for God Has A Sense of Humor12/4/2007 c1
1k+Marie S Zachary
I LOVE IT. Luke was so sweet. Oh r and r my Gilmore Girl's story. It's called One Angel gone but she left two angels for him. It's under my Princess Dogooder Penn name
1k+Marie S ZacharyI LOVE IT. Luke was so sweet. Oh r and r my Gilmore Girl's story. It's called One Angel gone but she left two angels for him. It's under my Princess Dogooder Penn name
10/6/2005 c1
7inquisitive me
Excellently executed. Spot on with characterisations and dialouge and descriptions were good! Well done!
7inquisitive meExcellently executed. Spot on with characterisations and dialouge and descriptions were good! Well done!
10/6/2005 c1
16Maria14
Soo I've just been looking through old stories on the website, mostly because I'm bored. But this is a cool story. I liked it a lot. Good job.
16Maria14Soo I've just been looking through old stories on the website, mostly because I'm bored. But this is a cool story. I liked it a lot. Good job.
9/10/2005 c1 lore
you should totaly finish ur story!
you should totaly finish ur story!
7/18/2005 c1 meg
you have a knack for writing. this was well written and i hope you write other stories
you have a knack for writing. this was well written and i hope you write other stories
5/15/2005 c1 lorelai elizabeth halliwell
uh. good writing. i didnt actually like the whole lorelai pregnant with chris's baby. im glad luke was there to help. i was really hoping God impregnated her, not chris. but whatevs. keep up the good work.
uh. good writing. i didnt actually like the whole lorelai pregnant with chris's baby. im glad luke was there to help. i was really hoping God impregnated her, not chris. but whatevs. keep up the good work.
1/24/2005 c1
1hollyfan4eva
That can't be the end! I want to know what happens! Please write more! You have a great talent.
~Jenny
1hollyfan4evaThat can't be the end! I want to know what happens! Please write more! You have a great talent.
~Jenny
1/5/2005 c1 life-within
Hi! I really loved this story! I'd love it if you could write a second chapter :) *pretty-please* :)
Hi! I really loved this story! I'd love it if you could write a second chapter :) *pretty-please* :)
7/14/2004 c1
30gilmoregirl1979
okay i'm probably not the first... but here goes
I HATE CHRISTOPHER, he is an A**,
i do find the situation believeable (in some bozro universe AU way) and that luke's reaction while hurt, he would be there for her no matter what (Doesn't matter what time it is , i'll always be around! I love that line...)
any way the thing that would make it better, perfect in my book... is if it was Luke's baby, (when,... what,... how ...who?; with YOU, Burger Boy, don't you remember that late night in the diner with irish coffee! I get a bun in the oven to go with my late night coffee run! hehehehe)
(Ducks eggs and tomatoes) SORRY! Old habits die hard, yes it is refreshing not to have them rip each others clothes off, (Luke, I love you; well I love you too; let's do it; kay!)
anyway, feel free to review my review, debate, discuss talk amongst yourselves...
30gilmoregirl1979okay i'm probably not the first... but here goes
I HATE CHRISTOPHER, he is an A**,
i do find the situation believeable (in some bozro universe AU way) and that luke's reaction while hurt, he would be there for her no matter what (Doesn't matter what time it is , i'll always be around! I love that line...)
any way the thing that would make it better, perfect in my book... is if it was Luke's baby, (when,... what,... how ...who?; with YOU, Burger Boy, don't you remember that late night in the diner with irish coffee! I get a bun in the oven to go with my late night coffee run! hehehehe)
(Ducks eggs and tomatoes) SORRY! Old habits die hard, yes it is refreshing not to have them rip each others clothes off, (Luke, I love you; well I love you too; let's do it; kay!)
anyway, feel free to review my review, debate, discuss talk amongst yourselves...
6/24/2004 c1 lnlgg
Nic fic. Can't think of much you could do in a sequel, but if its this good I know its worth reading.
Nic fic. Can't think of much you could do in a sequel, but if its this good I know its worth reading.
2/19/2003 c1 Michelle
WRITE MORE! This is really good, and I know that I would DEFINATLY read more if you wrote more. Michelle
WRITE MORE! This is really good, and I know that I would DEFINATLY read more if you wrote more. Michelle
