for Ninja Gaiden The Destiny of the Hayabusa Ninja12/25/2012 c1 m
i want to tell you about a amazing person thats named hayate the graetest power ever the hevenes of the windes he is the wind hes a graet fight out the players dead or alive 5 he has the cutest brown eyes and wonderfull brown hair and he has a band a round his head wich lookes alsom any ways he has a sister named kusume and hes 23 years old some people attaked his village so he left and went in to dead or alive 5 he has alsom costumes no won can face him he crosses his armes a lot and his moves sparkles in my eyes because hes amazing he sayes this wont take long and no way and hes japaness he has a bets freind named hayabusa hayate he has powerfull windes ayane sticks with him every ware what he sayes she does any ways hes very smart and hes wise like his father he always knows what to do he travles good and hes very strong and hes my hero i look up to him and thats all thank you fore reading
i want to tell you about a amazing person thats named hayate the graetest power ever the hevenes of the windes he is the wind hes a graet fight out the players dead or alive 5 he has the cutest brown eyes and wonderfull brown hair and he has a band a round his head wich lookes alsom any ways he has a sister named kusume and hes 23 years old some people attaked his village so he left and went in to dead or alive 5 he has alsom costumes no won can face him he crosses his armes a lot and his moves sparkles in my eyes because hes amazing he sayes this wont take long and no way and hes japaness he has a bets freind named hayabusa hayate he has powerfull windes ayane sticks with him every ware what he sayes she does any ways hes very smart and hes wise like his father he always knows what to do he travles good and hes very strong and hes my hero i look up to him and thats all thank you fore reading
4/21/2012 c1 
2APAZAROZO
You said you loved Ninja Gaiden, and you let Ryu be defeated by a Mugen Tenshin... I thinl it would be more reasoneble if Ryu just let Ayane keep going, after a tough battle (for her, of course), because he understands her connection to Genra... And, being attacked without being able to evade...? Are you sure you played Ninja Gaiden? Remember, that the Dragon Ninja it's descendat of Dragon? That he blocked and evaded bullets wuth ease? The waves of enemies he defeated, alone? Where's all that?
The main difference about Hayabusa, and Mugen Tenshin is, that the Mugen Tenshin are numerous, and are a strong Ninja Clan. The Hayabusa are few elites, trained to an extend that are not considerer humans. Also, the main line of the clan, are descendants of Dragons. Other than that... Nice story! Hope you continue it sometime!
2APAZAROZOYou said you loved Ninja Gaiden, and you let Ryu be defeated by a Mugen Tenshin... I thinl it would be more reasoneble if Ryu just let Ayane keep going, after a tough battle (for her, of course), because he understands her connection to Genra... And, being attacked without being able to evade...? Are you sure you played Ninja Gaiden? Remember, that the Dragon Ninja it's descendat of Dragon? That he blocked and evaded bullets wuth ease? The waves of enemies he defeated, alone? Where's all that?
The main difference about Hayabusa, and Mugen Tenshin is, that the Mugen Tenshin are numerous, and are a strong Ninja Clan. The Hayabusa are few elites, trained to an extend that are not considerer humans. Also, the main line of the clan, are descendants of Dragons. Other than that... Nice story! Hope you continue it sometime!
4/4/2005 c2 Emanuel
SandRockx51 I am enjoing your story please updated constamly so my friends and i can read it. Thank you.
SandRockx51 I am enjoing your story please updated constamly so my friends and i can read it. Thank you.
9/24/2004 c1 8Unforgiven Wolf
well the first chapter is really questionable to everyone so if some say Ryu won he could if you say he lost well he lost, either way its a fanfic plus no one will know until DOA4 who won.
anyway interesting line up but the cat bit was rather... no not disturbing but rahter cruel to the animal thats all.
anyway next chatper to reveiw (I'm doing it right now).
OK how on earth did that happen of those two getting back together? you better start explaining becuase thats where the story may fall on its face, just pointing out thats all.
and the story is rather puzzling becuase noting seem to be happening until next chapter, it was like they never even hated each other for a day thats all.
anyway update soon
Wolf
8Unforgiven Wolfwell the first chapter is really questionable to everyone so if some say Ryu won he could if you say he lost well he lost, either way its a fanfic plus no one will know until DOA4 who won.
anyway interesting line up but the cat bit was rather... no not disturbing but rahter cruel to the animal thats all.
anyway next chatper to reveiw (I'm doing it right now).
OK how on earth did that happen of those two getting back together? you better start explaining becuase thats where the story may fall on its face, just pointing out thats all.
and the story is rather puzzling becuase noting seem to be happening until next chapter, it was like they never even hated each other for a day thats all.
anyway update soon
Wolf
9/6/2004 c2 Lan Di
No matter how far this story goes, make sure you include your Omake in each chapter! lol
No matter how far this story goes, make sure you include your Omake in each chapter! lol
8/28/2004 c2 priest not of the cloth
um, you know ryu actually won doa 3 right? that's 2 out of the 3 tournies for haybusa (Him with doa 2 and 3)
if you look at the final fights, ryu has a cutscene unique to him (All other characters share the same type of cutscenes with eachother, i believe there are 2)
so that's an obviose indication he won, just thought i'd mention that
um, you know ryu actually won doa 3 right? that's 2 out of the 3 tournies for haybusa (Him with doa 2 and 3)
if you look at the final fights, ryu has a cutscene unique to him (All other characters share the same type of cutscenes with eachother, i believe there are 2)
so that's an obviose indication he won, just thought i'd mention that