for Moonlight Change8/23/2011 c3 aye-know-hah
I love this story- it's one of my favorite esca fics.It's great that your rewriting and re-posting it; I can't wait to read it again!
I love this story- it's one of my favorite esca fics.It's great that your rewriting and re-posting it; I can't wait to read it again!
8/21/2011 c2 thepinkmartini
I think it's supposed to be "smug satisfaction" instead of smuggle. A few minor errors here and there but it's good!
I think it's supposed to be "smug satisfaction" instead of smuggle. A few minor errors here and there but it's good!
8/19/2011 c3 
3blackvelvet-smile
I didn't get to read this before you took it down, but I'm loving what I'm reading now. This is fantastic. The character dynamics are thought out when it comes to the new plot and not so far OOC that they're unbelievable. I'm loving it. More please more!
3blackvelvet-smileI didn't get to read this before you took it down, but I'm loving what I'm reading now. This is fantastic. The character dynamics are thought out when it comes to the new plot and not so far OOC that they're unbelievable. I'm loving it. More please more!
8/18/2011 c1 6Sadame X
Ojamashimasu!
Awesome first chapter! I love your use of imagery. The way you describe emotions really hit the spot, it's so achingly beautiful. Me likey!
Some few errors you might want to check (since you are in the process of editing): Second paragraph 'quite night' versus 'quiet night', in one paragraph there was a 'she' rather than a 'her', and a few verb tense inconsistencies, which are a pain and I am also guilty of. Minor stuff, just pointing up for the polishing, though they do not in any way dampen your storytelling.
Onward to chapter 2!
Sada-chan ♥
6Sadame XOjamashimasu!
Awesome first chapter! I love your use of imagery. The way you describe emotions really hit the spot, it's so achingly beautiful. Me likey!
Some few errors you might want to check (since you are in the process of editing): Second paragraph 'quite night' versus 'quiet night', in one paragraph there was a 'she' rather than a 'her', and a few verb tense inconsistencies, which are a pain and I am also guilty of. Minor stuff, just pointing up for the polishing, though they do not in any way dampen your storytelling.
Onward to chapter 2!
Sada-chan ♥
8/16/2011 c1 MidnightReader1
OMG when i read that you were rewriting this story I thought that you were deleting this one. I am so happy that you weren't:) Love this story, can't wait for the next update:) xx
OMG when i read that you were rewriting this story I thought that you were deleting this one. I am so happy that you weren't:) Love this story, can't wait for the next update:) xx
12/31/2010 c9 10Rena-fanfic-writer
Wow this story you wrote is really great. I'mm eager to read the rest of it then the sequal too^_^
10Rena-fanfic-writerWow this story you wrote is really great. I'mm eager to read the rest of it then the sequal too^_^
4/23/2010 c39 Mily
Oh my god!
Thank you so much for writing this story and letting all of the people read it. It is now of the favorite stories i´ve read, ususally I don´t like reading long stories because the author normally get lost in ther writing, but yours really got me interested all thru the reading, I´m really happy i got the oportunity to read it.
Oh my god!
Thank you so much for writing this story and letting all of the people read it. It is now of the favorite stories i´ve read, ususally I don´t like reading long stories because the author normally get lost in ther writing, but yours really got me interested all thru the reading, I´m really happy i got the oportunity to read it.
12/16/2009 c1 Breitta-Cerdwin
I enjoyed watching the series of Escaflowne and now I'm enjoying reading this fanfic. It is very good and I like the way you've written the characters. Now, onto the 2nd chapter!
BC
I enjoyed watching the series of Escaflowne and now I'm enjoying reading this fanfic. It is very good and I like the way you've written the characters. Now, onto the 2nd chapter!
BC
4/10/2009 c20 Steph
LoL yes I'm posting again. I love this story even more then the series for sure. It all just fits so well together and flows so nicely. And I find that I like hating Allen, I hope Van gets to kick is arse. Stupid bastard that is all I have to say, oddly though it seems more real this way with him not being all perfect, never did like that about Allen. And I almost screamed when I read the part where Van's mother was still alive and plotting/hopping to get Van and Hitomi together.
I wish they would re-due the series put with this plot instead that would be so awesome. But since that won't happen I'll just go back to enjoying this wonderful story.
LoL yes I'm posting again. I love this story even more then the series for sure. It all just fits so well together and flows so nicely. And I find that I like hating Allen, I hope Van gets to kick is arse. Stupid bastard that is all I have to say, oddly though it seems more real this way with him not being all perfect, never did like that about Allen. And I almost screamed when I read the part where Van's mother was still alive and plotting/hopping to get Van and Hitomi together.
I wish they would re-due the series put with this plot instead that would be so awesome. But since that won't happen I'll just go back to enjoying this wonderful story.
4/10/2009 c4 Steph
-squeals-
Sorry I couldn't help myself. I'm only on chapter four and I'm already in love with this story. I wish it really went like this, Van it totally true to form being so oblivious to his own feelings hahaha. Everyone just seems totally in character if you know what I mean. This is defiantly one of my most favorite fanfics yet for sure.
Can't wait to read more hehe.
-squeals-
Sorry I couldn't help myself. I'm only on chapter four and I'm already in love with this story. I wish it really went like this, Van it totally true to form being so oblivious to his own feelings hahaha. Everyone just seems totally in character if you know what I mean. This is defiantly one of my most favorite fanfics yet for sure.
Can't wait to read more hehe.