for Immortals: Entering the Game7/6/2001 c1 me
cool
cool
6/8/2001 c1 
2welty69
a very good storie so far. The first chapter went well, and then the rest just went just like a TV show. Did you write for one, or get a good beta reader. It is awesome so far. I would love for you to keep going with the storyline. I wnat to find out if Genna takes a head or not.
2welty69a very good storie so far. The first chapter went well, and then the rest just went just like a TV show. Did you write for one, or get a good beta reader. It is awesome so far. I would love for you to keep going with the storyline. I wnat to find out if Genna takes a head or not.
3/21/2001 c1 Rogue Knight1
Very good, as a beginning. I enjoyed it a great deal, and hope to see the series continue.
Very good, as a beginning. I enjoyed it a great deal, and hope to see the series continue.