for Going Back10/30/2004 c20 t't
...um wheres the next chapter
...um wheres the next chapter
10/30/2004 c20 alejandra
really good keep up the good work your doing great!^_^
really good keep up the good work your doing great!^_^
10/30/2004 c1 KAILOVER
WOW Hey Man some of us r clueless about PDA
WOW Hey Man some of us r clueless about PDA
10/28/2004 c20 
18The Rogue Prince
Oh! Now I get it! Naraku! I'm so blonde sometimes... Anyhoo, keep it up! ^_^
18The Rogue PrinceOh! Now I get it! Naraku! I'm so blonde sometimes... Anyhoo, keep it up! ^_^
10/27/2004 c20 kmmgirly
well, this is a really, really interesting story. but it's hillarious! can't wait to see what else you have happen! update soon! Ja ne~
well, this is a really, really interesting story. but it's hillarious! can't wait to see what else you have happen! update soon! Ja ne~
10/26/2004 c20 41CreativeStrive1025
Hey,
The writers always get what they want,...so i'm reviewing ! Anyway,...great work on this story and the chapter was good to,...a little short...but good ! Don't take that the wrong way,..short isn't bad to me ! Anyway,..keep up the great work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON !
41CreativeStrive1025Hey,
The writers always get what they want,...so i'm reviewing ! Anyway,...great work on this story and the chapter was good to,...a little short...but good ! Don't take that the wrong way,..short isn't bad to me ! Anyway,..keep up the great work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON !
10/26/2004 c20 1DLC Fan
Cool chapter, love your story, was that guy wiht the baboon Naraku? Or am I stupid. Which I already know of, but anyways update soon! I love your story! Can't get enough of it.
Demon
1DLC FanCool chapter, love your story, was that guy wiht the baboon Naraku? Or am I stupid. Which I already know of, but anyways update soon! I love your story! Can't get enough of it.
Demon
10/26/2004 c20 Jamie
I'll check out your songfic. Umm this chapter was pretty good. Look over it again though because there were a few spelling errors. Other than that, good job. UPDATE SOON. Bye.
I'll check out your songfic. Umm this chapter was pretty good. Look over it again though because there were a few spelling errors. Other than that, good job. UPDATE SOON. Bye.
10/26/2004 c17 No Added Preservatives
Italics makes it hard to read.
Watch your spelling and grammar - otherwise good.
Italics makes it hard to read.
Watch your spelling and grammar - otherwise good.
10/13/2004 c19 alejandra
really good!^_^
really good!^_^
10/12/2004 c19 18The Rogue Prince
?Huh? I'm rather confused by this chapter... Um, could you explain this slightly better? Thanks! Up-date soon!
18The Rogue Prince?Huh? I'm rather confused by this chapter... Um, could you explain this slightly better? Thanks! Up-date soon!
10/10/2004 c19 Jamie
I was starting to wonder if you were having writer's block or what. Like the baboon cartoon stitched on Naraku's pants that's cute. Don't worry I won't bite your head off. I'll eat brownies until you update instead. No, I'm just a little crazy tonight. Though it was short, it was good. I figured she was the guardian but how is she connected with Shippo besides that? Oh well, find out later. UPDATE SOON. Bye.
I was starting to wonder if you were having writer's block or what. Like the baboon cartoon stitched on Naraku's pants that's cute. Don't worry I won't bite your head off. I'll eat brownies until you update instead. No, I'm just a little crazy tonight. Though it was short, it was good. I figured she was the guardian but how is she connected with Shippo besides that? Oh well, find out later. UPDATE SOON. Bye.
10/9/2004 c19 1DLC Fan
Yeah, it's been a while. I hope you update sooner this time.
Demon love your story!
1DLC FanYeah, it's been a while. I hope you update sooner this time.
Demon love your story!
10/9/2004 c19 rubychik09
This chappie was about info.. right... and the baboon person was.. i'm guessing Naraku? I still like ur story tho!
This chappie was about info.. right... and the baboon person was.. i'm guessing Naraku? I still like ur story tho!