for Where in the World is Harry Potter?3/28 c16 Jetor greichmann
I loved the story, but not so much the end.
But thats probly because im a tad slow in the head.
I loved the story, but not so much the end.
But thats probly because im a tad slow in the head.
3/1 c1 Emelia P
I think harry potter will return, then the dark lord can have him. HaHaHaha. Molly weasly kills Bellatrix la strange, and Nymphadora dies. Hermione and ron get married, harry potter and jinnie Weasly get married too. Deathly hallows is epic!
Thank you J. , I love the Harry potter movies, and I wish there were more. I play harry potter at school, and I love playing hermione granger. I suit her lots! I love reading, writing and studying.
Kind regards,
Emelia petchell
I think harry potter will return, then the dark lord can have him. HaHaHaha. Molly weasly kills Bellatrix la strange, and Nymphadora dies. Hermione and ron get married, harry potter and jinnie Weasly get married too. Deathly hallows is epic!
Thank you J. , I love the Harry potter movies, and I wish there were more. I play harry potter at school, and I love playing hermione granger. I suit her lots! I love reading, writing and studying.
Kind regards,
Emelia petchell
2/28 c1 
3Saienai
Thank you for writing something like this. I had read it originally well over a year ago, and now that I have my own account on FF decided to leave a review (was re-watching princess bride and remembered the fanfic that actually led me to the movie)
All the pranks were well done, all the interactions between characters well thought out. Harry's path through the story and the way he plays with all the other characters had me on the floor laughing.
Just about every single one of your stories is good, but this one is the one that led me to them.
If I have time, I will definitely re-read all of the stories, but unfortunately between university and my own story that I am writing there is precious little time left to sit down and read. Still, sometime I will. Have already read them twice before so another time is quite possible.
Saienai
3SaienaiThank you for writing something like this. I had read it originally well over a year ago, and now that I have my own account on FF decided to leave a review (was re-watching princess bride and remembered the fanfic that actually led me to the movie)
All the pranks were well done, all the interactions between characters well thought out. Harry's path through the story and the way he plays with all the other characters had me on the floor laughing.
Just about every single one of your stories is good, but this one is the one that led me to them.
If I have time, I will definitely re-read all of the stories, but unfortunately between university and my own story that I am writing there is precious little time left to sit down and read. Still, sometime I will. Have already read them twice before so another time is quite possible.
Saienai
2/28 c16 Deathday Party Planner
Thank you for a very enjoyable and amusing story! I look forward to reading the sequel hoping it produces a ship and some adventure for Harry. Again, thanks for sharing!
Thank you for a very enjoyable and amusing story! I look forward to reading the sequel hoping it produces a ship and some adventure for Harry. Again, thanks for sharing!
1/19 c2 SillyJily
Oh my god I thought this story would bring out a chuckle or two, and I did at "impressive sized sexual aid", but bursted out laughing at "property of Severus Snape" can't wait to keep reading, fantastic story!
Oh my god I thought this story would bring out a chuckle or two, and I did at "impressive sized sexual aid", but bursted out laughing at "property of Severus Snape" can't wait to keep reading, fantastic story!
12/8/2012 c15 Justin
Holy sheeeeeit! Did not see that one coming! It reminds me of an episode of the Twilight Zone actually, where a magic trick being passed down through the ages was actually how the guy and his assistant switched into younger bodies to keep going.
Anyway, you're a great writer. The whole story surrounding the puppy was truly inspired. It's the kind of off-the-wall kookiness that makes the world of magic in Harry Potter great, crazy things being possible with no explanation given besides "magic". The only thing I find wierd is the lack of anything remotely like swearing. If you're against characters swearing that's fine, as long as you keep in mind that not swearing is out of character for some of them. The only other little problems are (1) that I've never seen any character use "like" as a placeholder like many teenagers do today, in the books or in fanfiction (e.g. "fended off like a hundred dementors") - it's a moment of perhaps inserting your own personal speech patterns into the characters' dialogue; and (2) along the same lines, you sometimes cut the subject out of a character's sentence, more than it's arguable for them to do.
Holy sheeeeeit! Did not see that one coming! It reminds me of an episode of the Twilight Zone actually, where a magic trick being passed down through the ages was actually how the guy and his assistant switched into younger bodies to keep going.
Anyway, you're a great writer. The whole story surrounding the puppy was truly inspired. It's the kind of off-the-wall kookiness that makes the world of magic in Harry Potter great, crazy things being possible with no explanation given besides "magic". The only thing I find wierd is the lack of anything remotely like swearing. If you're against characters swearing that's fine, as long as you keep in mind that not swearing is out of character for some of them. The only other little problems are (1) that I've never seen any character use "like" as a placeholder like many teenagers do today, in the books or in fanfiction (e.g. "fended off like a hundred dementors") - it's a moment of perhaps inserting your own personal speech patterns into the characters' dialogue; and (2) along the same lines, you sometimes cut the subject out of a character's sentence, more than it's arguable for them to do.
11/21/2012 c16 4Draco mudiliar
I enjoyed your fan fic from the start to the end and right now I am going to check the Sequel and I hope it is as interesting as this one...
Thank you for making me laugh...
4Draco mudiliarI enjoyed your fan fic from the start to the end and right now I am going to check the Sequel and I hope it is as interesting as this one...
Thank you for making me laugh...
11/21/2012 c15 Draco mudiliar
why he is after Tonks? I hope its not she he ends up I am not a fan of Harry/Tonks...
why he is after Tonks? I hope its not she he ends up I am not a fan of Harry/Tonks...
11/21/2012 c12 Draco mudiliar
oh oh oh he slept with all three Wonderful Harry hahahaa... and then confuse them superb hahaaa...
I am just loving this fic...
oh oh oh he slept with all three Wonderful Harry hahahaa... and then confuse them superb hahaaa...
I am just loving this fic...