for Never Cut Twice5/13 c7 Zachary916
I love it when one or more of the sand siblings make an appearance. I really enjoy the way you write them. Looking forward to reading the rest!
I love it when one or more of the sand siblings make an appearance. I really enjoy the way you write them. Looking forward to reading the rest!
5/9 c29 kyzalon
Now THIS is how a fanfic is done! I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics (trust me I have) especially ones where Naruto somehow leaves Konoha but this one's the BEST I've ever read! Well, that's an understatement, it's the best FANFIC I've ever read! Great job!
Now THIS is how a fanfic is done! I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics (trust me I have) especially ones where Naruto somehow leaves Konoha but this one's the BEST I've ever read! Well, that's an understatement, it's the best FANFIC I've ever read! Great job!
5/7 c7 Guest
"(Author twiddles his thumbs innocently)"
AARGH! My immersion is melting away as we speak! Keep the author's notes for the author's notes section!
"(Author twiddles his thumbs innocently)"
AARGH! My immersion is melting away as we speak! Keep the author's notes for the author's notes section!
24/29 c7 Alviniju
It was also good, I like seing techniques explained, evin if I already knew, I feel like the author is not pulling things out of their
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It was also good, I like seing techniques explained, evin if I already knew, I feel like the author is not pulling things out of their
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4/27 c26 onijutsu
I like the slow relationship Naruto and Temari are stepping into, you are doing a good job so far!
I like the slow relationship Naruto and Temari are stepping into, you are doing a good job so far!
4/27 c23 onijutsu
This is so much fun to read! I literally can't stop smiling when Itachi, Kisame, and everyone are together, this is the most fun I have EVER had reading a story and cannot thank you enough for sharing this with everyone, you have done such an amazing job!
"Yes indeed…your sausage nunchaku are quite fearsome, but they are no match for The Pickle of DOOM"
Enough said.
You sir/mam are the greatest.
This is so much fun to read! I literally can't stop smiling when Itachi, Kisame, and everyone are together, this is the most fun I have EVER had reading a story and cannot thank you enough for sharing this with everyone, you have done such an amazing job!
"Yes indeed…your sausage nunchaku are quite fearsome, but they are no match for The Pickle of DOOM"
Enough said.
You sir/mam are the greatest.
4/26 c15 onijutsu
This is one of the coolest stories I have read, seriously, you have done an amazing job so far!
This is one of the coolest stories I have read, seriously, you have done an amazing job so far!
4/26 c11 onijutsu
Alright, after reading this awesome chapter I think I get what I was trying to describe about the previous chapter. A few chapters ago when Naruto was in wave he said he needed to not fake becoming someone, but to stop hiding behind his facade and show who he really is. When Naruto became ruthless towards the leaf nin that he knew and grew up with, that is when this story stopped being a parallel with cannon and other stories where in the end in some way Naruto is always loyal to the leaf. With that change came a huge darker tint to the story that gives it a very cool view and feel.
It's cool to see the ruthless nukenin that was always inside Naruto only being shadowed by a loud and brash facade.
I like where you are taking this so far and look forward to reading more.
Alright, after reading this awesome chapter I think I get what I was trying to describe about the previous chapter. A few chapters ago when Naruto was in wave he said he needed to not fake becoming someone, but to stop hiding behind his facade and show who he really is. When Naruto became ruthless towards the leaf nin that he knew and grew up with, that is when this story stopped being a parallel with cannon and other stories where in the end in some way Naruto is always loyal to the leaf. With that change came a huge darker tint to the story that gives it a very cool view and feel.
It's cool to see the ruthless nukenin that was always inside Naruto only being shadowed by a loud and brash facade.
I like where you are taking this so far and look forward to reading more.
4/26 c9 onijutsu
i am still really liking the story however one thing really really threw me off. When Naruto went for Ino severing her spinal cord and paralyzing her. I really don't have the right word to describe how I reacted to that, it was ... something that completely changed the tone/emotion of the story in one sentence.
It's hard to explain this because yes, this is a story about ninja and death and hurting people, but the whole scenario, Naruto's out of character personality, all of these just clicked into something that this story has not shown yet, and then it was gone in the next sentence.
I will think on this a little more, perhaps this was just your way of slowing putting your tint on the shade of the story you are creating, if that is the case then I will comment on this in further chapters if I make a connection.
i am still really liking the story however one thing really really threw me off. When Naruto went for Ino severing her spinal cord and paralyzing her. I really don't have the right word to describe how I reacted to that, it was ... something that completely changed the tone/emotion of the story in one sentence.
It's hard to explain this because yes, this is a story about ninja and death and hurting people, but the whole scenario, Naruto's out of character personality, all of these just clicked into something that this story has not shown yet, and then it was gone in the next sentence.
I will think on this a little more, perhaps this was just your way of slowing putting your tint on the shade of the story you are creating, if that is the case then I will comment on this in further chapters if I make a connection.