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I HATE YOU! how could you leave us with a six year cliffy on such a BRILLIANT story? :'((
I HATE YOU! how could you leave us with a six year cliffy on such a BRILLIANT story? :'((
4/29/2010 c11 
25done.with.marblesxx
Aw, really? You plan on twelve chapters and stop at eleven? Do you purposely wish to make readers writhe in anguish or something? I want the twelfth chapter! _
On another note, this is a really cute story although sometimes the dialogue sounds awkward. Like, feel free to add contractions in your dialogue because most people talk like that. :]
25done.with.marblesxxAw, really? You plan on twelve chapters and stop at eleven? Do you purposely wish to make readers writhe in anguish or something? I want the twelfth chapter! _
On another note, this is a really cute story although sometimes the dialogue sounds awkward. Like, feel free to add contractions in your dialogue because most people talk like that. :]
4/1/2010 c11 4Reever Rayne
You cant leave us hanging!you have to finish this
gosh this is just wonderful!
4Reever RayneYou cant leave us hanging!you have to finish this
gosh this is just wonderful!
1/3/2010 c11 breakaway1513gmail.com
are u ever going to finish this, cuz it was good, but you just stopped... and that kinda sux
are u ever going to finish this, cuz it was good, but you just stopped... and that kinda sux
9/25/2009 c11 Lady Cecilia
remove the accent, it's distracting. I very much like your story though! I hope you get e chance to wrap it up eventually!
with luck and love
-Lady C
remove the accent, it's distracting. I very much like your story though! I hope you get e chance to wrap it up eventually!
with luck and love
-Lady C
8/24/2009 c2 Llonnabear
BRILLIANT! This whole story is absoloutley phenominal! BRAVO!You should tuley consider pursuing a career in writing. TERRIFIC!
BRILLIANT! This whole story is absoloutley phenominal! BRAVO!You should tuley consider pursuing a career in writing. TERRIFIC!
8/19/2009 c11 V
I think this was the most accurate description of Fleur with respect to JKR's writing. I can't wait for the next part (And please make more ! Just one more wouldn't do justice to their love story. I would love to read about their wedding and the kids and how they spend their life :o) )
I think this was the most accurate description of Fleur with respect to JKR's writing. I can't wait for the next part (And please make more ! Just one more wouldn't do justice to their love story. I would love to read about their wedding and the kids and how they spend their life :o) )
8/19/2009 c11 doctor.seuss
i have to say that i liked Fleur better when she had no "accent". it's hard not to associate her with the annoying version of Fleur in the Half-Blood Prince (well, annoying until the end :)). Plus, since it is from her point of view, she obviously wouldn't see herself with an accent, would she?
hope you update soon! :)
i have to say that i liked Fleur better when she had no "accent". it's hard not to associate her with the annoying version of Fleur in the Half-Blood Prince (well, annoying until the end :)). Plus, since it is from her point of view, she obviously wouldn't see herself with an accent, would she?
hope you update soon! :)
8/2/2009 c11 mak0-ch1
If you ever decide to continue and update, I'd be one of the reader who'd be thoroughly thrilled that you did.
...so until then, I'll be waiting (though I'm not entirely sure it will come to anything...it's been over 3 years...i hope you do create a next chapter)
toodles
If you ever decide to continue and update, I'd be one of the reader who'd be thoroughly thrilled that you did.
...so until then, I'll be waiting (though I'm not entirely sure it will come to anything...it's been over 3 years...i hope you do create a next chapter)
toodles
5/15/2009 c11 6bookwurm23
personally, I prefer it without the accent. It's not too bad in the Harry Potter books, because we rarely see her, but here we hear her all the time. I think that we know she has an accent, and it's a bit better left to the imagination. I like it with the accent too, however. It's just easier for you and the rest of us if you leave out the accents, in my opinion. But you did a good job with putting them there this chapter anyway!
Great chapter... I can see why Bill and Fleur like eachother now, and the thought that she was trying to get back at Bill by being sickeningly sweet was amusing. It really gave depth to her character, and it was an awesome idea. Great job! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
God bless,
bookwurm23
6bookwurm23personally, I prefer it without the accent. It's not too bad in the Harry Potter books, because we rarely see her, but here we hear her all the time. I think that we know she has an accent, and it's a bit better left to the imagination. I like it with the accent too, however. It's just easier for you and the rest of us if you leave out the accents, in my opinion. But you did a good job with putting them there this chapter anyway!
Great chapter... I can see why Bill and Fleur like eachother now, and the thought that she was trying to get back at Bill by being sickeningly sweet was amusing. It really gave depth to her character, and it was an awesome idea. Great job! I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
God bless,
bookwurm23
5/15/2009 c4 bookwurm23
I really like this story so far. I've never read a Fleur/Bill one before, so it's quite interesting to get a look in on how their lives might have been, you know? I really like your writing style so far, and I like Fleur better now that I can see a little into her life.
As for your survey, I found it on Star of the North's profile after reading one of her stories. I always check out good authors' favorites lists- there's bound to be something good on there, this being a prime example.
Great job and keep up the good work!
God bless,
bookwurm23
I really like this story so far. I've never read a Fleur/Bill one before, so it's quite interesting to get a look in on how their lives might have been, you know? I really like your writing style so far, and I like Fleur better now that I can see a little into her life.
As for your survey, I found it on Star of the North's profile after reading one of her stories. I always check out good authors' favorites lists- there's bound to be something good on there, this being a prime example.
Great job and keep up the good work!
God bless,
bookwurm23
4/17/2009 c10 11Fabulous and Feminist
*grins* I've been re-reading this and I think I love it even more this time round!
Please update for me (or yourself or someone else)! It's amazing and thats such a huge cliffy.
Please?
11Fabulous and Feminist*grins* I've been re-reading this and I think I love it even more this time round!
Please update for me (or yourself or someone else)! It's amazing and thats such a huge cliffy.
Please?
12/22/2008 c1 dawnyx
What an awesome start! I love how you build on the base of Fleur and Gabrielle's sibling relationship left in GOF.
What an awesome start! I love how you build on the base of Fleur and Gabrielle's sibling relationship left in GOF.