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7/28/2009 c1 105doc boy
very cute. i like it a lot. good job! =)
7/21/2009 c1 8sableye
This story was very good and romantic.

It was good that Harry and Hermione got together.

It was very good they loved each other so much.

Harry+Hermione is my favourite couple.

Keep up the good work.
5/21/2008 c1 4animegirl123454321
awesome but this part is to corny Hermione, ever since I first saw you it made my heart flutter. Your soft brown hair, your beautiful eyes, your perfect smile and your knowledge in wizardry.”
9/27/2007 c1 3AAML Lover
Ok it's a nice story but bit that sort of stuck out to me is that you need to say a bit more than just he/she says ellaborate on it a bit like say he said happily with a smile something like that ok. Please read mine :)

AAML Lover - Victoria
5/16/2007 c1 14Simpleguiltypleasures
Hi, I was just wondering, is it me or the story just has an open ended ending - leaves me hanging (Like Gakuen alice's ending)? Maybe the sequel would satisfy me. (",) You know the drill - Write a sequel!
4/30/2007 c1 dexterZ
nice but why does he need dumbledore's permission i mean is he his slave or something
3/5/2007 c1 Bookworm101
i like your story. But seriously dude, don't you know that Dumbledore dies in the 6th book?
3/3/2007 c1 Gundamknight
man its was about those two had confessed sheesh.

GK
12/15/2006 c1 21ninetailedbeast97
this is a cute cool story please make more Harry and Ginny forever
12/9/2006 c1 7crazygirl18
I like the story! im such a fan of the HP books. I loved ur story, nice work!
10/17/2006 c1 92good4evil2evil4u
i love, love, love this story! It is so swet. HarryHermione 4ever.
8/28/2006 c1 Anoh
Good Story, and I definitely prefer Harry&Hermione over Draco&Hermione. But didn't Dumbledore die in the 6th book?
7/27/2006 c1 1LostPoet
that was touching.yay romance
6/4/2006 c1 Martial Arts Girl
I LOVED IT! HARRY AND HERMIONE FOREVA!LOL!
4/7/2006 c1 1Lemon Larkspur
good story. good plot. but you should put descriptions on dialogues of the characters to give some emotions. for example: “I love you, Hermione Granger.” Harry says. you should include there how Harry say it and his facial expressions when saying it to give some emotions and feelings... the story is good... keep on writing... HArry and Hermione foerever!

Thanx for reviewing my fic

LunHerm
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