for Confessions in the Rain7/21/2009 c1
8sableye
This story was very good and romantic.
It was good that Harry and Hermione got together.
It was very good they loved each other so much.
Harry+Hermione is my favourite couple.
Keep up the good work.
8sableyeThis story was very good and romantic.
It was good that Harry and Hermione got together.
It was very good they loved each other so much.
Harry+Hermione is my favourite couple.
Keep up the good work.
5/21/2008 c1
4animegirl123454321
awesome but this part is to corny Hermione, ever since I first saw you it made my heart flutter. Your soft brown hair, your beautiful eyes, your perfect smile and your knowledge in wizardry.”
4animegirl123454321awesome but this part is to corny Hermione, ever since I first saw you it made my heart flutter. Your soft brown hair, your beautiful eyes, your perfect smile and your knowledge in wizardry.”
9/27/2007 c1
3AAML Lover
Ok it's a nice story but bit that sort of stuck out to me is that you need to say a bit more than just he/she says ellaborate on it a bit like say he said happily with a smile something like that ok. Please read mine :)
AAML Lover - Victoria
3AAML LoverOk it's a nice story but bit that sort of stuck out to me is that you need to say a bit more than just he/she says ellaborate on it a bit like say he said happily with a smile something like that ok. Please read mine :)
AAML Lover - Victoria
5/16/2007 c1
14Simpleguiltypleasures
Hi, I was just wondering, is it me or the story just has an open ended ending - leaves me hanging (Like Gakuen alice's ending)? Maybe the sequel would satisfy me. (",) You know the drill - Write a sequel!
14SimpleguiltypleasuresHi, I was just wondering, is it me or the story just has an open ended ending - leaves me hanging (Like Gakuen alice's ending)? Maybe the sequel would satisfy me. (",) You know the drill - Write a sequel!
4/30/2007 c1 dexterZ
nice but why does he need dumbledore's permission i mean is he his slave or something
nice but why does he need dumbledore's permission i mean is he his slave or something
3/5/2007 c1 Bookworm101
i like your story. But seriously dude, don't you know that Dumbledore dies in the 6th book?
i like your story. But seriously dude, don't you know that Dumbledore dies in the 6th book?
3/3/2007 c1 Gundamknight
man its was about those two had confessed sheesh.
GK
man its was about those two had confessed sheesh.
GK
12/9/2006 c1
7crazygirl18
I like the story! im such a fan of the HP books. I loved ur story, nice work!
7crazygirl18I like the story! im such a fan of the HP books. I loved ur story, nice work!
8/28/2006 c1 Anoh
Good Story, and I definitely prefer Harry&Hermione over Draco&Hermione. But didn't Dumbledore die in the 6th book?
Good Story, and I definitely prefer Harry&Hermione over Draco&Hermione. But didn't Dumbledore die in the 6th book?
4/7/2006 c1
1Lemon Larkspur
good story. good plot. but you should put descriptions on dialogues of the characters to give some emotions. for example: “I love you, Hermione Granger.” Harry says. you should include there how Harry say it and his facial expressions when saying it to give some emotions and feelings... the story is good... keep on writing... HArry and Hermione foerever!
Thanx for reviewing my fic
LunHerm
1Lemon Larkspurgood story. good plot. but you should put descriptions on dialogues of the characters to give some emotions. for example: “I love you, Hermione Granger.” Harry says. you should include there how Harry say it and his facial expressions when saying it to give some emotions and feelings... the story is good... keep on writing... HArry and Hermione foerever!
Thanx for reviewing my fic
LunHerm
