for A Hero's End3/12/2009 c1 
2hudson911
The prolouge gives off the sense that something is about to happen, but not so as seriuos than what you explained in the summary. Great beginning.
2hudson911The prolouge gives off the sense that something is about to happen, but not so as seriuos than what you explained in the summary. Great beginning.
7/14/2008 c11 Dark Archer
First off I loved the story, and you could do a cross over with Ghost whisperer, or Dark Angel, or any action adventure TV show, In the Crossover Tony isn't dead, but everyone thinks he is, He starts a new life in the crossover, and becomes invaluable to his new coworkers. One of his new coworkers is injured and someone is out to get him/her, so Tony requests that the person is brought to the Hospital in Norfolk, the safe house for NCIS agents. And maybe he meets his son there, who became an NCIS agent like his dad. you don't have to follow this exactly or even use the ideas here, I'm just putting ideas out there, story starters of a sort. Tell about tony's feelings about faking his death and everyone from his old life thinking he is dead. OK? Sayanara ^^ Happy Writing
First off I loved the story, and you could do a cross over with Ghost whisperer, or Dark Angel, or any action adventure TV show, In the Crossover Tony isn't dead, but everyone thinks he is, He starts a new life in the crossover, and becomes invaluable to his new coworkers. One of his new coworkers is injured and someone is out to get him/her, so Tony requests that the person is brought to the Hospital in Norfolk, the safe house for NCIS agents. And maybe he meets his son there, who became an NCIS agent like his dad. you don't have to follow this exactly or even use the ideas here, I'm just putting ideas out there, story starters of a sort. Tell about tony's feelings about faking his death and everyone from his old life thinking he is dead. OK? Sayanara ^^ Happy Writing
11/3/2004 c11 19BeckettFan
Cool! this is really good! I like his name! its clever! plz post a sequal! coz i reckon Gibbs and Kate should get together! plz!
Love Megan
19BeckettFanCool! this is really good! I like his name! its clever! plz post a sequal! coz i reckon Gibbs and Kate should get together! plz!
Love Megan
11/3/2004 c11 5wolviesgal
This is such a great story. I would love to see a sequel and/or a crossover. Keep up the good writing!
5wolviesgalThis is such a great story. I would love to see a sequel and/or a crossover. Keep up the good writing!
11/3/2004 c11 28the-Bookworm-Princess
*sniffle* That was so good. :) I really liked it, especially the part where she named him Leroy Anthony; so great! It was very interesting, and I would enjoy a sequel. :D
28the-Bookworm-Princess*sniffle* That was so good. :) I really liked it, especially the part where she named him Leroy Anthony; so great! It was very interesting, and I would enjoy a sequel. :D
11/2/2004 c10 19BeckettFan
OMG! you killed Tony! you bastard! (lol sorry i wasnt gonna add the bastard, but it reminded me of South Park so i did) newayz, Kate has a kid? and its Tonys? yay! whats his name? and if its only been a year, the kid would be less than a year old, and it wouldnt be able to kiss the TV. newayz plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
19BeckettFanOMG! you killed Tony! you bastard! (lol sorry i wasnt gonna add the bastard, but it reminded me of South Park so i did) newayz, Kate has a kid? and its Tonys? yay! whats his name? and if its only been a year, the kid would be less than a year old, and it wouldnt be able to kiss the TV. newayz plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
10/22/2004 c9 BeckettFan
NO! you cant kill Tony! thats so mean! you actually made me cry! dont kill Tony! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
NO! you cant kill Tony! thats so mean! you actually made me cry! dont kill Tony! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
10/22/2004 c9 6Halighfataliter
God, you're so cruel ! It's so sad! And just when we finally have a Tate !
Pleaase, have pity on us (especially me) and don't let us wait too long for the next chapter!
Bisous
6HalighfataliterGod, you're so cruel ! It's so sad! And just when we finally have a Tate !
Pleaase, have pity on us (especially me) and don't let us wait too long for the next chapter!
Bisous
10/21/2004 c9 5southerncrossgirl
OMG - You nearly had me in tears. Poor Tony but at least he went out saving Gibbs and we know that Gibbs will take care of Kate. Can't wait for the closing chapters and Epilogue - Please post soon.
5southerncrossgirlOMG - You nearly had me in tears. Poor Tony but at least he went out saving Gibbs and we know that Gibbs will take care of Kate. Can't wait for the closing chapters and Epilogue - Please post soon.
10/21/2004 c8 19BeckettFan
Cool! this is really good! lol! yay! i love Tate! (i love Kibbs too but thats besides the point!) plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
19BeckettFanCool! this is really good! lol! yay! i love Tate! (i love Kibbs too but thats besides the point!) plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
10/18/2004 c7 BeckettFan
Cool! this is really good! yay! Tate-ness! lol! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan
Cool! this is really good! yay! Tate-ness! lol! plz post more soon! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan