OLIVINE!(has hearts in eyes)...you can pair my bro with Winona teh fortree gym leader...
Shinji: (blushing like mad)he-hey...we're just friends...thas all.
Kenji:nu-uh,your just confused bout your feelings shin.You know you like her but your heads playing tricks on you...
Shinji:...i dont think i really care bout winning the tournament...i WONT give it my all...
Kenji:why?
Shinji: (shrugs)no point too...ill just forfeit thats all i guess...shang can have my place if he wants to win badly...(evil smile)no point to fight someone who wants to win so much like that...if they lose there spirit will get crushed but...ill fight him if he's determined to win...
Kenji:whats the difference?
Shinji:if you want to win badly you become blinded by your thoughts and your sights are clouded,but if you are determined it shows sports manship to give it your all and make it a great battle...
Kenji:i see...OO!ON PAIRINGS!CAN I BE PAIRED WITH JASMINE THE GYM LEADER FROM OLIVINE!(has hearts in eyes)...you can pair my bro with Winona teh fortree gym leader...
Shinji: (blushing like mad)he-hey...we're just friends...thas all.
Kenji:nu-uh,your just confused bout your feelings shin.You know you like her but your heads playing tricks on you...
11/5/2004 c14 BlackNinjaJin
...not much to say-
kenji: shinji why'd you hafta enter the tourney!i wanna go to the events
shinji:*trying desperately to pry his brother off of his leg*...iwantedtobattle!nowgetoff!
...right well who are going to use for the challenge shinji?
shinji:easy...haunter and sneasel,unless kenji's willing to let me borrow his alakazam or noctowl ...
kenji:NOO!not kazam and noct!;.; their-
shinji:-mine...i caught them for you.
...man you guys talk way too much.maybe i should call br-
the duo:NO!FINE WE"LL STOP!O.O
heheh..
shinji:...
kenji:^_^...
shinji:..let's review the moves okey?
name:haunter
all moves learned:
shadow ball=inflicts massive amount of damage.
destiny bond=causes foe to faint if the move user faints.
imprison=prevents foe from the four moves attacking pokemon knows.
lick=has a 30% chance of paralyzation.
shadow punch=always strike susessfully.
rest=falls asleep healing itself.(he knows when to wake up by himself)
sleep talk(i like this one^-^)=protects pokemon by using moves randomly if your pokemon has a sleep condition.
snore=damages foe.
teleport=can well..teleport it self.
beat up=attacks foe number of times equal to your number of healthy pokemon
nature:relaxed
name:alakazam
all moves learned:
psychic
psywave
psybeam
confusion
reflect
hypnosis
dream eater
glare
grasswhistle(i know its a grass move but its cool!it casues sleep)
magic coat
meditate
mirror coat
refresh
recover
teleport
psychic dragon rage=makes a psychic dragon rage that hits 5 times!
nature:relaxed
team moves:
follow me
psychic dragon=they use the're powers to creat a dragon that'll last for 3 turns.
black pheonix=haunter uses shadow ball and alakazam uses his psychic powers to make a pheonix out of it...
final assult=haunter floats up and covers the whole stadium in shadow balls,alakazam then uses a combined attack of psybeam confusion and psywave...
okey so what moves will you use?
shinji:u.u ...hmm...haunter will have...i dont know im going to let holly to decide...
kenji:aww...too bad!YOUR GONNAA-
dont say it...@@
kenji:*pouts*kk...
shinji:err...-+ enough time to end this NOW!
...
...not much to say-
kenji: shinji why'd you hafta enter the tourney!i wanna go to the events
shinji:*trying desperately to pry his brother off of his leg*...iwantedtobattle!nowgetoff!
...right well who are going to use for the challenge shinji?
shinji:easy...haunter and sneasel,unless kenji's willing to let me borrow his alakazam or noctowl ...
kenji:NOO!not kazam and noct!;.; their-
shinji:-mine...i caught them for you.
...man you guys talk way too much.maybe i should call br-
the duo:NO!FINE WE"LL STOP!O.O
heheh..
shinji:...
kenji:^_^...
shinji:..let's review the moves okey?
name:haunter
all moves learned:
shadow ball=inflicts massive amount of damage.
destiny bond=causes foe to faint if the move user faints.
imprison=prevents foe from the four moves attacking pokemon knows.
lick=has a 30% chance of paralyzation.
shadow punch=always strike susessfully.
rest=falls asleep healing itself.(he knows when to wake up by himself)
sleep talk(i like this one^-^)=protects pokemon by using moves randomly if your pokemon has a sleep condition.
snore=damages foe.
teleport=can well..teleport it self.
beat up=attacks foe number of times equal to your number of healthy pokemon
nature:relaxed
name:alakazam
all moves learned:
psychic
psywave
psybeam
confusion
reflect
hypnosis
dream eater
glare
grasswhistle(i know its a grass move but its cool!it casues sleep)
magic coat
meditate
mirror coat
refresh
recover
teleport
psychic dragon rage=makes a psychic dragon rage that hits 5 times!
nature:relaxed
team moves:
follow me
psychic dragon=they use the're powers to creat a dragon that'll last for 3 turns.
black pheonix=haunter uses shadow ball and alakazam uses his psychic powers to make a pheonix out of it...
final assult=haunter floats up and covers the whole stadium in shadow balls,alakazam then uses a combined attack of psybeam confusion and psywave...
okey so what moves will you use?
shinji:u.u ...hmm...haunter will have...i dont know im going to let holly to decide...
kenji:aww...too bad!YOUR GONNAA-
dont say it...@@
kenji:*pouts*kk...
shinji:err...-+ enough time to end this NOW!
...
10/29/2004 c8 Muk master
Harley:(sing song voice)Write, write, oh Hematite, come on, when you write we sing, yeah one more time, write, write, oh Hematite, the girl who writes with swing! TAKE IT BOYS!
Pokémon choir:Muk, muk, sharpedo, sableye, duskull, muk, SHARPEDO!
Muk, muk, sharpedo, sableye, duskull, muk!
Muk master:O_O What the devil are you doing now?
Harley:Me and the boys thought we should sing a song to Hematite, ya know to cheer her on while writing the next chapter!
Muk master:
Harley:(sing song voice)Write, write, oh Hematite, come on, when you write we sing, yeah one more time, write, write, oh Hematite, the girl who writes with swing! TAKE IT BOYS!
Pokémon choir:Muk, muk, sharpedo, sableye, duskull, muk, SHARPEDO!
Muk, muk, sharpedo, sableye, duskull, muk!
Muk master:O_O What the devil are you doing now?
Harley:Me and the boys thought we should sing a song to Hematite, ya know to cheer her on while writing the next chapter!
Muk master:
10/23/2004 c13 Zero84
shadow:problely...but i dont know...,houndoom would be best i guess,but ninetails is pretty slick,and quilava may not be a dog but he's swift,slick,and a good dodger...i guess ill wait for the others decision...^-^
shadow:problely...but i dont know...,houndoom would be best i guess,but ninetails is pretty slick,and quilava may not be a dog but he's swift,slick,and a good dodger...i guess ill wait for the others decision...^-^
10/23/2004 c14 Muk master
Harley:Hey Shadow, how about entering Mightyena for the dog contest! He's really cool and awsome and powerfull and cruel!
Muk master:Well you sound like a Mightyena fan. Although I don't think Mightyena can join a dog contest.
Harley:WHAT! Why not?
Muk master:Becuase Mightyena is a hyena pokémon and hyenas aren't dogs. As a matter of fact there not even related to dogs, they've got more in common with ferrets and animals like that!
Harley:Dammit! Alright then, enter Houndoom! He's cool enough to win!
Muk:MUK MUK!
Muk master:What's up with him!
Harley:-_-; He wants Hematite to hold a coolness contest! Apperently he intends to win.
Muk master:*_*;
Harley:Hey Shadow, how about entering Mightyena for the dog contest! He's really cool and awsome and powerfull and cruel!
Muk master:Well you sound like a Mightyena fan. Although I don't think Mightyena can join a dog contest.
Harley:WHAT! Why not?
Muk master:Becuase Mightyena is a hyena pokémon and hyenas aren't dogs. As a matter of fact there not even related to dogs, they've got more in common with ferrets and animals like that!
Harley:Dammit! Alright then, enter Houndoom! He's cool enough to win!
Muk:MUK MUK!
Muk master:What's up with him!
Harley:-_-; He wants Hematite to hold a coolness contest! Apperently he intends to win.
Muk master:*_*;
10/22/2004 c14 RiotDragon
Yay! ~hugs Arcanine~ I knew you could do it! Oh, by the way...Friestorm was Arcanines name...but I kinda sorta forgot to put Mightyeena's. So if you want to know, his name is Shinobi. Cause he's so cool! Anyways, no I'm not going to sue you. Just keep writing. Mwaha!
Shang
Yay! ~hugs Arcanine~ I knew you could do it! Oh, by the way...Friestorm was Arcanines name...but I kinda sorta forgot to put Mightyeena's. So if you want to know, his name is Shinobi. Cause he's so cool! Anyways, no I'm not going to sue you. Just keep writing. Mwaha!
Shang
10/22/2004 c1 Smelly Man
Gotta review this again, so, maybe I can get your FULL email address. maybe you can email me and I'll respond by giving you that website I said I would give you
Gotta review this again, so, maybe I can get your FULL email address. maybe you can email me and I'll respond by giving you that website I said I would give you