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3DaGunth
That was quite possibly the longest fight scene that I've ever seen done well. It had a good mix of descriptive action and emotional involvement- I know I'd never be able to write something like that. Kudos.
3DaGunthThat was quite possibly the longest fight scene that I've ever seen done well. It had a good mix of descriptive action and emotional involvement- I know I'd never be able to write something like that. Kudos.
12/27/2012 c1 18CuteVampireCollie
...This was so...amazing, heart-wrenching, beautifully written, most savage thing I have ever read. I agree with you completely on how Robin would fight harder to save her than he did in the cartoon. But he was so vicious yet in a way I think it was the only way to snap Terra free from Slade's control... ;n; Still doesn't change how flipping motherfreaking sad this was, though. I absolutely loved the depth, emotion and detail in this. I like really want a sequel. ;W; I also really like what you did with Terra's backstory. Just...so amazing and sad, truly. My words cannot suffice! DX
18CuteVampireCollie...This was so...amazing, heart-wrenching, beautifully written, most savage thing I have ever read. I agree with you completely on how Robin would fight harder to save her than he did in the cartoon. But he was so vicious yet in a way I think it was the only way to snap Terra free from Slade's control... ;n; Still doesn't change how flipping motherfreaking sad this was, though. I absolutely loved the depth, emotion and detail in this. I like really want a sequel. ;W; I also really like what you did with Terra's backstory. Just...so amazing and sad, truly. My words cannot suffice! DX
9/5/2012 c1 32Concolor44
"cacophonous apocalyptic eradication"
Oh, My Lord! That ... that phrase ... is just ...
Wow.
I am reminded of the work of Edward E. Smith, PhD, a prolific writer from science fiction's Golden Age. He had a way with hyperbole that I have admired for decades.
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Whoa.
"The thing I have, the thing that you lack so completely, is resolve Terra."
THAT, my friend, is just beautiful.
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...
Yes, I've been here. Have I ever!
This goes DIRECTLY to Favorites, not passing 'GO', but instead collecting 200 kudos. I mean, seriously ... one of the best stories I've read in a while.
Holy moly.
That was The Most Intense examination of Terra's mind and motivations that I've ever seen. Masterfully done! I'm something of a Terra fan myself, and ... well, now I can see that I only DABBLED with exploring her psyche. YOU, O Wordsmith, have achieved dominance!
Sitting here with a silly grin, in utter satisfaction, I salute you.
-Concolor44
32Concolor44"cacophonous apocalyptic eradication"
Oh, My Lord! That ... that phrase ... is just ...
Wow.
I am reminded of the work of Edward E. Smith, PhD, a prolific writer from science fiction's Golden Age. He had a way with hyperbole that I have admired for decades.
- - - - -
Whoa.
"The thing I have, the thing that you lack so completely, is resolve Terra."
THAT, my friend, is just beautiful.
- - - - -
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh...
Yes, I've been here. Have I ever!
This goes DIRECTLY to Favorites, not passing 'GO', but instead collecting 200 kudos. I mean, seriously ... one of the best stories I've read in a while.
Holy moly.
That was The Most Intense examination of Terra's mind and motivations that I've ever seen. Masterfully done! I'm something of a Terra fan myself, and ... well, now I can see that I only DABBLED with exploring her psyche. YOU, O Wordsmith, have achieved dominance!
Sitting here with a silly grin, in utter satisfaction, I salute you.
-Concolor44
8/2/2012 c1 3Daddy's Little Pyro
Man, this was crazy. But I loved every dark, twisted moment of it. Especially Robin. Robin kicking ** is always appreciated.
3Daddy's Little PyroMan, this was crazy. But I loved every dark, twisted moment of it. Especially Robin. Robin kicking ** is always appreciated.
6/30/2012 c1 En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha
Wonderfully written. I saw this recommended on a forum and decided to check it out. I personally didn't like Tera in the cartoon. But this adds so much depth to her character. I can't not like her at this point.
Thank you for the great read.
Wonderfully written. I saw this recommended on a forum and decided to check it out. I personally didn't like Tera in the cartoon. But this adds so much depth to her character. I can't not like her at this point.
Thank you for the great read.
5/26/2012 c1 14DarkMousyRulezAll
WOWOWOWOWOWOWWWWWWWW That was epic awesome sauce my friend.
Epic. Awesome Sauce.
plain and simple. Just like the cool and concise Boy Wonder here :D YAY Robin! ...but I do feel bad that he had to break all of his values to teach Terra that damn lesson she needed to learn.
GREAT GREAT GREAT! :D :D
and yes, it was angsty enough for me!
14DarkMousyRulezAllWOWOWOWOWOWOWWWWWWWW That was epic awesome sauce my friend.
Epic. Awesome Sauce.
plain and simple. Just like the cool and concise Boy Wonder here :D YAY Robin! ...but I do feel bad that he had to break all of his values to teach Terra that damn lesson she needed to learn.
GREAT GREAT GREAT! :D :D
and yes, it was angsty enough for me!
3/30/2012 c1 lokobookworm95
I really like this story! You wrote it so well, and you expressed Robin's thoughts so beautifully! Great job!
I really like this story! You wrote it so well, and you expressed Robin's thoughts so beautifully! Great job!
7/18/2011 c1 5Tikigod784
I read golden power quite a while ago now. It's a shame it took me so long to read this story, which is magnificent. You should write for DC. This is the kind of story arc any comic series could benefit from.
5Tikigod784I read golden power quite a while ago now. It's a shame it took me so long to read this story, which is magnificent. You should write for DC. This is the kind of story arc any comic series could benefit from.
4/15/2011 c1 Selias
WOW. I saw this on TVTrope's Teen Titans fanfic recs page, and I have to say, this is a freaking GREAT fic, dude. Really nice work!
WOW. I saw this on TVTrope's Teen Titans fanfic recs page, and I have to say, this is a freaking GREAT fic, dude. Really nice work!
3/22/2011 c1 AutunnoLuna
Epic... that's all I can say, I hate angst I really do, but this was a mindblowingly epic representation of Terra's twisted psyche and quite possibly the only robin you can truly call Batman's son.
Epic... that's all I can say, I hate angst I really do, but this was a mindblowingly epic representation of Terra's twisted psyche and quite possibly the only robin you can truly call Batman's son.
2/1/2011 c1 3ErmacTT
if only teen titans was a more serious show, if the damn censors didn't remove all blood and excessive violence...if only. this is the best fight...in the history of fights.
3ErmacTTif only teen titans was a more serious show, if the damn censors didn't remove all blood and excessive violence...if only. this is the best fight...in the history of fights.
8/15/2010 c1 3Karmic Acumen
I just want to say that I am amazed at how incredibly well you depicted the angst and at how abundant your vocabulary is.
I know it's years after you wrote it but still, I'm glad I stumbled upon it in my wanderings.
3Karmic AcumenI just want to say that I am amazed at how incredibly well you depicted the angst and at how abundant your vocabulary is.
I know it's years after you wrote it but still, I'm glad I stumbled upon it in my wanderings.