for The Naked Dead, And Her4/10/2008 c1 
6two-headed fiesta
my brain had major issues processing some of the crazycrazycrazy rikkuness of the ENTIRE piece, but in the end i think it's cute? haha. rikku was on-spot PERFECT. teach me, woman! (: just kidding. i like the end especially. she would totally get his coat, had he died any other way. i betcha.
(: all i have to say is a m a z i n g job. you're my hero.
6two-headed fiestamy brain had major issues processing some of the crazycrazycrazy rikkuness of the ENTIRE piece, but in the end i think it's cute? haha. rikku was on-spot PERFECT. teach me, woman! (: just kidding. i like the end especially. she would totally get his coat, had he died any other way. i betcha.
(: all i have to say is a m a z i n g job. you're my hero.
1/22/2008 c1 A Fan
This was absolutely, gloriously, wonderfully spectacular. The way you capture Rikku's mourning is unutterably amazing and it makes me want to laugh and cry at the same time. I felt as if I am there standing beside Rikku over their graves and I could feel all of her hopeful, sad, happy, and angry emotions as if they were my own. Rikku feels so real and so tangible throughout the entire thing, after reading the last sentence and found my self unable (and I still find myself unable) to believe that Rikku's field of ancestors only exists in fiction and that if I sought it out I could not stand over the colorful blitzball that represents Tidus. This fanfiction is just to great to put into words, I love it and I envy your talents to the point that it hurts.
This was absolutely, gloriously, wonderfully spectacular. The way you capture Rikku's mourning is unutterably amazing and it makes me want to laugh and cry at the same time. I felt as if I am there standing beside Rikku over their graves and I could feel all of her hopeful, sad, happy, and angry emotions as if they were my own. Rikku feels so real and so tangible throughout the entire thing, after reading the last sentence and found my self unable (and I still find myself unable) to believe that Rikku's field of ancestors only exists in fiction and that if I sought it out I could not stand over the colorful blitzball that represents Tidus. This fanfiction is just to great to put into words, I love it and I envy your talents to the point that it hurts.
1/4/2008 c1 Maloan
This is an amazing story.
This is an amazing story.
12/28/2007 c1 o.oooo.oooooo.oooo.oo.o
This is hands down, one of the best Aurikku fics out there. It's believable and you captured Rikku's personality down to the pat. It's bitter sweet and not overly mushy or angsty.
And the last scene in this fic involving the pudding is definitely the icing on top of the cake. It's so . . . right and sweet yet also sad. I actually teared up a bit when I read this fic and I could feel Rikku's emotions.
I do hope you'll be writing more Aurikku in the future and not just a one-shot but a multi-chapter one.
Am favoriting this story.
This is hands down, one of the best Aurikku fics out there. It's believable and you captured Rikku's personality down to the pat. It's bitter sweet and not overly mushy or angsty.
And the last scene in this fic involving the pudding is definitely the icing on top of the cake. It's so . . . right and sweet yet also sad. I actually teared up a bit when I read this fic and I could feel Rikku's emotions.
I do hope you'll be writing more Aurikku in the future and not just a one-shot but a multi-chapter one.
Am favoriting this story.
11/21/2007 c1 15ENTRIKIT
I don't like Aurikku. I nearly despise it. If I ran a Rikku shrine, which I very well might because she's just awesome like that, I'd write a whole freakin' essay on why I don't like Aurikku. And with this fanfiction, I am a believer. I get it.
And you're mean for making me this way. Rawr. xD
I absolutely loved the sad little 'whe' when the blitzball deflated. I had to reread the sentence two or three times cause I didn't know it -was- a blitzball at first, but then I started laughing. ^^ And it was long, but not in a God-please-let-this-end kind of way. It was a nice long. And I really was glad you put in the part about growing your hair long - it explains why Yuna and Rikku's hair was six feet longer in the second game. xD Though realistically, two years without a haircut, Rikku's hair length is possible. Yuna's - ehh, not so much. Anyway. I babbled. But this fic is awesome, and now I can't write an anti-Aurikku essay. That takes one page of content off any future shrine. Dx Aww, darn.
You rule.
15ENTRIKITI don't like Aurikku. I nearly despise it. If I ran a Rikku shrine, which I very well might because she's just awesome like that, I'd write a whole freakin' essay on why I don't like Aurikku. And with this fanfiction, I am a believer. I get it.
And you're mean for making me this way. Rawr. xD
I absolutely loved the sad little 'whe' when the blitzball deflated. I had to reread the sentence two or three times cause I didn't know it -was- a blitzball at first, but then I started laughing. ^^ And it was long, but not in a God-please-let-this-end kind of way. It was a nice long. And I really was glad you put in the part about growing your hair long - it explains why Yuna and Rikku's hair was six feet longer in the second game. xD Though realistically, two years without a haircut, Rikku's hair length is possible. Yuna's - ehh, not so much. Anyway. I babbled. But this fic is awesome, and now I can't write an anti-Aurikku essay. That takes one page of content off any future shrine. Dx Aww, darn.
You rule.
3/24/2007 c1 2BlackRainWillFall
This is one of those short stories people love to read over and over and over again. Yep yep, it's one of those stories.
I am absolutely amazed, and left pretty much speechless. To put it simply, I guess... this is one of those stories that STICK TO ME. It will for a long time.
2BlackRainWillFallThis is one of those short stories people love to read over and over and over again. Yep yep, it's one of those stories.
I am absolutely amazed, and left pretty much speechless. To put it simply, I guess... this is one of those stories that STICK TO ME. It will for a long time.
3/21/2007 c1 2Snazzy-SNAFU
I absolutely love this story! It is a wonderfull look at Rikku post game. She is delightfully in character. This is a great overall oneshot.
2Snazzy-SNAFUI absolutely love this story! It is a wonderfull look at Rikku post game. She is delightfully in character. This is a great overall oneshot.
3/19/2007 c1 12yllom21
I liked how you wrote Rikky. You kept her in charecter, yet gave her intelligence. I liked how you wrote this and I think you did a nice job.
12yllom21I liked how you wrote Rikky. You kept her in charecter, yet gave her intelligence. I liked how you wrote this and I think you did a nice job.
12/25/2006 c1 The girl that some call Rikku
This was so sweet! I cried when I read it, I don't know why. Sadness, and grief, you know. Characterization was perfect. Keep it up.
This was so sweet! I cried when I read it, I don't know why. Sadness, and grief, you know. Characterization was perfect. Keep it up.
11/27/2006 c1 11Decidedly Odd
Wow, crack!pairing. But that was simultaneously euphoric and bittersweet, and completely Rikku. I loved it ^_^
11Decidedly OddWow, crack!pairing. But that was simultaneously euphoric and bittersweet, and completely Rikku. I loved it ^_^
11/23/2006 c1 9sexion
Well, I most certainly bow to you. ;)
That was totally damn awesome. Great characterisation, and you had me laughing, although you balanced it out perfectly with the sad bits too. I was never much of a fan of this pairing, but this most certainly is a great piece, and I think that you've got me interested in it now. ;D
9sexionWell, I most certainly bow to you. ;)
That was totally damn awesome. Great characterisation, and you had me laughing, although you balanced it out perfectly with the sad bits too. I was never much of a fan of this pairing, but this most certainly is a great piece, and I think that you've got me interested in it now. ;D
11/17/2006 c1 18SafireGriffon
Nice. I really liked the description of the Al Bhed graveyard-it sounded pretty. And I liked the way that Rikku sort of ran her words and thoughts together, and how some of them repeated themselves several times. Rikku kind of is someone who speaks without thinking, and that's going to be even more exaggerated when the only people she's talking to are dead. The idea of growing out their hair for mourning wasn't something that I would have thought of, but it certainly makes sense, doesn't it? The scene at the end was so cute, by the way. :)
18SafireGriffonNice. I really liked the description of the Al Bhed graveyard-it sounded pretty. And I liked the way that Rikku sort of ran her words and thoughts together, and how some of them repeated themselves several times. Rikku kind of is someone who speaks without thinking, and that's going to be even more exaggerated when the only people she's talking to are dead. The idea of growing out their hair for mourning wasn't something that I would have thought of, but it certainly makes sense, doesn't it? The scene at the end was so cute, by the way. :)