for Coffee Spoons8/21/2009 c1 Em Masen
I have no idea what to really say, this is just a very intense look into someone's mind. It's beautiful.
I have no idea what to really say, this is just a very intense look into someone's mind. It's beautiful.
2/14/2005 c1 Loubie
so sad! thanks for writing, it' very good.
so sad! thanks for writing, it' very good.
12/16/2004 c1 
1Arin Rowan
it creates pensivity. i like the writing style- from the watcher, and from the doer.
1Arin Rowanit creates pensivity. i like the writing style- from the watcher, and from the doer.
10/16/2004 c1 RandomReviewer
Oh... this almost made me cry. Very, VERY good job. I can't find a thing to critique. :)
I did "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" for my speech and debate team last year. Great poem.
Oh... this almost made me cry. Very, VERY good job. I can't find a thing to critique. :)
I did "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" for my speech and debate team last year. Great poem.
10/15/2004 c1 2dubtheeunforgiven
great...now i'm crying, its really beautiful though, sad...but thats what makes it so beautiful...not i'm confusing myself, anyways good job
2dubtheeunforgivengreat...now i'm crying, its really beautiful though, sad...but thats what makes it so beautiful...not i'm confusing myself, anyways good job
10/13/2004 c1 9patagonia
Oh - the was just - oh. I really am amazed at the feeling, imagery and even plot you were able to work into such a short fic - quite commendable. This really is very powerful. Excellent fic.
9patagoniaOh - the was just - oh. I really am amazed at the feeling, imagery and even plot you were able to work into such a short fic - quite commendable. This really is very powerful. Excellent fic.
10/13/2004 c1 Rane2920072
I really like it! I hope that you add more to it if you can. Anyways I think it's wonderfully written!
I really like it! I hope that you add more to it if you can. Anyways I think it's wonderfully written!