for Something about love11/4/2006 c16 Aphrodite Incarnate
I know that it’s a bit late to be commenting now, but I’m so glad that I stumbled upon your fiction when I did. It was a very pleasurable, engaging read. You have an insightful writing voice, and the dialogue between the characters is lively and realistic. I would’ve never even considered the notion of portraying Paris as harboring feelings for Andromache, but the relationship you’ve formed between them is convincing; judging from your beautiful description of her as a strong, dignified woman, it’s quite conceivable. I like also the set-up of your fiction, as a series of flashbacks going on in Hector’s head. Hector is a very insightful narrator, but this is because of your insightful writing! Bravo.
I’ve been able to sympathize with all of the characters, save Lena and Nikos. Lena, I loathe, because of her devious, cunning nature and her horrid actions. Same goes for Nikos ;)
Your English, by the way, is impeccable! I detected only a few grammatical errors here and there, but these are trivial, and you write better than many native speakers of English. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading any other fictions on Troy from you!
I know that it’s a bit late to be commenting now, but I’m so glad that I stumbled upon your fiction when I did. It was a very pleasurable, engaging read. You have an insightful writing voice, and the dialogue between the characters is lively and realistic. I would’ve never even considered the notion of portraying Paris as harboring feelings for Andromache, but the relationship you’ve formed between them is convincing; judging from your beautiful description of her as a strong, dignified woman, it’s quite conceivable. I like also the set-up of your fiction, as a series of flashbacks going on in Hector’s head. Hector is a very insightful narrator, but this is because of your insightful writing! Bravo.
I’ve been able to sympathize with all of the characters, save Lena and Nikos. Lena, I loathe, because of her devious, cunning nature and her horrid actions. Same goes for Nikos ;)
Your English, by the way, is impeccable! I detected only a few grammatical errors here and there, but these are trivial, and you write better than many native speakers of English. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading any other fictions on Troy from you!
9/27/2006 c1 
1Sappho33
Dear Idun03, I have read most of your work and I'm in love with your creativity. I'm almost to the end of this one and I don't want to finish it because I don't want it to end. Your ideas are fresh and original and I like that. I would love to read your randidion of the Iliad. I know that these take a lot of time and effert as I'm writing one mysef, but I realy enjoy your work and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything unitl now. I can't even tell that English is your second language.
Sappho
1Sappho33Dear Idun03, I have read most of your work and I'm in love with your creativity. I'm almost to the end of this one and I don't want to finish it because I don't want it to end. Your ideas are fresh and original and I like that. I would love to read your randidion of the Iliad. I know that these take a lot of time and effert as I'm writing one mysef, but I realy enjoy your work and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed anything unitl now. I can't even tell that English is your second language.
Sappho
6/6/2005 c16 Tiffany
This was an EXCELLENT story. I mean I loved your deeper insight and how everything hinted to the future. You are an EXCELLENT writer. Please continue to write such wonderful stories. You should really look into a career in writing or screenplay writing.
This was an EXCELLENT story. I mean I loved your deeper insight and how everything hinted to the future. You are an EXCELLENT writer. Please continue to write such wonderful stories. You should really look into a career in writing or screenplay writing.
6/6/2005 c16 2lilycup
This was a really nice ending! I enjoyed this story a lot, it was very original and was filled with great things. It was a pleasure to read this, thank you! :)
2lilycupThis was a really nice ending! I enjoyed this story a lot, it was very original and was filled with great things. It was a pleasure to read this, thank you! :)
6/6/2005 c16 14Priestess of the Myrmidon
Love it! Very nice ending to a very awsome story! You'd better write another story soon. ;) Love your writing tons. Keep up the good work.
~Priestess
14Priestess of the MyrmidonLove it! Very nice ending to a very awsome story! You'd better write another story soon. ;) Love your writing tons. Keep up the good work.
~Priestess
6/6/2005 c16 24Constant Distraction
You ended that perfectly. Perfectly. It was powerful...not much else to say, but I really loved it!
24Constant DistractionYou ended that perfectly. Perfectly. It was powerful...not much else to say, but I really loved it!
5/20/2005 c14 2lilycup
I LOVED reading the meeting of Paris and Andromache, and I'm so glad Paris likes Andromache because Hector wasn't showing her much attention.
I thought it was good to put Hector's thoughts on sleeping with his half-sister, I was curious as to how he would feel and I'm glad you added it :)
This was a really good chapter and I'm excited for the next one, so please update as soon as you can, but I understand you could be busy etc. :)
2lilycupI LOVED reading the meeting of Paris and Andromache, and I'm so glad Paris likes Andromache because Hector wasn't showing her much attention.
I thought it was good to put Hector's thoughts on sleeping with his half-sister, I was curious as to how he would feel and I'm glad you added it :)
This was a really good chapter and I'm excited for the next one, so please update as soon as you can, but I understand you could be busy etc. :)
5/20/2005 c14 Queen Arwen who is too lazy to log in
*gulp* PARIS AND ANDROMACHE? Oh my. That's...slightly disturbing, but I still love the story. That was a very dramatic chapter, beautifully written and suspenseful. I can't wait for more- if Lena hurts Hector, I think I'll have to find some way to torture her.
Great work! Update soon please!
*gulp* PARIS AND ANDROMACHE? Oh my. That's...slightly disturbing, but I still love the story. That was a very dramatic chapter, beautifully written and suspenseful. I can't wait for more- if Lena hurts Hector, I think I'll have to find some way to torture her.
Great work! Update soon please!
5/19/2005 c14 hecuba2
This story is refreshing that you brought the greek myth theme with sorcery, etc. in it. The movie didn't have any of this in it, so many fanfics miss this. Quite different. When you finish, I'd like to see a H/A sequel with new twists in it. Good job.
This story is refreshing that you brought the greek myth theme with sorcery, etc. in it. The movie didn't have any of this in it, so many fanfics miss this. Quite different. When you finish, I'd like to see a H/A sequel with new twists in it. Good job.
5/19/2005 c14 Gaby
WOW!, I can't believe Paris is in love with his brother's wife!, and lena, she's a sick witch!
I hope that at the end paris realizes he doesn't love Andromache, and Hector finally falls in love with her!
Loved this chapter! UPDATE SOON!
WOW!, I can't believe Paris is in love with his brother's wife!, and lena, she's a sick witch!
I hope that at the end paris realizes he doesn't love Andromache, and Hector finally falls in love with her!
Loved this chapter! UPDATE SOON!
5/19/2005 c14 HectorAnromachefan
what is wrong with that woman(Lena)...is she mentally sick or something? lying in bed with her half brother.THAT IS SICK!
I do hope this is H/A. i can't believe it. Paris was interested in Andromache. Come on!She's Hector's. I hope he eventually falls in love with her.
Other than that I'd have to say that u have an interesting plot going on. Can't wait till u update!
what is wrong with that woman(Lena)...is she mentally sick or something? lying in bed with her half brother.THAT IS SICK!
I do hope this is H/A. i can't believe it. Paris was interested in Andromache. Come on!She's Hector's. I hope he eventually falls in love with her.
Other than that I'd have to say that u have an interesting plot going on. Can't wait till u update!
5/18/2005 c14 14Priestess of the Myrmidon
*growls* Evil Lena! Evil, evil I say! Stupid **, why would she do that to someone like Hector? I'd rather marry him, or whatever, than kill him. Seriously, I think she has a problem! Oh, and by the way, good chapter, I love it!
~Priestess
14Priestess of the Myrmidon*growls* Evil Lena! Evil, evil I say! Stupid **, why would she do that to someone like Hector? I'd rather marry him, or whatever, than kill him. Seriously, I think she has a problem! Oh, and by the way, good chapter, I love it!
~Priestess
5/13/2005 c13 lily
so god I love it! please more!
so god I love it! please more!
5/12/2005 c13 Michelle
Damn, This is a good story. You have taken it to a whole new level. I love it. The twists and turns are great. I love how you hinted about Briseis' mother and greek and we all know about Briseis and Achilles. This is excellent. Please keep up the magnificent work and please update soon.
Damn, This is a good story. You have taken it to a whole new level. I love it. The twists and turns are great. I love how you hinted about Briseis' mother and greek and we all know about Briseis and Achilles. This is excellent. Please keep up the magnificent work and please update soon.
5/12/2005 c13 Gaby
this chapter was great!
I can't wait to see what happens...
Please update soon!
this chapter was great!
I can't wait to see what happens...
Please update soon!