for Feelings revealed3/12/2005 c1
3VampiressBeauty20
Oh my gosh that was very sweet! Thank you so much
for the review, it means alot.You'll have to wait
and see what happens next in Heart Of An Angel,
Ksaturn
3VampiressBeauty20Oh my gosh that was very sweet! Thank you so much
for the review, it means alot.You'll have to wait
and see what happens next in Heart Of An Angel,
Ksaturn
2/27/2005 c1
26griffin-queen-of-silver-skies
AW ^_^ this was so kawaii...this is exactly what should happen at the end of the show...but NO he has to be all "this is my destiny" like that. oh well, very well written, i enjoyed reading this being that i am a yami/tea obsessor. keep up the good work ^^
l8erz!
26griffin-queen-of-silver-skiesAW ^_^ this was so kawaii...this is exactly what should happen at the end of the show...but NO he has to be all "this is my destiny" like that. oh well, very well written, i enjoyed reading this being that i am a yami/tea obsessor. keep up the good work ^^
l8erz!
2/14/2005 c1
5Xeper
This story has potential, it really does. I see you switched from script format so that's good. I would fix it though, seeing how doesn't accept script anymore and just to be on the safe side. Hmm...on a scale of 1-5, I give you a 3 (F.Y.I-I am currently in a college English Class, so forgive me if I seem a little nitty-gritty about formatting and grammar ^_~. But as I said before, this story has potential so keep going! ^_^
5XeperThis story has potential, it really does. I see you switched from script format so that's good. I would fix it though, seeing how doesn't accept script anymore and just to be on the safe side. Hmm...on a scale of 1-5, I give you a 3 (F.Y.I-I am currently in a college English Class, so forgive me if I seem a little nitty-gritty about formatting and grammar ^_~. But as I said before, this story has potential so keep going! ^_^
2/13/2005 c1
34imagines writes
Well... O.o This was a bit confusing, because it started out in chatspeak (which you need to change, because FFnet frowns on it for some reason), then switched to normal writing...
Other than that, it's an okay story. :) I'd give it a 2.7 out of 5.
-Kat-chan
34imagines writesWell... O.o This was a bit confusing, because it started out in chatspeak (which you need to change, because FFnet frowns on it for some reason), then switched to normal writing...
Other than that, it's an okay story. :) I'd give it a 2.7 out of 5.
-Kat-chan
