for His Story History11/11/2012 c1 
11Serendipithy
This story deserves more reviews, if not just for the fact that you took in Souta's point of view (which is rare enough.)
It's always a question of which era Kagome will remain in after the jewel completes, and it's always sad when she ends up choosing the past. I really like this ending, as it's bittersweet; it doesn't leave a completely happy ending where Kagome ends up living as long as Inuyasha or Sesshomaru (or whoever she marries), but it leaves an open interpretation of what she's doing in the past.
I can't believe I haven't written a review for this before, as I've had this fic in my favorites for quite some time. xD
11SerendipithyThis story deserves more reviews, if not just for the fact that you took in Souta's point of view (which is rare enough.)
It's always a question of which era Kagome will remain in after the jewel completes, and it's always sad when she ends up choosing the past. I really like this ending, as it's bittersweet; it doesn't leave a completely happy ending where Kagome ends up living as long as Inuyasha or Sesshomaru (or whoever she marries), but it leaves an open interpretation of what she's doing in the past.
I can't believe I haven't written a review for this before, as I've had this fic in my favorites for quite some time. xD
4/2/2009 c1 midnightwaters
I agree with you: there's not nearly enough Souta fics to go around. Or Higurashi family fics, in general. Nice story.
I agree with you: there's not nearly enough Souta fics to go around. Or Higurashi family fics, in general. Nice story.
1/9/2007 c1 3kokoronagomu
faith is the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of realities though not beheld.~ heb. 11:1
3kokoronagomufaith is the assured expectation of things hoped for, the evident demonstration of realities though not beheld.~ heb. 11:1
3/28/2006 c1 11leian
That was great! You brought out the bond of siblings between Souta and Kagome very well, leaving sweet melancholy behind.
11leianThat was great! You brought out the bond of siblings between Souta and Kagome very well, leaving sweet melancholy behind.
3/23/2006 c1 Lou
Wow. This was just...beyond WOW. It was excellent-you're right, there isn't enough Souta Higurashi! (What is it with me, these days? All these sad, bittersweet one-shots are really killing my fluffy, sappy heart!)
'Are you happy Kagome?'
Awesome. And that's all I can say, sadly. ...Awesome. The best, best, best. You're an excellent writer, and this just...it's another one of those quiet, take-over moments that leaves you stunned and hurting, and you're not sure why, other than...it was all worth it. ^^ Great job. I loved it.
Wow. This was just...beyond WOW. It was excellent-you're right, there isn't enough Souta Higurashi! (What is it with me, these days? All these sad, bittersweet one-shots are really killing my fluffy, sappy heart!)
'Are you happy Kagome?'
Awesome. And that's all I can say, sadly. ...Awesome. The best, best, best. You're an excellent writer, and this just...it's another one of those quiet, take-over moments that leaves you stunned and hurting, and you're not sure why, other than...it was all worth it. ^^ Great job. I loved it.
2/4/2006 c1 17tonraq
I just reread this. It tugs at the heartstrings; it's beautiful. I love your writing.
17tonraqI just reread this. It tugs at the heartstrings; it's beautiful. I love your writing.
6/8/2005 c1 9Greenaleydis
That was amazing. I love the way you wrote this - "Bark shouldn't peel back in an even square. There shouldn't be faded writing on the smooth trunk under the bark." Once again, I am glad to be a proud fan or yours. And you know what is funny? I found this on someone else's favorites page, and it sounded interesting, so I clicked on it. When I saw the author, I almost laughed. Either you are very popular, or it really is a small world after all!
Keep writing!
-Amu-
9GreenaleydisThat was amazing. I love the way you wrote this - "Bark shouldn't peel back in an even square. There shouldn't be faded writing on the smooth trunk under the bark." Once again, I am glad to be a proud fan or yours. And you know what is funny? I found this on someone else's favorites page, and it sounded interesting, so I clicked on it. When I saw the author, I almost laughed. Either you are very popular, or it really is a small world after all!
Keep writing!
-Amu-
6/4/2005 c1 10Shoomy2003
You are a very talented writer! This story was wonderful, and you display emotions so easily and languidly. Hoo-finally, someone on here who can write well!
10Shoomy2003You are a very talented writer! This story was wonderful, and you display emotions so easily and languidly. Hoo-finally, someone on here who can write well!
4/17/2005 c1 15Shidoni8
eep, sweet! i am going on a reading of all ure stories binge thing... yeah, that was really sweet with souta and the 'his own story to live' that's true of all of us, and i will never forget that!
15Shidoni8eep, sweet! i am going on a reading of all ure stories binge thing... yeah, that was really sweet with souta and the 'his own story to live' that's true of all of us, and i will never forget that!
4/12/2005 c1 fluffyfledgling
Oh hey, I remember this (but the question is, od you remember me?)...I came across it after it was added to "A little piece of perfection" C2 group. Anyways, its awesome. No, there aren't enough Souta stories.
Oh hey, I remember this (but the question is, od you remember me?)...I came across it after it was added to "A little piece of perfection" C2 group. Anyways, its awesome. No, there aren't enough Souta stories.
4/12/2005 c1 Ayjah
Wow I love this story. You really do not think about whether or not she would come back and what would be remembered :)
Wow I love this story. You really do not think about whether or not she would come back and what would be remembered :)
3/2/2005 c1 vic
i really like it it shows the dedication that souta had for his sister but when he found what he was looking for, he finally was happy
i really like it it shows the dedication that souta had for his sister but when he found what he was looking for, he finally was happy