for Remembrance of Peace4/7/2001 c2 
7Copperhead
This is really mediocre... it's almost all dialogue and there's very little characterization. You also needed someone to proofread it before you posted it; I found a lot of piddling gramattical and punctuation errors.
7CopperheadThis is really mediocre... it's almost all dialogue and there's very little characterization. You also needed someone to proofread it before you posted it; I found a lot of piddling gramattical and punctuation errors.