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4/20/2010 c2 2SeasideFantasy
Gosh, you're so good! *Crys about her own lack of writing skill*

You are still writing these one shots, right?
12/28/2008 c2 Shannon
Your stories are great even if they are short. i think people should write more about dearka and miriallia, they are sadly overlooked in stories
1/8/2007 c2 Firiel
For all that it's so short, I like the second chapter the best. Short, poignant, and unforgettable. You rock better than a bucket of... rocks? XD
9/17/2005 c2 Misteline
You really showed what was going on inside of Dearka's mind very well. :D I loved this even though it was kind of short.
9/1/2005 c2 11Sankou-chan
I love the DxM pairing! Nice chappie could be a little longer but it had a lot of emotion in it. Great job!
8/31/2005 c1 87Phoenyxx
Heh~ This story was exceptionally sweet...

Torii and Haro is like a representation of Kira and Lacus, where Kira won't talk to Lacus D~

Or maybe I'm just looking at this story from the wrong angle, neh? (Though, the information you provided us does fit together in that way...)

Either way, whether I was wrong or right, I know for sure that I enjoyed reading this :D (Hahaha, judging by the silly smile on my face ;o)

~Spyrit
2/26/2005 c1 momo
i hate this story ! so stupid !
2/24/2005 c1 5randombill21
LoL! At first, it SEEMED like it was a Pink-chan/Torii piece, but then, I realized that Lacus kept looking to Kira, and maybe, she thought that she will be able to heal/understand Kira better with time? I dunno, somethin' like that. Good job!
2/24/2005 c1 48psychedelic aya
...That was nice. Twas very much relaxing and amusing! (I can just SEE Lacus complaining about that to Athrun.) :P Heheh. I love the way you did it. Its so full of meaning too. :D

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