for Boom9/22/2004 c1 
3the.end.is.forever
I love! the bluntness of the last sentence, totally makes you want to jump out of your seat and save Chloe. it's the greatest. And I love the way her mind is just going and going at the end..you'd expect it but you wouldnt, you know?
3the.end.is.foreverI love! the bluntness of the last sentence, totally makes you want to jump out of your seat and save Chloe. it's the greatest. And I love the way her mind is just going and going at the end..you'd expect it but you wouldnt, you know?
9/21/2004 c1 Silence-endlessecho
Wonderful! I wasn't expecting this to be in Chloe's POV. So, when I realized it was I started over again. This is a great peice. Love the metaphors throughout and it was so true to her character.
Great insight!
Wonderful! I wasn't expecting this to be in Chloe's POV. So, when I realized it was I started over again. This is a great peice. Love the metaphors throughout and it was so true to her character.
Great insight!
9/21/2004 c1 Mercy
Chloe go boom? :( Ouchie. Seriously, that hurt. But you wrote her voice very well. That's just like Chloe - brain constantly working, think-think-thinking right up til the end.
But I don't want Chloe to go boom! Wah!
Chloe go boom? :( Ouchie. Seriously, that hurt. But you wrote her voice very well. That's just like Chloe - brain constantly working, think-think-thinking right up til the end.
But I don't want Chloe to go boom! Wah!