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4Red Phoenix Dragon
A sweet story but they could gotten together at the end of first year and Hermione could save Harry from the Dursleys and not told anyone particularly one nosy Headmaster.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please continue to write.
4Red Phoenix DragonA sweet story but they could gotten together at the end of first year and Hermione could save Harry from the Dursleys and not told anyone particularly one nosy Headmaster.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please continue to write.
11/3/2012 c1 9Videl Exumai
Hi, it’s Videl Exumai.
Aww, your story was so sweet. I'm a massive Michael Bolton Fan and during the reading of your story I was listening to his beautiful song: Now That I've Found You. That and the sheer happiness in your story nearly brought me to tears.
Loved It, Love Harry and Hermione (True Couple) Thanks again for a great brighter to a miserable day.
9Videl ExumaiHi, it’s Videl Exumai.
Aww, your story was so sweet. I'm a massive Michael Bolton Fan and during the reading of your story I was listening to his beautiful song: Now That I've Found You. That and the sheer happiness in your story nearly brought me to tears.
Loved It, Love Harry and Hermione (True Couple) Thanks again for a great brighter to a miserable day.
10/7/2012 c1 Guest
Your punctuation, or lack thereof, is atrocious.
Your comments in the middle of the text are distracting and, frankly, I don't care what you think when I'm attempting to read something that isn't all that good anyway.
You need to get a dictionary and learn how to use it. For instance 'bare with me' doesn't mean the same thing as 'bear with me', since I have no intention of taking off my clothes just because you are. And I was not aware a night could be faithful. I am guessing - though I could be wrong - that what you mean is 'fateful'.
On a scale of 1 to 5, with 5 being the highest, I'll have to give this a 1...it is, after all, boring, tiresome and cliched.
Your punctuation, or lack thereof, is atrocious.
Your comments in the middle of the text are distracting and, frankly, I don't care what you think when I'm attempting to read something that isn't all that good anyway.
You need to get a dictionary and learn how to use it. For instance 'bare with me' doesn't mean the same thing as 'bear with me', since I have no intention of taking off my clothes just because you are. And I was not aware a night could be faithful. I am guessing - though I could be wrong - that what you mean is 'fateful'.
On a scale of 1 to 5, with 5 being the highest, I'll have to give this a 1...it is, after all, boring, tiresome and cliched.
6/19/2012 c1 2Dark OriginVTX
Aww bless!
Such a sweet story.
Love Fluff H/Hr Forever!
Thanks for reviewing my story just had to return the kindness.
Thanks and great job
2Dark OriginVTXAww bless!
Such a sweet story.
Love Fluff H/Hr Forever!
Thanks for reviewing my story just had to return the kindness.
Thanks and great job
5/18/2011 c1 5Lalapaya
wow nice story, u should defenitely write a sequel. nice way of expressing yourself, btw!
5Lalapayawow nice story, u should defenitely write a sequel. nice way of expressing yourself, btw!
7/16/2010 c1 2Kisendi
Cute little story. You should think about continuing it. Hermione took the a bit too simply and easily but I liked it anyway.
2KisendiCute little story. You should think about continuing it. Hermione took the a bit too simply and easily but I liked it anyway.
8/30/2009 c1 14narugirl2003
Sequel please! Long live Harry and Hermione! One thing I have to say, watch out for spelling. Example, "Hermione what are you dong here?" It should be "Hermione what are you doing here?"
14narugirl2003Sequel please! Long live Harry and Hermione! One thing I have to say, watch out for spelling. Example, "Hermione what are you dong here?" It should be "Hermione what are you doing here?"